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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#561

geet remebers her past feeling the fragrance in her room

how maan bought jasmines for her on her bday

how he got j seeing her with dev

geet is totally broken without maan near her

she created a mess n hurt too

maan came at time n took care of her

his presence n his words soothed her

nice part

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#562

Oh dear Jasmine...

I always thoght an other way around of mahsoos and I am reading it now

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#563

i am so eager to know why geet is in such condition..
every time i read some maaneet story geet eyes were the expressive one full of naughtyness
and now how helpless she feels herself to be.
this sickness of her taking her away from maan she feels.
and how restless she got and that she lost control on her own self.
only maan can calm his jasmine restlessness.

i loved in past how maan used to tease geet with her marriage and then cant bear her closeness with anyone too..
fighting with hsi own brother for geet.seriously but geet know too well how to beat him..

awesome update..
loved it

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#564

I cried buckets for the part. Very nice it was, pls continue soon

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#565

Painful part as Geet is hurting too much and Maan is in pain seeing her in that state.

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#566

That's so beautifully written.

Geet's pain and helplessness getting oug in the form of violence.

past moments were sweet. Maan getting jealous of Dev.

wil be waiting for the next.

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#567

Awesome update

My lips are thick and my lipishtick very slick

holding to my silence even if you beat me with a stick🤣

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#568

Geet so lonely away from everyone even Maan is also busy all these making her sad poor girl past interesting Maan doesnt get jealous of that rishi but he just cant tolerate Dev near her haha Geet dono ke beach phas gaya lovely part thnx for update

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#569

Rulake gaya update tera😭

I was perfectly fine up until I read this line and then I sobbed like a baby

She gasped with the sudden move and then realized what he had done. her hands frantically moved to reach out to him, trying to adjust to the new habit of feeling him just with her fingers

The love she's always rightfully considered hers, the dear sight of him that has been hers to look upon whenever she wanted to. These two things are always interconnected for most of us. How does one fathom the quantitative measure of love in somebody's eyes when one can't see those eyes anymore. The pain, the anxiety, the insecurity, the helplessness she feels is portrayed so heartachingly, yet so very beautifully

Take a bow lady. You have outdone yourself with this update👏

As for Maan, I am still trying to figure him out and I am still unable to put a finger on him. Is he feeling guilty perhaps?

But any kind of illness is not only felt by the person who is suffering, but the whole family of that person feels it and I can see him suffering along with her and my heart breaks all over again.😭

Okay I want to say more, but my lips are zipped coz I don't want the evil lady absolutely any ideas😡

It is funny how he is not insecure about Rishi, but is completely uncertain about Dev😆

Serves him right😛

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#570

fabulous update ..
geet's pain ..helplessness ...her frustration u showed it beautifully . geet lost her eyesight ..and she is trying to adjust with it . its so painful to see geet like that and maan is definitely hiding something ...he loves her so much then why he is behvng differently ? when geet needed him badly where was he? its all so confusing .
in past ..
that boy coming to see geet and everyone teasing her about it ..even maan also 😲
and seeing geet with dev he is burning like lava :p continue soon

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