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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Ammmaazing part ..so maan cane bvj after 10years ..both have some feelings for eavh other..now geet still angru ..waiting for maaneet meet
..loved the name jasmine
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your too gud aishu

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Part 1 - So glad that you started a story, No worries about updates. Update whenever you get time.

Little similar to movie devdas. Both families were friends and maan & geet were friends. He left for his higher studies for 10 years. she was upset that he was living and vowed that he will not see his face when he comes back. She did not go with other to welcome him. He knew where to find her.

The flashback part shows how much he really cares for her.

Liked his calling her jasmine.

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leena63

@leena63

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

welcome back
miss yr ffs
superb update
maan came back after ten long years
both missed each other too much but maan didn't show to his irritating geet & geet didn't break her promise that she will not see his face when he will back,but still she felt him with her always & he always told her jasmine ya short form of just mine😉

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REEKHA

@REEKHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

welcome back
New story. interesting.
Geet waiting for Maan from ten years.
waiting for next updat.e
Please PM

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Welcome back n happy to see u write again...

Part 1 was just superb... the way everyone was excited for his return shows how much they love him bt me confused with geet sister's name.. is it naina or nisha or does she have two sister's. ..

Bear with short comments coz busy with my wedding

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Congrats on new story ...
I love your writing ❤️
First update is damn interesting & I love every bit of it ❤️
Maan has came back after 10 years but Geet kept her promise not yo show her face to him...great start !
Their childhood scene was superb. Maan do care for her but never showed 😳 Geet is an important part of his life , he too missed her the same way Geet missed him. Concept is superb !
Eagerly waiting for their face off after 10 years. what will be their reaction on seeing each other
Awesome read...
Do continue soon...