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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue
As she entered inside his room, she was surprised to see the decor , everything was of her sister's choice..she looked at the person who was standing beside her..the glow on his face and inner happiness was reflecting on his face..seeing him like this only one question came out from her mouth..
Geet-how much u love her??
Maan- more than my life..
Geet- she is no more..don't u feel to move on and start a new life...
Maan-who said she is no more..she still reside in my heart ..and till my last breath she will reside here only..
Geet- what if someone replaces her without ur permission..
At this question , maan's body language changed completely..he tightened his fist and replied..
Maan- then i would prefer to die rather than accepting that person..because maan was born only for reet not for anyone else!
Geet-di is very lucky to have u..i wish dev too loved me like this..he says i'm not suitable for him ...am i not suitable for him maan?? innocently she looked at him..
Maan- i think he is not suitable for u geet..
at this reply geet smiled at him- u really think so...u r lieing right just to give my confidence..
Maan looked her and just nodded his head in negative..
Geet- jhoote!


a small prologue ,how was it.??
Thank u all for a such a amazing response😃
and thank u to all those u suggested the names for this story...
after lot of brain storming i decided to name it" Rehnuma"- meaning - the one who shows the path.., how's the name???
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ..Maroon..

Prologue
As she entered inside his room, she was surprised to see the decor , everything was of her sister's choice..she looked at the person who was standing beside her..the glow on his face and inner happiness was reflecting on his face..seeing him like this only one question came out from her mouth..
Geet-how much u love her??
Maan- more than my life..
Geet- she is no more..don't u feel to move on and start a new life...
Maan-who said she is no more..she still reside in my heart ..and till my last breath she will reside here only..
Geet- what if someone replaces her without ur permission..
At this question , maan's body language changed completely..he tightened his fist and replied..
Maan- then i would prefer to die rather than accepting that person..because maan was born only for reet not for anyone else!
Geet-di is very lucky to have u..i wish dev too loved me like this..he says i'm not suitable for him ...am i not suitable for him maan?? innocently she looked at him..
Maan- i think he is not suitable for u geet..
at this reply geet smiled at him- u really think so...u r lieing right just to give my confidence..
Maan looked her and just nodded his head in negative..
Geet- jhoote!


a small prologue ,how was it.??
Thank u all for a such a amazing response😃
and thank u to all those u suggested the names for this story...
after lot of brain storming i decided to name it" Rehnuma"- meaning - the one who shows the path.., how's the name???



Lovely start

Gud name ... Right i know both maan n geet will show path to each other

Plz Plz pm mee too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept geet maan has nice bonding poor both are suffering.. will be waiting to read story so update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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intersesting. srtory d charactrsketch waiting for d updte...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue...
waiting 4 d update...
Pls update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start
love the name rehnuma

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful prologue. Loved the title.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely prologue! Maan loves Reet so much! Geet questions him! Dev says Geet is unsuitable 4 her! Maan says Dev is unsuitable 4 her! Maan n Geet share a wonderful bond! Fab title! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Nice start
Geet's married to dev but he don't love her and maan's in love with geet's elder sister but she is no more
Waitting for the first part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
A Very Interesting Prologue
Maan really loves Reet even though she is no more he says she resides
in his heart that is simply great
while Geet asking about herself and Dev

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