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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

After a very long time commenting on IF..

interesting story..

Well written..

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#192

geet doesnt want to stay with them

dadi requests to hear her

n geet accepted

maan has split personality

he is child at night

n angry young maan at days

dadi intro her as his sec

he feels attracted towards her

nice part

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

I really loved both updates... Different concept... Waiting for more

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

amazing update... maan is suffering from split personality disorder... he will become a child and the ruthless MSK... geet felt cheated knowing about maan... dadima begged geet to help her and revealed the entire story... maan is attracted to geet and to avoid her he wants to remove her from his secretary post... eagerly waiting for next...

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Congrats for the new writing.

I must say a different piece, a unique concept.

Maan having 2 personalities and Dadima wants him to be cured at any how.

Both Maanu and MSK are extreme characters.

Geet shocked and hurt. Her dreams are crushed.

MSK swooned by Geet. It will be interesting to read how MSK will accept his crush on Geet.

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Sana

@luvvivian286

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Amazing chapters

read it in one go

loved it

continue soon

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Hi sona..kaise ho...
good to see u back
Nd u came wit a bang..
i though actually forgot the plot..so read the same again nd den the dual updt..
firstly was so angry on dis dadi..for cheating geet..or say traping her in dis marraigr..bt den manu..aww he is such a cutiepie...his chirpiness dekh..koi b pigal jaaye...
bt liked geet ka strong character rather den been rona dona types.. Apne kismat ko kosti nahi baiti...
nd den..Thud!!!!! came d shock..msk...oh my my*** so he is suffering from DID ..🤣
hehehhr!! two days back i had been watching.. housefull 3..nd usmain hai na yeh dailogue..
🤣

maza tho ab aayega..aag tho dono taraf lagi hai...so msk is smitten ..attracted badly towards his secretary...so he gona hav hard time...nd same i guesd ll b case of geet..ek taraf.. msk..hotty hotty nd manu dosre taraf.who is all time ll b sticking like a glue to his angel..

aww can't wait for next part...
don't disappear.. come fast..ll b waiting

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Entirely different concept. Maan has split personality. His Dadima's efforts to cure him were unsuccessful. So got him married to Geet as per Panditji's advice. Geet was shocked to see Maan in two different avatars and felt cheated. She wanted to leave instantly but Dadima begged her to stay on and help Maan. Geet agreed to stay. Wow !! Got to read something very different after long time. Loved it. Will wait for next.