ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 25

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Lovely update dear

So maan or geet maan gaye apne partner ko dekhne ke liye

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Part 13


Fantastic Update



I actually liked what Priya said and it could be true too

girls parents wanting their daughters to settle where is no problem to get money

for me that is no problem , girls need security in their lives

but I loved what Geet said not many girls think about they life partners to

care for their families too so that was amazing

Dadima wants Maan to agree for marriage


Precap seems like even Geet's family want her to get married

will be waiting for the next part

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chapter 1

Their worlds are about to collide.

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chapter 2

The classic first meeting. Little does she know that was her future boss.

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MG FF AANSOON


Part 14

Maan said - Dadi ma ki khushi ke liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu kuch bhi islie sirf or sirf dadi ma ki khushi ke liye mai rishte dekhne ke liye tayar hu lekin sirf rishte dekhenge ok ab shadi ka kch cnfm nai hai smjhe na tum dono..

Naintara said excitingly - Ha ha veerji bs rishte dekhege thank god aap maan gaye thank you so much veerji dadi ma bahaut khush hojyegi veerji…

And she hugged him lovingly and dev also joined them and said- Thank you Bro aap maan gaye 😄

Maan said - Acha chalo ab mai dadi ma se milkar aata hu okh

Naintara said - Nahi nahi veerji ek minute rukiye hum sab sath me chalte hai and dadi ma ko ye good news dete hai vo bauaut khsuh hojyegi..

Maan said- Acha theek hai chalo 😄


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In Dadi Maa's Room


Dadima was looking very upset and was praying with god to help her maan get his happiness and she was just praying for his grandson's happiness. She thought in her mind that if maan will agree for seeing girls she will without wasting anytime will contact geet's family and arrange the meet up as soon as possible. Her thoughts broke when Maan naintara and Dev came to her room.

Naintara said happily- Dadima ab toh bas ap jaldi se ladkiya dhoondhna start kardijiye quki maan veerji shaadi ke liye ladki dekhne ke liye maan gaye hai.

Dadima said being shocked - Kya aap sach keh ri hai naintara bataiye naa.. hume toh vishwash nahi horha bete

Nainratara said - Ap humse kya khud maan veerji

se he haa sun lijiye naa… and she stepped back.

And maan came forward and said - Ha dadima mai shadi ke liye ladki dekhne ke liye taiyaar hu..

Dadima said being emotional - Sach maan aaj aapne hume duniya ki saari khushian dedi thank you so much bete..

Maan said- Dadima apko ty kehne ki koi zaroorat nai hai ap meri dadi hai or apke liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu lekin dadi ma ek request hai apse mai shadi ke liye taiyar th hogya hu lekin mai abi ladki dekhne nai ja sakta abi ofc me ek bahaut bada project chal rha hai and 1 week tak mai bahaut busy rahuga so please apko jo kuch bhi karna hai ek hafte baad kariyega please dadimaa..

Dadima said - Koi bat nai bete hum toh bas issi baat se khush hai ki aap maan gaye hai hum apko promise karte hai ki humarai vjh se apke kaam me koi bhi problem nahi aayegi or hm ladkiya dekhna ek hafte baad he shuru krege...

Maan said - Ji Dadi maa ab mai chalta hu ap apna khayal rakhiyega please okh bye dadi maa

Dadi ma said -Maan bete ap ye bat maan gye hai toh ek bat or maan jaiye na outhouse se yha khurana mansion me shift hojaiye na please bete..

Maan said - Dadima please ab firse start mat hoiye aap mai yha nahi reh sakta ap janti hai na please mujhe force mat kariye jb se vicky gaya hai mera mann ni lgta hai iss ghr me pta nahi kis hal me hoga vo bhi meri vjh se it's all because of me.

Dadi ma said - Nahi bete isme apki koi galti nahi thi galti thi toh vo vicky ki thi smjhe ap.. aap khud ko dosh dena band kariye maan please

Maan said - Dadimaa please chodiye na ye saari baate mai iss ghr me ni reh skta bs that is final ab mai chlta hu byee good night.

Dev and naintara also said - Good night veerji/bro.


And maan left from there to the out house and when he was alone. He thought - Mai dadima ke liye ladki dekhne ke liye maan toh gaya hu lekin mai dil se abhi bhi taiyar nahi hu jo kuch bhi hua tha vo kaise bhool sakta hu mai maana ki uss baat ko kafi sal beet chuke hai lekin aaj bhi vo zakhm mer dil me taza hai mai nahi bhul sakta jo kch bhi hua tha usko nahi badh sakta apni zindagi me aage nahi badh sakta I am sorry dadi ma lekin mujhe ye karna he hoga.. jaanta hu ki yeh uss ladki ke sath galat hoga lekin apne mere saamne or koi rasta nahi choda hai or waise bhi aajkal ki duniya sirf paiso par chalti hai and he thought something about this situation and goes to washroom to get change.


On the other hand in Handa House Geet family's elder were sitting together and discussing about Geet's future and her marriage.


Daarji said- Hun meri vi umar hogyi hai tussi lokaa vi jaande ho mai kuch he dina daa mehemaan hega aa pr jaande jaande mai geet da vyah vekhna chaaunda aa ohnu khush vekhna chaunda aa


Taya ji - Daarji tussi ai ki keh re ho kuch ni hogaa tuwahnu mai keh re aa naa ee doctor teh kch vi kehnde hai tussi bilkul fikr na kriyi tussi geet da vyah vi vekho ge te ohde bacho nu vi khelaoge..


Tayiji also continued and said - Haa ji daar ji tusi fikr na kreyo ji or asi galla apne muh te naa kaddo saanu chnga ni lgda ji..


Rano said- Daarji geet te tuwahdi ee kudhi hegi naa ohda vyah kado hoyeva kado nai kide naal hovega ai sab te tussi he vekhoge naa hun tussi he asi galla kroge te maine naraaz hojaana


Mohinder said - Daarji asi loka tuwahnu kch ni hondege smjhe tussi hun zada emotional na kreyo saanu…


Daarji said - Tussi loka ae menu dilaasa de re ho ki khud nu mai chngi tarah jandaa aa mere vachne de bahaut km chances hege aa maine apne aap nu strong kr litaa tussi loka vi strong hojao hun smjhe naa


Rano said - Daarji tussi kyu asi gaala kar re ho je tussi chup na hoye na taa mai geet nu sab das davagi


Daarji cut her in between and said - Rano purttar geet nu or baki saare bacheya nu meri beemari de baare kch vi pta ni chlna chiyeda jidda pichle 1 mahino th chl reya hai ohda he sb chlne do ohna de saamne tusi loka nu khush rehna or ha mai apni potte poti de chehre te khushi vekhna chaunda aa Geet te apni job vich busy hegi ajkl pr mai chaundaa aa ohda vyah hojye jo kch vi hoshuyarpur vich hoye si ohde baad mai geet de chehre te khushi vekhna chaunda aa vo khush rahegi tai ta mai sukoon toh rab ji de kol ja sakaa..


Tayi ji said - Haaye daarji aai ki keh re ho tussi asi galla na kreyo tuwahnu geet di sau...


Daarji said- tussi loka ache se jaande oh iss buddhe nu chup karwanaa hainaa haha.. mere pyare putto chintaa na kareyo hun kitthe ni jaareyaa mai…


Rano said - Daarji tussi kinna pyar krde ho hum sab nu sachi aasi lokaa vde he naaseeba wale hai jo tussi saade naal hege hoo kyu bhabi ji..


Tayi ji said - Haa rano tu bilkul theek keh ri aa pr hun teh mai vi chanudi aa ki Geet da vyah jld toh jld hojaave pandit ji da call vi aya si menu kissi ne pandit ji toh Geet de baare me pucha si baade uche khaanda de log si or bade he sanskari hege pandit ji bata re the ki unka potaa bahaut vadda business man hegaa ohna ne sadde ghr da pta te number vi leliya hai pandit ji toh..


Rano said - Acha tayi ji tussi dasseya ni menu..


Tayi ji said - Time he ni milaa menu mai kida dassdi tenu par rishta te chnga lg re ya mainu..


Rano said - Bhabi ji rishte te chnga ji lekin geet nu kiwa maanyege oh te shadi de naam toh he bhaag jaandi aa or hoshiyapur wali ghtne te baad th oh bilkul vi raazi ni hoyegi.. meri bachi ne itni si umr vich kinna kch sehen kitta hai sbde saamne muskurandi rehndi aa pr ohde dil vich kitna akelapan hai aa te asi lokaa jaande he hai ohnu ek saathi di zaoorat hai hun jo ohnuu saade th vi zadaa pyar kre te islie ohnu vyah de waaste te manana he padugaa...


Daarji said- Geet nu toh mai manaa bada he mushkil hega pr inna acha rishta haath toh ni jaane dwaga mai aj geet toh gal kara ga mai aane do ohnu...


And everyone nodded there head. But they were unaware that two pair of eyes were watching them and it was Nandini Geet's small sister and after listening about her geet di's marriage she started jumping and hugged her tayiji and said - Oh god tayi ji geet didi ki shaadi wow kya news di hai aapne wow maazaa aagya ye sunkr mai th abhi se he apni shopping shuru krdugi Pta hai apko kitna kuch arrange karna hoga mujhe lehnega chunri bindi bangles sandle and her function ki alag dress wow i am so excited tayi ji mummy ji thank you...


Daarji said- Nandini puttar saa te lele hune aayi hai tu college toh pehle paani pee le kch khale ta ohde baad mere kamre me aa mainu kuch zaroori baat karni hai tere toh. Theek hai..


Nandini said - Nai daarji mai theek hu aap btao na kya zaroori baat karni apko mujhse...


Daarji said- Nandini puttar tu khush hegi na geet di shadi di baat sunkr..


Nandini said - Haa daarji bahaut khush aa mai taa..


Daarji said- Ta tenu meri. Help krni padegi geet nu maanan liye shaadi de vaaste


Nandini said- Daarji kyu ap mujhe pitwana chahte ho yr ap jaante ho naa Geet didi sherni hai unki ek dahaad se maine toh darr ke maare bhaag jaana hai ..


She makes puppy face but daarji know that nandini se better geet ko koi nahi samjhta and ek wahi hai jo geet ko shaadi ke liye raazi kar sakti hai and that is why he asks nandini to help him.


Daarji said- oh sherni hai te mai uss sherni da dada hega or tu sherni di bhn taa sherni di bhn bhi taa sherni he hui or jb ek buddha sher or ek choti sherni mil jayege toh ek sherni kya karlegi puttar..


Nandini said - Wah daarji tussi te bade logical ho mujhe toh pata he nai tha tussi inne intelligent ho maine taa iss trah socheya he nai..


Daarji said - Toh hun bata tu meri help kregi na meri choti sherni...


Nandin said- Haan ji daarji zaroor karagi hun te aane do vaddi sherni ko vekh lengee unkoo bhi hum dono milkar...


Daarji said- ha ai hui na gal meri putto wali shava puttar shava..


And they both laughed 😂 and seeing them laughing and listening to their talks all of them started laughing.


Tayiji said- Chal jaa hun tu fresh hoja jakr mai tere liye khana laga deti hu theek aa Nandini nodded her head and went to her room to get fresh.


On the other hand Geet was in khurana constructions busy in her work and sanjay and sharma ji had given her some work to do and she was doing it in Maan's Secretary's Cabin because the major details about the project was in this cabin so they thought why to waste the time in shifting things as they have left so much work to do in very less time. When the landline rings she was busy in her file and she goes to pick the call irritatingly and said - Hello but as she said said hello the file in which she was doing her work fell down and she started her cute punjabi banter and said - Hayoo rabbe ae ki hoyaa babaji saare paper uthal puthal hogye hayee rabbba… pta ni kis kalmuhee da call aeee heey babajii

On the other hand maan wants a file which he forgot in the office that's why he called in the office and call got connected to his secretary's cabin who was Tina but she left the job due to arrogant behaviour of Maan from past so many years this is happening the Secretary's come and go no one stick to their job coz of Maan's rude behaviour. But maan wanted his file anyhow and he did not knew that tina has left the job so he called and before he speaks something a voice came from other side - hello and when geet starts her silly banter maan smiled but as soon as he came back to his senses he got to know who she is by listening her voice (itni galiya jo kha chuka hai 😂) he shouted - Miss Handa Miss haanda ap sun rahi hai...


Geet Listening to maan's voice came back from her talking session with babaji and was shocked and said - Ji...i Sirr..


Maan said angrily - Ye kya ji sir lga kr rkha hai tumne haa orr yee kalmuhi whatever jo bhi keh ri thi tum kisse keh ri thii haa.. and iska matlab kya hota hai hmm..

Geet said sheepishly- Vo voo sirrr vo mai voo


Maan said angrily- Ye kya vo mai vo mai lag kr rkha hai tumne vo mai ke aage kuch bologi


Geet said - Haa vo sir mai ye keh rahi thi ki haa aapne call kiya hai kuch kaam hai kyaa..


Maan said angrily- Miss Handa jo maine pucha hai pehle usska jawab do.. ye kya punjabi me galiya de rahi thi tum mujhe haa..


Geet smiled sheepishly and said - Hawwww sir gaaliyyaa vo bhii aapko mai duggiii nai nai sirrr mai apko kyu gaaliyaa duggi aap th bahaut ache haiii haha… and muttered slowly not audible to maan dusht danav kahin ke..


Maan said- Miss Handaa apni bakwas band karo and yes tum meri secretary ke cabin me kya kar ri ho ??


Geet said- Sirr vo america wale clients ki saari details or file issi cabin ke computer me hai na so lidlie sharma ji ne mujhse kaha ki mai yaaha kaam karu..


Maan said- Achaa theek hai sunoo mujhe Hoshiyarpur wale client ki file chahiye so tum kissi se keh kr vo file mere ghar or bhijwado smjhi tum..


Geet went blank after listening about Hoshiyarpur a tear flows from her eyes and she was numb the scary memories of Hoshiyarpur came to her mind and she was not able to speak anything.

Maan said - Miss Handa


Geet was silent.


Maan said again little loudly- Miss Geet Handa


She was still silent


Maan again said very loudly - Miss Geet Handa are you listening to me sach me tum behri ho aaj th ye proof ho he gyaa..


After listening to maan. Geet came back to her senses and said while crying - Voo sirr... mai apki file bhijwaa dugii and she cut the call immediately.


Maan was shocked listening to her cries and when she cut the call he thought - Aaj ye ksa ajooba hogya Miss Geet Handa ne mujhe jawab nahi diya asaa kaise hoskta hai maine usse beheri kah or usne koi reply nai diya strange mujhe ek baar usse bat karni chaiye iss bare me shyd vo kissi baat ko lekr upset hai kahi vo late working hours wali bat pr th nai shyd uski family ne mana krdiya hoga pr mai ye kaise pta lgau ki uski family maani ya nahi par mai uske baare me itna kyu soch rha hu shyd islie kyuki vo meri employee hai or shyd meri vjh se vo ro rahi thi pr uske rone se mujhe kya fark pdhta hai or usne mujhe jawab nai diya toh mujhe itna ajeeb kyu lg rha h ye kya horha hai mere sth aajtk maine kisi ladki ke liye itna nai socha fir iss geet handa ke baare me kyu soch rha hu oh god ye ladki mujhe pagal krdegi sch me pr mujhe ek baar th iss bare me baat karni hogi he and he got an idea.


On the other hand as soon as the call got cut Geet started crying and said- Kyu babaji kyu aap bar bar mere ateet ko mere saamne laakr khada kar dete ho kyu babaji 😭😭 mai nai yaad karna chati hoshiyarpur ko ya fir hoshiyaarpur se realated kissi bhi yaad ko baba ji 😭😭 and she was crying to no end when adi came to the cabin and saw her crying he asked her- Geet Kya hua tumhe tum ro kyu rahi ho are you ok ??


Geet after listening to adi came back to her senses and said- Ha haa adi sir vo mai theek hu kuch nai bas aankh me kuch chala gaya thaa...


Adi said - Pkaa tum theek ho na little sister


Geet said - Yes Big bro i am absolutely fine and gave a big smile to adi. And she also said- Vo adi sir Maan sir ka call aya tha vo unko uss project ki file chaihye.. unke ghar pr bhijwani hai


Adi said- Kis project ki geet??


Geet said- Vo punjab ke kisi gao ke project ki..


Adi said- oh acha Hoshiyarpur ki project file mai abhi bhi bhijwadeta.. hu geet. And he went from there.


Geet was crying silently and she was very upset after this incident but somehow she gathered all the strength in herself and tried to be normal even pinky and Priya questioned her about her behaviour but she did not tell anyone about her past or hoshiyarpur and whole day went like this and When She reached her home she saw everyone is sitting together and talking she came and hugged her daarji tightly and said- Daarji she was crying silently..


Daarji said- Areey Geet puttar ki hoyaa tenu ofc wich sb chnga hega naa tera oh boss tenu zadaa pareshan th ni krdaa na daass menu geet ki hoya puttar...


Geet said while hugging daarji -Nahi nahi daarji ofc me sb acha hai vo th bas mujhe apko hug krne ka mann kiya so maine karliya kyu nai krskti kya mai...


Daarji said - Arre nai nai puttar and he also hugged her and started caressing her head with her palms slowly and said - Geet puttar sunn menu tere naal ek gal karni hai badi important... daarji thought this is the right time to talk to geet about her marriage.


Geet said while broking the hug and said - Ji Daarji Gal te menu vi karni hai aapse... she thought this is the right time to convince daarji and everyone for late working hours.


Daarji said - Haa haa Geet puttar bol naa ki gal krni hai tenu boll...


Geet said- Daarji vo na kya hai naa agle hafte naa saadee ofc vich batheraa kaam hegaa so es karke na sade boss ne naa saadi ofc timing ek.hafte waaste bda diti hai mtlb hu. Menu 8 bje th ratti 9 bje tk kam krma pdugaa...


Daarji said- Lekin puttaar ai th badaa he zadaa time hegaa aa betaa delhi shehr safe ni hegaa or sanu ethee aye hue vi hune 5 sal he hoye hai and haje tk tenu apni palka te baitha ke rakheya hai tenuu inni der rat tak kam krne di ki load hegi tenu puttar tere daarji th tere naal he hai naa


Geet said - Ji daarji ap or hmari puri family th mere saath he ho par mai apne paro par khada hona chati hu or kbtk mai ap logo ke saahre chlti rhugi kbi na kbi th mujhe akele chlne ki adat daalni padugi naa mere daaman pr jo daag hai usske baad mujhee koi bhi shareef khandaan nahi apnayegaa daarji islie mai independent banna chati hu.. daarji taki koi bhi kabhi bhi mujh pr ya hmari family pr ungli na utha sake..


Daarji said- Geet puttar tu aee ki keh ri h isme teri koi vi galti nai si puttar or tere daaman pr koi daag nai hai tujhse zadaa pavitr iss duniya vich koi vi nai hai puttar tu th saadi jaan hegi puttar...


Geet said- Daarji please ap bas mujhe late working hours ke liye permission dedijiiye...


Daarji said- Geet puttar mai tenu permission taa dedawaga pr tenu vi saadi ek shart manni padugi...


To be continued.....


Precap- Daarji ki shart kya geet maanegi?? Shasha ki re entry??


Hii guyss a short note from my side please can you guyss tell me how am i writing and and yes for pm's please like my ff and guyss I am not getting any good response from this story so i am thinking of discontinuing this ff so please tell me should i continue writing or not. and if yes then please share my ff than i will update it on regular basis. and please comment it feels good when i read yout comments. Thank You... Himani


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Too good update dear

maan and geet scene are to nice

Thanks for pm

Watting for next

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Very nice update maan ready to get marry but only for family and geet family also want her to get marry but what is there sharat waiting to know

Awesome work 👏

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geet ko darji k baat maanni padegi kyunki tabhi uski office k liye permission milegi na.........dekho ladka ladki jinke shadi k liye itna kuch dono eksaath kam karte hai aur ladka geet k boss hai.......wow babaji.......😉


lovely update.............


loved it............

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very nice update

as maan agree to marry all family members are happy

geet have some painful past so she is also running from marriage

geet's family decide to make geet ready for marriage so when geet ask permission for late hour working darji put condition

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thanks for the pm!

Part 14

brilliant update!

so Maan agreed to see girls for dadi's sake!

Maan is unhappy!

So Geet has a past!

her family want her to get married!

will she agree?

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