ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Haha ..
Maaneet ka Office me fight ..
too gud...
Adi keep samne Maan ki image kharab na ho
isliye ..
Geet ki insult ho gayi ..
Maan Geet me challenge..
hmmm ..
lets see kon jitega ..
Update next part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
mast update

loved maaneet fighting like kids
plz add me to pm list
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
ha ha very good update waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Loved their cute fight
Both r equally high headed
N geet too challenge s him
As he insulted her
Now let's c when geet passes the interview
Wat will happen
Nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Awesome update sissy 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Superb updates. The name of story is so serious and the story is so hilarious until now. Liked it very much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
good update dear...
haha there fight continued yet...
update soon... nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MG FF Aansoon

Hey guyss i know after long tym but i was hooked up in some personal work so sorry... i am really greatfull to all of you for such lovely comments and like so here goes the part 6 do tell me how is it...

Part 6

Here in Maan's Cabin


Maan said to adi-"Adi.. Mr Sharma ki project file kahan hai"


Adi said-"ye rahi sir.."


Maan said-"hmm.. ok"


Adi started to leave when maan stopped him and said-"Adi.."


Adi said-"Yee..ss Si.rr"


Maan said-"Secretary ke interviews kaun le raha hai"


Adi said-"Si.r Nain..tara mam and Dev.v Sir.."


Maan shouted-"What?? Naintara aur dev "


Adi said-"Ye.s sir vo actually dadima ke orders hai ki aapki secret..ary iss baar dev sir or naintara mam hi choose karen..ge aur aapko wahan jaane ki permission nahi hai..."


Maan said-"kya.. mere liye secretary dhoondi ja rhi hai or mujhe hi wahan jaane ki permission nhi ye dadima bhi na..."


Adi started to laugh (u know his laugh)-He.he.he.he..


One glare from maan and got shut that moment only.


Maan said-"ok u go now. "


And adi leaves from there.


Maan thinking-"oh no ye dadi maa bhi na... ab main kya karoon uss ladki ka interview agar dev aur naintara ne liya or usne vo clear kar diya toh.. oh god no no... uska interview toh main hi loonga.. aur usse uski asli jagah bhi dikha doonga par kaise?? Think Maan think.."


Maan was was busy in his thoughts when he listened some commotions in the office. And he moved towards the place from where commotions were coming.


Here geet when she came out from the cabin no one was there at cabin's door because when maan called adi inside everyone got scared and left to their respective places that moment only.Geet instantly headed to the reception to talk with pinky.She was going when suddenly she got bumped into a girl who was running towards maan's cabin and geet was also busy in thinking about maan so she also didn't saw the girl and they bumped into each other.


Girl shouted on geet-"What the hell???"


While eyeing towards geet She said-"Can't you see while walking? You behenji"


All the other staff members including adi and pinky were already shocked when they saw geet with DD their Angry Young Man and girls ke Dhak Dhak.. and now she got bumped into shasha.They thought ki ab toh geet gayi.But pinky knows geet in and out.she knew ki aaj toh pakka koi dhamaka hoga KC me. And here goes the dhamaka


Geet was already really very angry on maan and now her anger got increased due to this stupid girl and she said-"Of course i can see auntyji but i think mistake is not mine mistake is all yours you were running in the office premises like this not me"


Shasha said-"Excuse me u behenji aunty kisko bola tumne"


Geet said angrily-"Is there anyone else other than you in front of me."


All the staff members including tasha adi and pinky started laughing after listening to geet.But one angry glare from shasha and they got shut.


Shasha said-"Hey.. u behenji be in ur limits Do you even know ki tum kisse baat kar rahi ho."


Geet said-"Yes i know very well to whom i am talking auntyji and i think you should also not cross ur limits otherwise it will not be good for you only"


Shasha said-"Oh really tum mujhe dhamki de rahi ho shasha ko ha..ha.. Suna tasha yeh behenji mujhe dhamki de rahi hai ha..ha.. Tum jaisi ladkiyon ko na main acche se jaanti hoon ameer ladke dekhe nahi ki unpe dore dalna shuru.."


SLAP...


Geet got really very angry on shasha as this was second time in a day that someone questioned on her self respect.And she instantly slapped shasha in front of the whole staff.


Geet said-"How dare you? Tumhaari himmat kaise hui mere character par ungli uthaane ki.. Aree mujhe toh sharam aati hai yeh kehene me ki tum ek ladki ho.. Or ek ladki hokar ek ladki ki self respect par uske character par ungli uthaana itna aasaan hai tumhaare liye.. Aaj toh maine sirf tumhe thapad maara hai agar agli mere character par ya kissi bhi sharif ladki ke character par ungli uthai toh tumhaari zabaan khich ke tumhaare haathon me de doongi.. Aur haan Agli baar kisi ladki ke character par ungli uthaane se pahele iss thapad ko aur jo maine kaha hai usse yaad kar lena Shasha.."


Shasha was fuming inside. She was going to slap geet but maan came in between and said-"Shasha yeh sab ho kya raha hai... ye office hai koi akhda nahi jahan tum log lad rahe ho...

Maan said while eyeing towards geet-"Aur tum tum abhi tak gayi nahi.. mujhe toh laga tha ki

tum chali gaya hogi.."


Geet said-"Sorry Mr. Khurana to ur disappointment... but vo kya haina jab GEET HANDA koi challenge leti hai toh use poora kiye bina peeche nahi hatti hai..."


Maan said-"Tum shayad bhool rahi ki yeh mera office hai aur yaha jo bhi hota vo meri permission ke bina nahi hota hai So Miss Handa haarne ke liye tayaar ho jao..."


Geet smiled sarcastically and said-"vo toh tym hi bateyega Mr. Khurana ki kaun jeetega aur kaun haarega.."


Maan said-"We will see to it... All of you back to work... now i dont want any nuisance in my office understood."


Geet said while smiling sarcastically-"Mr. Khurana i would like to suggest you something if u want no nuisance in ur office than keep the Nuisance" while eyeing towards shasha "out of ur office.."


Shasha said-"You.." but stopped in middle when maan glared her and she and others who were laughing on geet's comment get back to there work and maan left to his cabin without saying anything to geet.


But two pairs of eyes were watching this scene and was shocked to see this that there is someone who can shut there Maan bro and veerji... They thought that how maan was not able to say anything to the girl infront of him even when she insulted his employee in front of him.. they have made a point that sonething is there in this girl who has the audaucity to shut the shasha and maan both. They knew now what they have to do.


Precap-Geet's interview will she pass or fail... Guess...😆


Hope you all liked the update please give ur reviews...

Do like and comment..



Edited by himani02 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Awesome update geet tho chah gai
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ud
sasha got slap from geet fr accusing hr
and nt and dev saw how she handles
sasha and maan

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