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Posted: 8 years ago
Ch 16
The juxtaposition you created in this update is superb Aishu.
His past is her present.
He has already been through what she is experiencing currently and therefore is probably the only one who understands the depths of her despair.
As I was reading this chapter I was so lost in the emotion you have woven that at some point I lost the what's and the why's and the how's of their current dilemma. I lost the sense of urgency to know the reason for Geet's blindness or how Maan and she came to be married or how Maan overcame his guilt and depression.That no longer was the important point.
I just want to see the strength of their relationship carrying them through this storm they are facing. The beauty of your words weaving the magic of strong emotional ties that can't let go no matter how bad the situation gets.

I had a lump in my throat throughout this chapter and yet there is this unbreakable thread of hope that makes me want to see the Happily ever after of this story😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
Just read the whole chapters in one go,awesome write,waiting eagerly for the next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thap thap thap.
Naye dhage ki opening ceremony pesh ki jaaye
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional part
Maan thinks because him his parents died...Geet tries to bring out from that guilt trip bit she couldn't ..dev relationship with Priya broke up...
Present maan made Geet tell what bothering her...Geet let out her fears ...maan assured her he wl ne there with her every step bit Geet didn't have enough courage to fight... eagerly waiting for the part
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Posted: 8 years ago
And we move on....😳

THREAD 2


Thank You All for liking and commenting on this story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part-16
Past & present contradict with each-other so much. Aish i love it so much❤️.
Both have been through a condition where coming back to themselves seems pointless as guilt had burdened them so much.
Earlier it was maan who was in guilt for loosing his parent now it's geet who ain't able to conceive & is blind.
Earlier geet wants maan to let go of what happen because there are certain things in life we can't control now it's maan who wants to help her out from her miseries.
I'm waiting to know how geet helps out maan in past & what lead them to the present situation.

PS. Maan's father is dead but his mother is still alive(as it was mentioned in the previous update she's in coma) or she's dead too?
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Posted: 8 years ago
painful update .
in past geet maan ko console kar rehi thi aur in present maan geet ko . feeling bad for my maaneet .both are in worst situation ...and the truth is that they need each other to stay strong ...but maan was pushing geet away in his guilt and now geet is pushing maan away because of her helplessness . continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
part 16
they are hurt beyond anything...
cont soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
chap 13
sorry for going missing
btw whats happened to the kitten DP although the new one is really pretty 😳

It was destiny, you know me going missing at chapter 13 that is😆
and you don't need to wonder for long, the answer is in the first line only: BRADFORD🤢
i absolutely destest that place, well for starters the people there are backdated and orthodox, irrespective of their origin. People there breed of cultural bull, sorry for my lashout but ask anyone in Britain and they'd say the same. Rest of britain would marry girls out of it but never marry into it, by never i don't really mean the stone written types lol. so to each to their own.
Its a known fact that the mums marry their sons to girls and then either make their life a living hell, (kitchen becoming life kinda thing) or divorce them. Yep i have a personal grudge too as you can probaly tell, my sister was married into such an family who actually need lessons on equality and general humanity. omg I'm ranting aint I😳, sorry but I absolutely hate the town for its people

now thats off my chest, lets get to the update😃
Geet's advised to Dev is right, i'm glad he decided to act along with it. As for Maaneet, i so love the comfortness they have awww😳 They always had a strong foundation but now its seems to be growing deeper and stronger. theres this gush gushy feeling at the pit, too happy almost as if warning me that something will go wrong, tell me it isn't
there you go Rishi is here, wrong has happened. Me and my sixth sense 😆 although here its not so funny but it feel good to read about their happy times especially with their present being so rueful

Naina and Maan's little sqibble makes the heavy atmosphere a little light, i suppose Geet being bed bound brings in a lot of issues. i for one am glad that Maan is there for her, helping her realise her importance which has obviously floundered with her current state


Answer to your note: whats there to be scared of😲, its only little old me😆 and maybe a handful of my weird things 😉

btw its Sophie with a new idenity 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
chap 14

Rishi seems like a genuinely nice guy but i love Maan with Geet, sorry Rishi but you'll need to be fishing elsewhere 😉😆

Pebbled pathway, as nice as it sounds. Its not that fun to walk on, especially with dollies and then as a child i used to always fall and end up with a bad gash but that being said i love the picture you painted with the Yorkshire village; hills, sun and the summers day. Rishi and Geet get along fine, absolutely liking their friendship. I suppose the awkwardness has now dissolved between then two

Ahh a jealous maan, why is it so endearing to think of him like that. I do love a good jealous scene 😆 he seems to be placing Rishi in his place with that 'Wait' and that 'you'll do what you're told' attitude, o i hate that attitude generally but with Maan however 😳 its different😆

i am liking this, out in the open like to hell with this, he's just gonna tell her how it is 😆 oh finally no more cat and mouse but rather ? ok i don't know ehat the opposite would be, yep for the first time i'll shut up for a sec only to reopen my mouth the next😆
the i love you scene was so awww 😳

whats happening now, seriously you need to stop this although i reckon its too late to say this now since you've finished the FF lol but i don't like this high and low thing, one minute a big fat aww smile and then the sad its either o in shock or ohhh in sympathy 😕

once again sorry but i read you at nights these days since im super busy in life, will finish soon though (hopefully)

thanks Kawaii

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