The Vengeance Lover thread 4.....Note @page 138.....29th Aug 2017 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

teaser are fr tease only...

abhi toh she must b sleeping...😆😆
she is free now ...last month she was held up because of exam...her result is out...she cleared all...so she is enjoying...she started new story nah😉

😲 itna to muje apne baray main nai pata hota 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

😲 itna to muje apne baray main nai pata hota 😆😆

haha...yeh h mera kamaal...😉😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

karan ko maren gay mera bechara karan 😆😆

only reader who liked karan
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

only reader who liked karan

us ne to kuch nai kia na ..acha to ha wo 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

haha...yeh h mera kamaal...😉😆😆

astrologist vandy 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
dangerous teaser dear maan knows he is responsible for her broken state i have a feeling she crashed into a tree not maan she loves him too much to hurt him
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser. Waiting for update.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 31

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Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


Now onwards story will b written by me n vampy (abba12) together...as i need to finish this story soon...hopefully in this thread only

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Geets car speed up towards maan's direction ,where onlooker without a doubt will say that , her car would just crush man standing on the road but maan was lost in geet ...

He looked at Geet and trying to read her face which was becoming more visible with each second...her face was pale...her eyes was depicting some type of sorrowfulness...she looked like complete broken and her eyes were blaming him...just than his mind click...did she come to know about his past n his relation with sameera...was he the reason of her broken look...

Her car was no where stopping, was coming towards maan with more speed...but maan standing there itself...ready to take anything that come across. If geet blame him for anything or wanted him to dead...he will surely fulfill her wish...if taking his life can bring some time of peacefulness in her...he wont take step behind...


CRASHED !!!


People around heard blaring sound ...Geet Handa's car hit the pillar alongside the road ... her head hit the steering wheel hard ... and it started bleeding ... wind screen was broken and the glass added to her injuries. Maan was standing numb at his palce...not able to collect whatever happened in just few second...how car coming towards him turned immediately to pillar to save him...he come out of shock hearing people around...he run towards the car shouting her name...

" Geet !! Geet !! " ... Maan shouted running towards her car . She tiringly looked up once hearing his voice...maan reached near her n was trying to open gate which was badly damaged...geet was looking at her n small smile come to her lips and tried saying his name...but it was late , too late ... she lost her conscious ..

Maan's senses froze , seeing the condition she was in... As they opened the door with much effort ... Maan was shocked to see her state, when he removed her hair that covered her face ... Her forehead had a deep injury and she was laying in pool of blood ..

Geet ..talk to me ... Geeet ...he shouted ... People surrounding them made a crowd ..

Ambulance ... someone shouted .. but maan couldn't take risk , waiting for ambulance ... he just lifted her unconscious self .. making way from the crowd he made her lay in his car and tied his hanky tightly on her forehead to stop bleeding... and started driving towards hospital ...

Geet , u r scaring me ... please open your eyes .. I won't let anything happen to u ..please ..... he kept muttering as he took her inside the hospital ..

Doctor .... he shouted and placed her in stretcher and few nurses came immediately seeing the condition of patient ...

Please stay outside ...doctor asked maan and he had to leave her hand which he was holding ... he did that unwantedly ..

will she be alright doctor ?? please tell ?... though he was doctor himself but he was not in his right senses to examine her ..

lets hope for best.... saying so doctor went off leaving him alone outside ..

Maan called her dad and Mohinder Handa along with karan came to the hospital immediately..

What happen to her??...Is she allright?? that was the first question mohinder Handa asked maan immediately after coming .

She met with an accident ... replied maan

it was karan who got hyper ... holding maan by his collar he shouted

U are responsible for all this...u r one behind all this...u wanted to hurt her... ... u killed my friend .... he pushed maan harshly , maan was taken aback by his behavior ..

U bloody criminal ...... karan shouted at the top of his voice ... u already killed someone and now geetu was ur target... ...

Karan tried to punch maan but he stopped holding karan's hand before it touch him ...

y the hell would I kill Geet ...i love her....maan shouted back to karan for all the blame he was putting on him

don't act innocent, u bastar* ... u made her fall in love with u and now as u realize ur game will b over soon...ur truth will be out... u planned all this......karan said..

Maan couldn't just believe what he is telling ... he was accusing him of something he haven't even done ...once again his life was back to the square ... first he was prisoned without any mistake and now again he was blamed .. but this time he is not that maan ..

I haven't killed her .. u get that ??? ...... he said to defend himself ... I cannot even think to harm her ...i love her trully... this time his tone was low yet sad.. but karan was nowhere believing

forget it !! Get out of here now ...i don't want u to b anywhere near geet... karan told maan

No , I wont go till Geet gets her conscious back ...i wont leave her....maan said unwavering

I wont let u near geet ...ur shadow also wont b able near geet...just get lost maan before I do something extreme and I wont regret that even... I don't want her to see ur face , u back stabber... just get out .. he tried pushing maan , but maan was adamant to stay ..

Mohinder Handa was the spectator of whole scene , but he was too worried for his only daughter , who was in ward .. fighting with death and he couldn't do anything for her .. he remembered rano , dying in front of his eyes like this...neither that time he was able to do anything , nor now when Geet was fighting with death .. he can't save his daughter... he couldn't give her love and he can't afford to loose her ...atleast Not Now ..

Geet beta don't go .. don't leave your father like this .... he caressed the mirror of the door where he could see Geet's face ..

Here maan said I wont go, leaving My geet in this condition

she is not urs .. u tried to kill her and now she is in this condition .. what else do u want ?

she is mine and I want her only .. ...whatever u want to say , u can say ... Replied maan ... both karan and maan's tone was equally high and they didn't care that they were in hospital...but both were fighting with eachother for one person who means world to them... .. one worried for his friend and other for his love ...

Forget it khurana ... forget it .. I won't let u harm geet anymore...I will b protecting her from u...I will be her shield n without my consent u wont b able to see her...mark my word...

I will see that ... maan left answering in finality and went towards the doctor who just came out of the operation room

how is she doctor ?? .. asked trio in unison ..

She is critical Mr Handa .. treatment is going on .. we are trying our best but it would be too early to say something...doctor said.

The words doctor uttered were heavy on maan...she just cant leave him like this ..god can' t be that merciless ... he don't want to loose his love once again .. and like Geet he too chanted in mind Why God ? why me always

Do best treatment,call best doctors of the world ... my daughter must be fine doctor .. nothing must happen to my daughter ...don't care about money ... mohinder said vulnerably

its not about money Mr Handa ...v r doing our best... just pray for her ... doctor left saying so and mohinder sat on the chair helplessly

Karan and maan saw a sad and broken father in mohinder today... he was not The Arrogant Mohinder Handa ... he was concerned father about hid daughter... and maan wondered where was he when geet needed and craved for his love and care ?

At Handa Mansion

All were sad , except for one person who was at handa mansion .. sameera handa .. she marked red cross on Geet's picture ..

U have to Die ... coz if u die ... then only I will be the sole owner of handa's properties ... I don't want to share .. I want whole of it...each single penny will be mine ..

She laughed evily ..

At hospital..

Geet was shifted to ICU. Doctors were waiting for her to get conscious till than they can't say anything clearly as she get crucial injury in her brain. Doctors were keeping check on her every hour.

After some time when doctor left ICU doing her hourly check up, Maan came near to ICU to get glimpse of geet but he saw geet moving her finger ... there was some progress ... maan ran inside... he ran in without doctors permission ...His geet was gaining conscious...she will be back to him .. he ran towards the bed ..

Geet !! .. he said politely caressing her face ..

It took her few minutes to gain her conscious and when she opened her eyes ..she faced the unusual surroundings .. she didn't know how she came there ..

Maan hugged her tightly but firmly not to hurt her as soon as she opened her eyes .. After a minute she pushed him with all her strength she had, though it was little ..

who r u ??... She asked, and his world collapsed listening her words...No ..no this can't just happen ...she cant forget him...

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😉...waiting for comments n likes



Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandy28

anyone waiting fr update...😉

Yeah !!!! I'm Waiting

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