ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 19

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Posted: 7 years ago
Great
Geet gets to see Maan's care towards his family
N also how he easily forgot his ego n supported her
Daadi is okay now but wants Maan to get married
Waiting for Maan's answer
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago


MG FF Aansoon

Part-10

Dadi ma said-"Toh fir bte shaadi kar lijiye plse hmare liye shadi kar lijiye hmari be umar hogyi hai ab bte dev bhi shadi karkr settle hogye hai hum chahte hai ki aap be settle hojye humme ab kabhi bhi iss duniya se jnaa padh sakta jeete ji hum aapki shaadi hote hue dekhna chahte hai apko apki life me well settled dekhna chahte hmari ye iccha puri kardijiye maan please

Maan said-"Dadi ma aap janti hai na ki last time kya hua tha fir bhi aap aisa keh rahi mai apki bahaut respect karta hoo dadimaa or agar ap mujhse kahegi ki shadi kar lu toh mai karloonga par mai dil se khush nahi rahuga dadi ma kya ap chahegi ki mai khush na rahu or meri chodiye jis ladki se shadi karuga vo be khush nahi rahegi mai kisi ki life ke sath nahi khel sakta dadi ma please dadi ma mujhe thoda sa time dijiye agar mujhe lagega that I am ready for the commitment toh mai sabse pehle aakr apko btauga please dadi maa meri baat ko samajhiye mai manaa kar rha hut oh iske peeche reason hai mai abhi tayar nai hu"

Dadi ma said-"Maan bete ap jo keh rahe hai vo hai vo hum samajh rahe hai lekin ab th kafi time beet chukka hai bhool kyu nai jaate sab kuch jo kuch be hua th vo past tha uske liye ap apna present or future kyun khrab kar rahe hai"

Maan said-"dadi ma shaadi ek bahaut bada faisla hai or jo kuch be hua tha vo bhoolna mere liye asaan nahi hai par aaj mai apse waada karta hu dadi ma mai jald se jald vo sab kuch bhoolne ki koshish karoonga aur jab mai ready hounga apko bta duga"

Dadi ma said-"Theek hai bete jaisa apko theek lage hum apke taiyar hone ka wait karege"

Maan said-"Thank you dadi ma"

Dadi ma said-"Hum bas apki khushi chahte hai maan"

Maan said-"Mai sirf tab khush hounga jab aap theek hojyegi"

Dadi Ma-"Hum theek hai Maan

Maan said-"Hmm vo toh dikh raha hai"

NT also came there while opening door she said-"Dadima theek insaan hospital me admit nahi hote hai"

Maan said-"Ha dadima naintara bilkul theek keh rahi hai Or dadima ab se jab tak aap puri tarah se theek nahi hojati ghar se bahar nahi jyegi Mandir ya kahi or bhi nai or ye Maan Singh Khurana Ka order Hai smjhi aapHe turned his fac to naintara and sadi-"aur Naintara dadima ki health ki puri responsibility mai tumhe deta hu"

Naintara said-"Ok maan veerji hum dadi ma ko ghar se niklne bhi nahi denge"

Dadima said while making puppy face-"Kya Naintara aap bhi inke saath mil gyi"

Naintara said-"No dadima ab apka ye face hum par ya veerji par kam ni karega"

Dadima said-"Ok theek hai baba nahi jayege ghar se bahar"

Naintara said-"That's like my dadima"

Dev also came there with doctor he checked dadima and said to Maan-"Mr. Khurana Now she is fine just inka bp thoda sa badh gaya tha Ab ap inhe ghar le ja sakte hai bas ye inki medicine hai ye lelijiye or time par dete rahiye kuuch problem ho to hap mujhe call kar sakte hai."

Dev completed all the formalities for discharge. And they took Dadi ma to the Khurana Mansion.Maan gave the responsibility of dadima to Naintara and She is taking care of every need of dadima. Maan knows that Naintara is a good human being that's why he gave the responsibility to NT.

Here Geet also came home after adi gave her the appointment later to join tomorrow as MSK's Secretary. She was om cloud 9. When she came home she started shouting like a small kid she said-"Maa taayiji papaji daarji kaha hai aap log please jdaldi aaiye naa..."

Tayiji came running towards the hall-Ki hoyaa geet putar ini zor zor se ku chilla ri hai

Geet said-"Abhi nahi tayi ji sabko aajane dijiye especially daarji nu tab dassaangi"

Tayi ji-Tu vi naa aini vadi hogyi h fir vi bachiya vaakan harkata krdi hai

Geet made a face and again started shouting.

Everyone came to tha hall listening to the chatter box Geet.

Daarji said- "Ki hoya geet putar dass vi de hun

Geet said-"Daarji maine kehya si naa mai independent bna gi so lo ohdaa pehlaa kadam utha lita haa mai"

Daarji said-acha madam kya kiya h tune ab dasiyo zra menu

Geet said-"Kitta ni hai daarji karaangi hun"

Daariji said-Ki karegi

Geet said while shouting with hapiness-"Job"

Daarji said-"Job??? Sach geet meri poti ini wadi hogyi ki vo hun job kregi shavaa puttar shaava Kedi company wich job kr ri h tu puttar"

Geet said-"Daarji Khurana Construction"

Daarji said-"Khurana constructions naam te suna hua hai maine is company da MD Maan Singh Khurana Hega naa"

Geet said-"Ji daarji"

Geet was lil bit confused that how Daarji knows the name of MD but then she shrugged her thoughts thinking he might have studied about him in newspaper or television.

Each and everyone in her family congrtulated her. She took blessing from her elders. Her papa ji was very much happy her mother tayiji all were happy for her.

Next Morning.

Geet was getting ready for her first day in KC. She wore a beautiful green colour suit and earings in her ear. She was very much excited about her first day she does not wants to get late to the office so she woke up early in the morning but today her babji was not with with her. The taxi which she took got punchured and she cant took another one because no taxi was there. It was a lonely street. And taxies which come already have the passenger in them. So she could not take them as well. Not having another option she waited for the taxi to get repaired to her luck the mechanic was just few meters away only from the place where the taxi got puncherd .So the taxi driver brought the mechainc soon. It took 15 mins for mechanic to repair the puncher. It was 9:50 at that time. And when she reached office it took another 20 mins for her to reach there. She rushed towards the office and it was 10:10 am at that time.She knows she has done the blunder and she was 10 mins late to the office on her first day. She rushed to the office as fast as she can.She greeted Adi pinky and all the staff.

Geet said-"Good Morning Bro,Pinky"

Adi-"Good morning Geet where were you sister you are 10 mins late on your first day you are gone"

Pinky-"Oh ho adi sir phle din hi usko.darao mat Geet tu tension mat le ja jakr sir ko good morning keh vo thoda gussa honge but thodi si daat sun le"

Adi said while eying towards pinky -"thoda pinky"

Pinky said-"nahi mera matlab thode se zada nahi nahi bahaut zadaa ja geet jaldi jaa"

Geet said-"tu bhi na pinky mai jaati hu"

Geet moved towards Maan's cabin.

Precap-Maaneet again fighting

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So here is the part 10. How is it do tell me please tell me am i able to clear my point if uh guyss have any question you can ask me. And thank you so much for all the lovely comments and likes. I am glad that still after so much time you guys are reading my ff.

Edited by himani02 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update
Good to see that geet's family was quite happy n excited for her😃👏 they were encouraging her to move ahead in life😊
Oppss geet late for office!!😲
What will be maan's reaction?
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update dadi wanted maan to get married but maan had a bad past that was making him hate the idea of marriage something happened to him that he face so much that he didnt wanted to marry as he thinks he wont be able to give justice to person he marries but he promise dai that the day he gets ready to forget his past and move on he will tell her here geet so happy she got the job but seems darji knows about maan being md of kc geet is wondering how the history is about to be repeated as miss geet handa is late and maan is furious no one can save not even her babaji
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb
Daadi understands Maan needs time
Maan agreed that he will soon forget his past
Geet reached later on her first day of office

Why Geet's daarji knew Maan??

Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Maan is worried for his dadi
NT had been given this responsibility
Geet is happy that she got the job
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 10

outstanding update! well written!

while I understand that Maan is not ready to get married he should forget the past and move ahead! hope he listens 2 dadi!

Naintara is nice!

Geet is excited that she got the job! She is confused that Darji's knows KC's MD'a name!

oh no Geet late cos of the taxi!

lovely precap!

update soon



Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Going so well with the flow ..continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thax fr pm
Glad to see ud woh b do do
Maan analyze that Geet respects elders and Geet thought Maan is good hearted man
Maan get relief seeing his Dadi fine Dadi again told hr wish to see his marriage Maan make hr understand that he's not yet ready fr commitment but soon he forget his past get ready
Geet got appointment letter and told her family excitedlyBut late on hr first day 👎🏼
Adi pinky warned hr about Maan 😡anger
Waiting fr next too is tarhan jaldi jaldi update diya karo 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
dadima phikar not...geet ageyi...

lovely update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 7 years ago

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