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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 12



Fabulous Update



Maan calls his team in for a meeting and before he comes into the conference room

he hears Geet talking about him and "that special girl"

I like Geet been truthful telling Maan she has no issues to work late but she first

needs to talk to her family then she will confirm with him

at the cafeteria Geet bumps into Maan and there both of them are having a

conversation as if they are friends while everyone else pays attention to them

Pinky tries stopping Geet

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 12

amazing update! well written!

liked how Geet responded to Maan about working late.

enjoyed Maaneet's banter!

everyone surprised seeing this!

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

really geet pagal hogayi hai...........maan k saath lad hayi...........


lovely update............


loved it..........

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part-13


MG FF AANSOON


Part 13

Pinky Said - umm ok sir hm chlte hai chal geet

And she took geet by pushing her with her hand to the tablewhere all were witnessing this scene

and having their food.

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Pinky said - Geet tu pagal hogyi hai kya tu kaise baat kr ri thi Maan sir se ??

Geet said- hayee rabba maine kya kiya tune unko ni dekha kya vo kis trah baat kr re the mujhse th mai jawab th dungi he na kissi ki sunkar thodi na lugi..

Pinky said- vo kissi nai Maan Singh Khurana hai geet puri India ke number 1 business man.. what's wrong with you geet tu pagal hogyi hai sach me aajtk iss ofc me kissi ki himmat nai hui ki maan sir se aase bat kre or tu toh ase baat kr ri h jaise ki vo tere koi rishtedaar ho jinhe tu daat ri hai

Geet said - Vo or mere rishtedaar never ever… kya pinky tu bhi maan sir or mere beech ye sab chalta rehta hai tu zada tension na le theek hai


Pinky said- ek sec ek sec hold on ye kya tere or sir ke beech iska kya matlab hai madam hmm teko bhi unpar crush vagerha hai kya priya ki tarah ..


Geet said- chal pagal mujhe aur maan sir par crush never ever darling mera taste itna bhi kharab nai hai 😂😂

Priya came in between and said - Geet teko maan sir par crush nahi hai toh fir toh tera taste toh bhagwan he jaane vo kitne handsome hai yaar.. He is the most eligible bachelor of the year tu toh pagal hai jhalli..

Geet said- Priya tu toh bas maan sir ke khwabon me he reh or unko drool krti reh mere liye toh mere sapno ka rajkumar aayega jo meri love story kocomplete karegaa ek asa insan jo mujhse bhi zada meri family ki care karega ek asa insaan jo hmesha apna family ko importance dega or mujhee khubb saara pyaar karega and i know babaji ne mere liye kissi na kissi ko toh banaya he hoga and i wish vo meri life me tab aaye jab mai settle ho chuki ho independent ho chuki ho and hmari love story complete ho.

Pinky said - chal bas kar tu geet ab teri baate toh kabhi khatam he nahi hongi

Priya said - Yaar geet tu toh badi chupirustam nikli yaar itne se time me itni badhiya love story likh daali 😂😂 geet madam sapno ki duniya se baahr Aaiye or dekhiye aaj ki duniya me koi love story nahi hoti hai aaj ki duniyaa bas paiso se chlti hai qki ghar chalne ke liye pyaar nai balki pase chahiye hote hai or practical hona pdhta hai life me hmesha ase mazak me ni chal sakti life so dear be practical nahi toh baad me tujhe he problem hogi or tujhe bahaut dukh hogaa or Aansoon ke aalwa or kuch nahi milega so just be practical dont be a emotional fool.

Pinky said - oh hello miss philosophical bas kariye aap chaliyelunch krte hai nai toh khana thnda hojyega chal geet


Geet said - Ha chal pinky ye Priya ki Practical baate toh kabhi khatam nai hogii mujhe toh bahaut tez bhook lag ri hai chal..

And the trio went to the table and have their lunch while continuing there sweet little banter. But the thing that priya has said is not wrong iss lovestory ki vajh se geet ko dukh toh bahaut hoga par ek na ek din ye love story puri zaroor hogi.

On the other hand at Khurana Mansion

Dadi ma was in her room she was crying and talking with naintara- Naintara bete hum kya kare Maan toh humari baat sunne ko bhi taiyaar nahi hai hum samjhte hai ye cheez ki vo aage nahi badh pa re h or vo kissi ladki ki zindagi ke sth nai khelna chahte hai par hum kya kaare bete humari toh aakhri iccha hai ki hum apke dev ke or maan ke baacho ko dekhe or agr ase he maan har baar shadi ki baat ko taalte rahege toh hume toh lagta hai ki hum aasehe chal base ge hume par dadi banne ki khusshi nai milegi 😭 humare khandan ki badi bahu ko dekhne ke liye aankhe taras rahi hai humari

Naintara said- Dadi Maa ye aap kaisi baate kar rahi please asi bate mat kahiye or aap pareshan kyu ho rahi hai please roiye nahi nai th apki tbyator khrab ho jyegi apkaa bp badh jyega daadi pleasee dhyan rakhiye aapna ap jaante hai na ki hum sab log aapse kitna pyaar karte hai apko iss trah dukhi nai dekh skte hai please dadi ma shant hojaiye.. her eyes were also moist seeing dadi ma's condition

Dadi ma said - Aap chahti hai na ki hum khush rahe toh humara ek kaam kariye na naintara humne Maan ke liye ek rishta dekha hai please unko uss rishte ke liye manaa lijiye please naintara hum chate hai ki humare bacche khush rahe hum unko settle hote dekhna chate hai

Naintara said- Par Dadima hum kaise i mean maan veerji humari baat kha sunege hum kaise unko maanye

Dadi ma said - Hum vo sab nahi jaante aapko humare liye itna toh karna he padega naintara please..

Naintara said - Theek hai Dadi maa hum Maan veerji se baat zaroor karege ap pareshan mat hoiye or lijiye khana kha lijiye fir hum apko apki dwai dedete theek hai..

Dadi ma said - hmm ok

Aftergiving Dadi ma her medicines she came out of the room and started thinkig how to convince maan and she got an idea and she told dev also about her plan and she will execute it when maan will come.

Here maan left for the house early as he wanted to spend some time with Dadima. As soon as his car came to Khurana Mainsion Naintara saw it and she started her plan and she started seeing at the door being restless and waiting for maan to come so the she could start her plan Dev was also present there.

She said to Dev - Dev apko pata hai na apko kya karna hai

Dev said - Ha ha Naintara all set 👍

Naintara also gave thumbs up to him.

As maan came to door she started her drama and said – Hey bhagwan Dev hum kyaa karee humse toh Dadi maa ki ye halat dekhi nahi jaati hai vo beechaari kitnaa pareshaaann rehti hai and she started her fake crying…

Dev said slowly - overacting mt kro naintara😬 and said loudly kya hua naintara tum ro kyu chup hojao please dadi ma ki ye halat toh mujhse bhi nahi dekhi jaati par ab kya krskte hai humlog

Naintara Said- Hum log nai kar skte lekin Maan veerji toh kar sakte hai naa pta hai dadimaa ki bas ek he khwaish hai ki vo maan veerji ki shadi dekh le pta nahi maan veerji maante kyu nahi hai shadi ke liyee

Dev said -Bro kar sakte hai naintara par bro bhi toh apni jagah sahi hai vo ase kaise kissi ladki ki zindagi barbad kr skte hai binaa usse pyaar kiye kaise shadi krle..

Naintarasaid - Shadi naa kare pr atleast dadi ma ki khushi ke liyee rishta toh dekh he skte hai naa dadi ma konsa unka hath pakad kar zabardasti unki shaadi karwadegi atleast ladki ko dekhne toh ja he sakte hai na dadima ki khushiii ke liyee..

Dev said -Haa par ab bro ko kon smjhayee….

Naintara cut dev in between and said - aaree maan veerji aap kabaye

Here as maan came at door he heard dev and naintara's conversation as per the plan he listened to all the things and smiled little bit on naintara's overacting.

Maan's trance broke when Naintara called him he said - Ha vo jst abhi aya Dadi ma kaisi hai Naintara unhone dwai toh kha li or khana khaya unhone ??

Naintara said- Ji Maan veerji humne dadi ma ko khana khila diya hai aur dwai bhi dedi lekin vo..

Maan said- lekin vo kya naintara bolo dadi ma theek toh hai naa..

Naintarasaid - Ji veerji dadi ma physically toh better hori h par mentally nai vo actually ap jaante hai na veerji ki unko apki kitni chinta lagi rehti hai or vo apki shadii...

Maan cuther in between and said - Please naintara not again abhi kal he iss bare me bat hui thi naa or jo abi tum karne ki koshish kar rahi thi tumhe kya laga tha tumhare veerji ko kuch samjh nai ayega tumhare ye drame ko or tumhe bahaut ache se jaanta hu mai pakka dadi ma ne tumse kuch kaha hai tabhi tum or dev dono milkr ase react kar re ho am i right.

Naintarawas shocked listening to Maan and smiled embarrassingly - umm vo actually vo sorry veerji lekin such mein dadi ma bahaut pareshan hai or unki asi halat mujhse nai dekhi jaati hai hum unke bache hai unke iss old-age me hume he toh unka sahara banna hai or agr hum unki itni choti si wish bhi naa puri kar paye toh fir kya faida mere se dadi ma ka ye udaas chehra nai dekha jaata hai veerji please ab aap he kuch kar sakte hai..

Dev also joined naintara and said - Ha bro naintara bilkul theek keh ri hai dadi ma ke liye hum itna toh kar he sakte unki khushi ke liye itna toh hum kar he sakte hai please bro…

Maan said- Tum dono ka kehena ka matlab kya hai??

Dev and naintara said in unision - Yahi ki aap shadi ke liye ha kardijiye veerji / bro

Maan said- No ways tum dono mujhe convience karne ki koshish mat karo samjhe mai nahi maanne wala hu samjhe naa shadi koi mazak nahi hai jo ase he kissi se bhi karlu ho kya gaya hai tum dono ko hm

Naintara said -. Nai nai bro hmara kehne ka ye matlab nai hai ki ap shadi krlo hum toh bas itna kehna chate hai ki bs ek bar dadi ma ki khushike liye ap rishte dekhne ke liye ha kar dijiye zaroori thodi hai ki unse shadi krni he hai apko bus ap ek bar ha kardijiye atleast dadi ma ko tassli thhojyegi ki ap shadi krna chate hai and vo khush hojyegi atleast unki aankho me Aansoon toh nahi ayege na unke Aansoon dekhkar hume bhauat takleef hoti hai veerji please ap dadi ma ki khushi ke liye ha krdijiye please..

Maan said- Dadi ma ki khushi ke liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu kuch bhi islie sirf or sirf dadi ma kikhushi ke liye mai rishte dekhne ke liye tayar hu lekin sirf rishte dekhenge ok ab shadi ka kch cnfm nai hai smjhe na tum dono..

Naintara said excitingly - Ha ha veerji bs rishte dekhege thank god aap maan gaye thank you so much veerji dadi ma bahaut khush hojyegi veerji...

And she hugged him lovingly and dev also joined them and said-Thank you Bro aap maan gaye 😄

Maan said- Acha chalo ab mai dadi ma se milkar aata hu okh

Naintarasaid - Nahi nahi veerji ek minute rukiye hum sab sath me chalte hai and dadi mako ye good news dete hai vo bahaut khsuh hojyegi..

Maan said-Acha theek hai chalo 😄

Precap - Geet convincing her family for extra hours but but uski family ne rakh di hai ek shart guess karoo kya shart hogi 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

very nice update

geet explain her love story to pinky n priya for which priya advice to become little practical

naintara some how convince maan to see girls for the sake of daadi

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Posted: 5 years ago

toh jo ladka geet ko dekhne ayega geet ko raji hona padega.......issi shart per geet ko permission milega........i think so.......chalo maan bhi agree ho gaya ladki dekhne k liye............



lovely update...........



loved it...............

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Posted: 5 years ago

So happy to see another ud soo soon thanku so much

Geet telling how will b hr love story to pinky and priya

Priya told hr to come out of hr dream land money is most important now days think practically

Dadi is gr8 she can't convince Maan she convinced Nt wow

Maan get hr drama but in all this she convinced Maan fr seeing rishta

Precap: what Geet family condition fr extra hours

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update

Shart ladka dekhni ki hai

Maza aayega ab

Now love story is start

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 13

thanks for the pm!

remarkable update! nicely written!

as expected Pinly questions Geet.

So Geet has no interest in Maan.

Priya advises Geet....

great that Maan heard Dev and NT's plan.

but liked that he agreed to meet girls for dadi's sake.


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Posted: 5 years ago

awesome precap! eager to know the condition!

update soon

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