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Posted: 9 years ago
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Now onwards story will b written by me n vampy (abba12) together...as i need to finish this story soon...hopefully in this thread only

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Karan broke the hug and looked at the intruder, who was none other than maan. Geet, who already distanced herself from karan, smiled looking at maan. Maan also tried to smile back at her though he didn't like the idea of other man hugging geet but considering it a just a friendly hug he let it go.

After a minute of silence, finally Geet spoke ...Maan, come in... Please have a seat...he is just leaving...said so n looked at karan.

Though karan recognized maan in first look itself, now he was confirmed that he is the one Geet is in love with as Geet's soft tone indicated that clearly.

Karan had full information about maan's past.. he hired private investigator to gather information about him and they gather all information ... what maan does now and what he did in past ... whom he had killed and remained in jail for a 5 yrs but biggest of all... major truth about Sameera and his relationship.

He guessed if maan came now, there must be some motive behind it and he didn't want him to harm geet in anyway, he will do anything to protect her from maan.

hmm .. Geet .... maan said but stopped for a moment , looked at karan who was eyeing him angrily ,disturbing their privacy to much extent ..

Geet , who is he ?? .. asked maan

he is Karan ...owner of malik enterprises... We are doing xyz project together and... but she was cut in between by karan

and her best friend......he introduced himself to maan and then turned to geet ...

Karan he is Maan ......she smiled heartly while introducing him , but didn't add anything further ..

Karan n maan shaked hand with eachother...both have hatred n anger for eachother...maan didn't like how karan was hugging her and than showing off his closeness with geet

Karan was angry seeing maan as to his eyes, Maan was just faking all this ... he came here to tell Geet about maan's past and it angered him more that geet loved this man...and this man is cheating and backstabbing her with sameera...

Anyways, maan u haven't told... y u here...its lunch time nah...u not having ur lunch ... geet said avoiding karan and giving him big signal to leave her cabin but karan stood there itself not making any move...

I came to ask u about lunch.. I mean its ohk if u had it already and If not we can have in nearby restaurant?? ..

Before Geet could answer Karan cut in

No maan , actually she is coming with me .. we have already decided .. right Geet ??" ...he said encircling his arms around her waist ... Maan didn't miss noticing that...karan was getting closer and closer to Geet ..

Before she could cut him and spill his lie, her cell ring and she picked it up as it was from her dad...

Yes dad...

karan is with me...

Yeah...

Ohk...v both are coming.....n she kept her phone and turned to karan n said....dad is calling us to discuss our next project.

Karan nodded his head and said...v need to leave maan...will see u around...Lets go Geet ... he said in finality

Geet smiled at Maan and said...see u at dinner ......and she looked for one last time before leaving the cabin...maan saw her leaving with karan n he was left alone there ...

In Mohinder's cabin ..

Dad, when u were ok ...y u called me urgently from Paris faking ur health problem... I was anyway coming here next day...geet questioned his dad finally as when she reached at home...she come to know through her servant that his dad was fine n slept already...

Geet... u cancelled that deal ......mohinder started to divert her topic as for now he himself don't know the exact reason y karan did all this...

But he was cut in between by geet...she was already holding her temper from last night...n now her dad asking question about that deal just made her lose her control n she said in a raged tone... that was important for me dad .. that house had my mother's memories ...I wont let anyone sell it...mark my words...be it anyone dad......n she stormed out from his cabin...


Geet, listen ... karan said trying to stop her but she already left the cabin and than Karan followed her ..

She entered her cabin and Maan was gone...though she was not expecting him to wait for her but she didn't like it ...she wanted to b with him right now...she felt bad that his lunch plan was canceled due to karan n her dad... She looked at time and thought to join him now as still some time left for lunch time...

But Karan peeped in breaking her thoughts ....Geet I wanna talk to u ..its important

leave that ..first tell me , what were u saying when maan was here ?? when we decided to go out for lunch ??" .. she was asking in an enraged tone , and karan knew he has to reveal all very soon as geet is getting to attached to him

geet... I just wanted u to stay away from him ... Karan said in flat tone...

Geet got angry hearing that...how can he just ask her to stay away from him? He ditched her in past and because of him , she wasn't able to love someone and when she found maan and started feeling for him ,he just comes and ask her to stay away from him ??

Shut up .. Just shut up ... he is my boyfriend...I love him... now I understand... u were planning this with Dad...

Geet, I want to tell u something important ...about maan...

If u want me to breakup with him , then i m not going to do that ...geet said firmly

Geet u have to listen me ..its important and u cant just ignore it...u cant trust him over me......karan said frustratedly

Geet laughed loudly...karan was shocked seeing her reacting this way...her laugh was mocking him...geet stopped laughing n looked at him

U want me to trust u over maan...did u trust me over piya karan......geet said angrily and left the cabin without bidding bye to karan...

Karan was left alone for self blaming...to regret his past once again...feeling sorry for his mistake again...and cursed maan for making Geet fall in love with him...for making her trust him so much...


Later in the evening ..

Geet got ready to meet maan, as she promised him to meet at restaurant, where he wants to tell her something about his past... Geet wondered what he really wants to tell ..

Getting herself beautifully dressed she left the mansion...karan saw her leaving and he kind of guessed that where she is heading to.. He has to stop her...he cant let maan play with her emotions for more time...

Geet was waiting at red signal...when she got a call from maan ..

Hello maan ......geet said receiving his call...

Geet , r u coming ??... he asked as he wasn't sure if she would come or not ...after what happen in afternoon...but he cant lose this chance to tell his past...as it look lot of effort to made her agree to listen to him and today he wont let this chance slip away...

Yes Maan .. I am at red signal near restaurant ..will be there in 5min

Ok Geet, I reached there...and m waiting for u outside only

No maan, u just go inside... I will spot u

No geet...i m waiting for u outside only...as this will allow me to see u coming for me...today when u left me in cabin...i felt empty...I felt u going away from me...I so wanted to hold u n stop u from going...but now when u coming to me...I want to hold this moment in my memory...i know I m being silly saying all this...but I just want to replace afternoon memory with beautiful memory of u coming towards me...waise bhi I wait outside it will give me few more minutues to be with u...n I don't want to loose any single second which I can spend with u......

Geet was overwhelmed listening maan...but call get cut suddenly and she was about to call him back when she received a video message ...while cancling the message noticiation...she clicked on it and video start playing...

Tumne yeh kyu kiya sameera...maan said

Sirf tumhare liye maan...tumhe yakeen dilwane ke liye ki mera pyar sacha h...aj b mein tumse pyar karti hoon...sirf tumhara sath chahti hoon...

Hm...toh tum sabko kuch chod ke mere sath jaane ke liye tayar ho...

Haan maan...jahan tum chaho...sameera smiled at him

Thik h sameera...hum dono sab kuch chod ke bahut dur chale jaynge...sab kuch peeche chod ke...humara naam... Pehchaan...daulat...sab...aur naye naam... nayi jagah par apni nayi zindgi shuru karenge...maan said...

Geet's world crashed watching this video...ground slipped out under her...maan n sameera are together...they love eachother...

One more message come on her mobile screen, There flashed the picture of Maan and sameera hugging, background showed Eifel tower and it enraged her as it was pic from the trip...

Geet's blood boiled seeing all..never in her life she thought , she will be deceived or say fooled like this .. For few minutes her senses didn't work at all, till all the cars behind her honked and she had to start her car .. but it was not in control now ... she drove it as fast as she could

" why me ... why me always ?" ... she muttered in anguish...

Maan saw Geet's car coming in high speed towards him and she has not decreased the speed yet , it was coming right in his direction and Geet was nowhere applying breaks ...


i can only say trust me...😆😆
waiting for likes n comments...
Happy new year to u all....
Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This will be best part of story , i know .. i know 🤣
Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Awesome update dear Vandy ⭐️Happy new year to you too..🤗So Maan not liking Karan between themand both angry with each other

and Karan knew now about Maan and Sameera

and Geet now get msg and saw Maan and Sameera together..😲OMG! how she 'll react now..waiting for next update and its good if you both write the story and Amna is helping you.⭐️w'fully written.👏


Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Wow That's Great Will Be Waiting
abba12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
will u update or i update myself before sleeping 🤣
vandy28 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: abba12

will u update or i update myself before sleeping 🤣

haha...i was about to tell u...to update on my behalf as got busy😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
We trust u for this story 👍🏼 .. What can I write about part ..
Will she hit maan 😒

Chalo GN
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: vandy28

haha...i was about to tell u...to update on my behalf as got busy😆

next time I will 😆 just tell me ..u are too lazy 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: abba12

next time I will 😆 just tell me ..u are too lazy 😆

haha...but this time was busy...i edited half n half was left...but joo bhi ho i posted finally😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: abba12

We trust u for this story 👍🏼 .. What can I write about part ..

Will she hit maan 😒

Chalo GN

u dont need to comment...😆
gn

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