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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#831

part 16 - both past & present were painful. in past maan held himself guilty for being the cause for his parents death and in present geet held herself guilty for ruining maan's life that she could not give child to maan. he love brought him back to normalcy in the past. hope geet too soon come out of her guilt with maan's love.

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#832

awesome

maneet's journey is so tough

I hope they'll cross all the hurdles

cont soon

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#833

Awesome... Superb...

Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm...

Continue soon...

Everyone is fighting with their own grievances n trying to come out of it...

Maan went into his shell... Feeling guilty...

Dev is overworked n laden with all the responsibility of the family..

Dadi is fell sick ... She couldn't handle such a blow in this age...

Geet let out all she had in her ... All she was going through ... Her hurt , her fears ...

Maan supporting her n encouraging to fight it out ...

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#834

Fabulous update. In the past Maan was shattered and blamed himself for his parent's demise. Dev and Dadima too were suffering. In the present Maan is always there for Geet and she fears her insecurity would spoil their life . Loved it. Waiting for next.

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priyasree

@priyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#835

Amazing , emotional n wonderful update

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Anitha Nallasivam

@anitha_tooty

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#836

super update ...

but dont take much tym for nxt one plzzz

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#837

Hey di read both d updates aur it made me cry buckets 😭 but di i just love aur u leave me in awe for the love that maaneet share wid each other aur the way there love is just increasing aur bonding them together wid this strong emotion of love . Di i just have nothing else to say but eagerly waiting for d next update 😊

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#838

Ch 13

When I read this chapter I was on a vacation myself and loved reading about their vacation while I was on chutti😉

Somehow as I was sitting on the tall tall tall bed in the log cabin we had rented and reading this chapter I felt like I had entered the story myself, especially as I stood there admiring my physical surroundings and then read your description of their vacation home.😛

Dev and Priya😲

I like it. I like it very much😆

Kitna kuch hua iss chapter mein.

But the best part was that Maan stopped being ambiguous and claimed loudly that Geet was his girfriend. Baap re Geet ke saath saath hume bhi kitna intezar karvaya Maan ne

I loved the easy camaraderie that Maan and Naina share and loved even more the hot equation that Maan and Geet share in spite of all their current problems😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#839

Ch 14

Waah waah waah.

What a chapter sirjee. Dil khush kar diya👏

The jealousy and the intense confession was just superb. I was grinning even as I turned to mush. Once he decided she was his that was it.

He announced it firmly to everyone.

I love a firm decisive man.😉

Learning a person through sensory touch aka the mind's eye is far more memorable than just looking at a person I think and you portrayed that beautifully😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#840

Ch 15

Everybody has days where they wonder what is 'happy'

Where we wonder if we will ever find that happy place ever again.

When you are crushed under the weight of guilt or emotionally crippling sadness and feel like you will never get out from under it.

My heart squeezed painfully for Maan and Geet, coz they and their problems are the manifestations of our reality.

But time and again I have been told... this too shall pass...and though i have always hated the person saying it and that particular sentiment, it has always come true. The dark clouds have always passed. Some faster some a lot slower,,,but pass they did.

Now I am just waiting to see how Maan and Geet will find their happy place again.

And I trust your amazing writing to do the job wonderfully Aishu😃