MG- ~With You~ THREAD 1 - Page 51

Can i not bribe you into writing something new 😉😆 well i think you have an incomplete story, so i might follow you there 😆

part 9

Sorry completely forgot, how cute of you to write your parents story, thats so sweet. I don't think my parents had an love story, or even if they did, they haven't shared it with us poor kids 😭😆




The more I read the more curious I get, what's happened is the main question
There's this song 'under the coconut tree' 😆 I think you should change it to 'under the -- tree' sorry not sure what's the name but still this tree must have done magical power, 😆 reeling in long time lovers 😆 I love the easiness in the story and the simplicity, how he touches her, how looks at her- it shows the simple love they have for another. I love the fact that it's not over the top, a simple touch says to me of his care, his tenderness. I for one like it 😃 means I can read more and ignore less 😉 😆

Now coming to the future. What if earth has happened, I take she's blind well underwent eye surgery and Maans putting distance more do maybe because his scared, they've also moved to s different country
I don't think it's confusing, it's more the 'I want to know' factor playing, the mystery seems to thicken and do does my interest


Thank you 😃

Wonderful parts..

Awesome part. Where past is lovely and beautiful, present is sad and painful. Its clear something has happened and Maaneet are far from family. Why is there communication gap between maaneet which is making Geet insecure. Maan also restless and worried about something.

Awesome and beutiful part thoda confusion clear hua hai maaneet married and geet kuch dekh nahi sakti aur dono shadi ka baad dono apne family sa dura hai aur geet maan ka liya tadap rahi hai uska pass rehne ko lekin maan usa dura ho raha hai lekin kyun kya hua hai past ma aur maaneet ka bakul tree ka neecha bita ya hua rain ma pal khubsurta hai aur maan geet ka bandage open ka time kanha tha.. Waiting for next part...

Awww they both really are so tangled together. It is so cute to see them both together and caring for each other. I wonder what happened to Geet that she cant see anymore :( And really what has become of them that Geet and Maan are craving for each other!

Wow lovely emotional update..te way my maaneet ki blissfulnight under te sky feeling each other enjoying wirh themselves and feeling content was lovely bliss..omg inpresent geet lost her eyes and eveverything? Destinty have played a big game why my maan avoiding is he got into some injury or some tjing to hide his hurt he avoiding geet?.. I love te update so much dear

amazing update past was so beautiful maaneet were together n happy but now so confusing geet isolation n maan acts .wat happened to her eyes ??

Ooo its becoming clear now..