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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#581

Awesome part

Past was awesome n cool..Splyy dev n maan fighting for geet

N present was so emotional though at the end its soothing

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saro

@saro

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#582

Awesome dear ..geet made me cry... So much emotion... The surprise is killing me to know what happen to geet...

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#583

Wow

Lovely update

U amazed me with ur writing ability sachii

I loved it

The way u potray Maaneet romance ,emotions and many other things is remarkable

Plz continue soon

Hop to c positive ending😃

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#584

beautiful update although bit confusing as really know when you shift to pats and then zoom back to present but nevertheless really enjoying it...

poor geet can understand her pain...she wants maan always beside her...

waiting for next part...

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#585

What happened to her
Poor geet lost her sense of seen
Maan with her
Name now understand why you gave
Like past incident really maan was irritating

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

Awesome ... interesting ...

Thanks for update..

Thanks for pm...

Continue soon...

Geet is going through a very bad phase of life...

She is getting insecured because of her inability...

N is going into depression...

Maan is always standing beside her ... supporting her in every thick n thin ...

Hiding his own tears to be strong infrontof her...

Thanks for the link... it is a beautiful tree with beautiful flowers

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

Wonderful update

Geet feeling helpless

Maan was out but wished her... She thought she is dreaming

Maan teasing geet with the proposal that came for her

Maan jealous seeing geet n dev close

Geet became violent n threw all the things in the room... Maan came dressed her wounds n told he won't leave her

Eagerly waiting to know what happened to geet

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#588

awesome update..
waiting for next update..

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Part 6 -
How much they fight unnecessary. That night brought changes for both. Geet loosing in maan with his every gesture and maan realizing feeling diff for her. Maan was so possessive that he wanted all of her. He was not liking to share her with anybody. Why he so much jealous of dev..? He again got angry that she sat beside dev and not beside him. He always gets angry and geet pacify him. What dev have imp work with geet. And why she was not telling maan..? Is dev have some problems with his girlfriend..? She agreed to whatever will maan she will do without denying. What will he ask her ..?

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#590

Part 7 - I liked the way progressing the story thru' flashbacks. Their childhood moments, they reliving it again, but in diff context. Liked his prank on geet and tried to mold her not to see such movies by scaring her with witches.
Even now he forgot to wish his dadima. Geet reminded him. Even now she was watching the same movie with dadi and both celebrating and enjoying together. maan missed this enjoyment. He teased her again on that movie. Dadi asked her one wish. She told to visit british isles and beauty of hills and fields. Will maan fulfill her wish in future.? Dadi noticed how maan was soft and tender with geet.
Geet was sad that maan leaving and staying near to the site to save time. She started missing him now only. At least they would talk to their heat under jasmine tree.
Interesting precap