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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awesme start
maan is back after 10year n as geet promised she didnt come to welcome him..jasmine..aw..dats sweet

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hermosoanu

@hermosoanu

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

That was beautiful aishu . Loved it .great start .want to c how the story progresses. ND jasmine will bloom under the love of maan . Congrats for new story nd must say u have captivated with ur characterisation. .. Continue. Soon

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Hey di sooo happy to see u write after sooo long, aur hamesha ki tarah this story too is damn interesing , eagerly waiting to read the next part di 😊

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Congrats for the new story

Loved starting part

Maan and Geet families are family friends...maan coming back from abroad finishing his studies ...all were happy to see him back but he was waiting for her ..he went to her house upon not finding her went to backyard and saw her there sitting on bench...oh he calls her as jasmine nice...eagerly waiting to read Geet reaction after seeing him after while ten years

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Hi ash

How r u dear

Welcome back

Awesome cpncept

So maan went abroad n geet madamis angry

Cant wait to read more

Jaldi aaja

Plz be regular here

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

congrats for new ff dear
it was just simply awesome ..
waiting for next pls update soon dear

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Interesting Concept

Maan and Geet 's family are friends and they seem very close too
Maan left at the age of 15years to study abroad now after 10 years he has returned but the day he left Geet cried because he was leaving but when he told her to stop fussing she felt hurt at his indifference behavior she than told him she will not show him her face even when he returns and now after 10 years he has returned but Geet kept her promise she never went to his house to welcome him but he came over to see her I like how he calls her Jasmine

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

ooo...its long time dear to read something written by u ...really missed you! ...now am so happy to see u back here ...the update was fabulous dear! ...maaneet seperated 10 years ago ...geet hurted that tym by maan careless nature towards her ...and vowed not to show her face when he would come back! ...yet missed him terribly...other side maan too missed her all that time ...past events show he don't show his feelings openly but yeah his actions very well prove that ...incident of out of classroom reveal that .. now eagerly waiting for maaneet's first talk after ten years ...

enjoyed the update dear ..

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shiela

@dreams-reality

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Wow such an amazing start. I am already loving the story.

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Am so happy..to read a new from an awesome writer..
Jabardast prologue..
Portrrayed der feelings nd longingings..nd dat classroom incident showed howmuch dey know each other..
Excited very much..start d same soon..
Ll b waiting

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