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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't quite remember, but think I was five or six when my Baba first told me the story of Ceres and Hades and Persephone.
I was riding with Baba on his bicycle and as he told me the part about Persephone not being able to return to earth and her mother Ceres coz she had eaten but a few arils of pomegranate I started crying loudly.
I did not understand the love between a man and a woman at that age, but oh how I loved my Aai. I became Persephone in that moment and my mother Ceres. The very idea that somebody would snatch me away from my mother was torturous and unbearable.

I remember asking Baba why did Persephone's father not save her and I don't quite remember his reply to that only the warm cuddle he gave me and me feeling safe and protected in his arms and thinking that my Baba would not let any Hades take me away from them.


I learnt about Euridyce and Orpheus in the 7th grade. We had a book on Greek Mythology in our school library. I found it when I was twelve. We were not allowed to take the book home, so duringrecess I used to race to the library and read one story a day.
Euridyce and Orpheus made me sob my heart out for them. I could not believe that there could be such unfairness in the world. It was the bare beginning of my understanding of things between a man and a woman and my heart cried out at their separation.
The librarian caught me crying and we had a long discussion about the book and she finally allowed me to check out the book and take it home and I kept it with me for one whole year😛

But my all time favorite story in all of Greek Mythology was that of Psyche whose very name meant soul and Cupid the god of love.
It is the original story of Beauty and the Beast and by far my most favorite version. And one of the few Greek stories that has a happy ending.


Now why did I share all of this I have no clue. But anytime an author uses Greek mythology in their writing a strong sense of nostalgia overtakes me and takes me back to the child inside me😃


It was the perfect setting. It was like you painted it before our eyes. Two lovers lying under thebakula tree unaware that the story is about to become their reality.

She caught up in the hell of the darkness and insecurity that surrounds her and he trying to get her out of it.

But woman I would like a serving of happy ending with this greek saga if you are going that route.

This was an absolutely beautiful update perfectly balanced with romantic joyous moments of their past, juxtapositioned with the tragic events of their present.

Now waiting to see what happens ...



😲😲

Oh a thought just hit me. Maan is alive right? He is not a figment of her imagination.
Ahhh Aishu get ready to be killed woman if you do that.😡

Ok rant over. Will give my over-active imagination a rest before it kills me😆

Edited by Susegad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great part. In past moment maneet were so happy being around each other. Geet asked maan to tell her some story. That was really painful story . maneet fun in rain and than their close moment was beautiful. It was again Monday and maan had to leave for work. In present it seems geet is in depression not founding maan around her. At night he came and hugged geet . at first geet didn't respond but she felt maan's restlessness. Geet asked maan to not to being so much distance between them n maan said he is always there for her. But than why wasn't he there when that bandages are going to open from Geet's eyes. Is she fine now or not. Waiting for.next dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh dear..everything has changed now.wat happnd to them..they r close but still far..seems like alot has happened after marriage..and geets eyes ?? The rain part was awesome...I culd feel the happiness and joy they shared..it was heart touching..wish I culd express as u do...well u r a gr8 writer...plz do update soon.plz plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one
In past
Mannet were happy,maan never left geet alone.
But did he really left her now!?
Was geet imagining things,why they were far from family,why can't she ask about others!?
But update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was beautiful
maan was back for week end
n maneet spending time under the tree
on geets req maan told her a sad loving story
maan stood under the rain n made geet too wet
geet caught with cold
maan left back to work giving kiss in her cheeks
it made her day
present geet feels lonely as maan was not around her
even when her bandage is opened he went for work
may be he couldnt see her like that or may be he is hhaving discussions about her with any drs to cure her
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the for the pm Dear ...its always a pleasure reading your story ...why I am feeling that Maan will donate his eyes...their past history is ambiguous cant wait to read about their past ...You are mentioning tits and bits of past and present making us biting our nails in anticipation .The story you have narrated about Apollo is symbolic and I was trying to connect it to Maneet's present situation...
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update...
past of maneet is so beautiful...love how they are evolving in their relationship...present is so sad and painful...wonder what is going on with maan...
hope geet gets her eyesight back soon...
loved the update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both present and future together...
It was hell confusing for me as in present they are so happy togther and when they are married for a year they are far away from happiness😕

Geet's condition post accident is really scaring me...
She was scared of darkness and now she is afraid she wouldnt be able to see her maan ever again..
And above that maan is also avoiding her which is only making her more insecure...

I do think that may be maan has donated his eyes and this is the reason for avoiding geet or may be he just cant see her like that and for that he is avoiding her..
But on the other hand geet thinks that she has now become a burden on maan🤢

I dont want it to be sad story like the story that maan had narrated to geet...
Am so waiting for the next to see what will happen in maaneet's life..

Update soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was really flawess 👏
i was quite confused after reading the last update but now many things are clear..
Maaneet are married now and geet cant see ..they are not living with their family right now..
But why maan is distancing himself from her? She's craving to be with him, in his arms, the safest place for her...
He wasn't with her when her bandages were opened..her heart cried but to no avail..
I guess there is something big which maan is hiding..
I loved the flashback...Maaneet in each other's embrace, rain pouring over them..perfect! ❤️
thanku for pm
continue soon

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