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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
so Rapunzel
pulling your hair back up?

not done 👎🏼

katti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing story! 😊Thanks 4 some fab stories! 👏⭐️with the end of this there will no more stories frm u 😔 u r a terrific writer! hope u come back one day n post dadi's bride😉 I have hope! Thanks 4 da pm n double marvelous updates! superbly written. Maaneet become closer n r friends! he helps Geet with her music! he suggests s makeover! Geet looks beautiful! she was always beautiful bt hid it! Meera battles with her thesis! her ff is her addiction! love her commentary in between! Geet sees Maan n Sam! she is shattered! they were close! Geet;s feelings well portrayed! she decides 2 avoid Maan! he confronts her! he tells her he n Sam r over!she tells him there was never them! he is the college sweetheart n she the college geek! She leaves in tears! Dev asks her 2 the prom n she says yes! Maan asks n she says she is gng wid Dev! so Geet came to knw abt the bet! Sam told her! Geet livid! Dev blames Maan! Maan says sorry! Geet looks gorgeous! dev is so annoying! Maan came with his sister Annie! Maaneet dance! Maan asks y she came! she says 2 his see his face! They kiss! Maan is the prom king n she the queen! she gets her fairytale ending! lovely end! pls post epilogue! thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Amazing story dear , loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 3 - meera could not stop herself again writing about maaneet. here maan & geet were doing well and gelled very well with each other. both found each others common interest. he was actually very happy with spending time with her. he made her to go for grooming. but then suddenly he stopped meeting her. is that why he won his bet...he gone to sam again. geet was hurt see him with sam and she again back to her old self, concentrating on her studies, avoiding maan. after repeatedly calling her he felt what he is missing and tried to pacify her. even told her that he broke with sam. and here meera was again lost in maaneet and forgot about her project.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 4 - oh...sam told geet about the bet between maan & dev. she was again hurt that maan played with her. dev was too smart, already started trying his charm on her and malign her mind against maan. but geet knew him very well. geet was still avoiding him. finally maan got chance to be with her. he asked her for dance and they used this time to clear their minds. he kissed her taking advantage of the dark light. wow...both maan & geet were announced king & queen. so sweetly he asked her to be his girlfriend. she too accepted.
meera vowed not ever mix her hobby and her work. but no one could resist maaneet. she again fall for another story opposite love.
nice story sophie
p.s. is Ex'love ended with part 2c...?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Parts 3 & 4

Simply Fantastic

Meera paying more attention to her foolish mistake than her project
well that is cool too
Maan and Sam always break up and make up that has to be so boring just like a broken record
I'm glad that eventually he realized Geet means more to him than his lifestyle does while Sam on the other hand thought to let Geet know both Maan and Dev had placed a bet on her but Geet also realized that Maan was very apologetic and she could easily see that he meant his words while Dev she realized that he just wanted to further play her

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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Having said my katti to you is not enough.
I enjoyed the style with which you presented the story.

Meera and her deadlines and her craze for stories made it exciting and made me wonder if she would actually get them done.

Super geek Geet was cool in her disdain of Maan

I liked that he had to sweat it out😆

The closeness was genuine and him going back to Sameera made me want to throw my shoe at him but I looked down and they were my fav boots so I didn't😃

Dev was slimy so i will imagine Sameer to be this Dev cause we know Abhinav is hot n of course he would never pull such crap off😆

The prom and the dance was cute but I am glad that they played the piano together.

Piano Maan reminded me of Locket Maan so I loved that

Now I can say I read one of your stories fully.

It was not the one I was planning on but since it was done I could not resist.

Don't stop writing because that would just not make sense.

Post as and when you can.

Sorry I am inadequate with words and my comments are not as colorful and fun as yours

I must have been an teacher in my prev life😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohhh sophieee... 😃 ...
I can totally relate to meera here...IF is addictive...specially wen u find some awesome writers with thier wonderful stories...and of course the evergreen characters of maan and geet...
I am sure many ppl will relate to meera s character here...
And of course the story was also very sweet simple and niceee...
So yesss dat is about it...it was so nice to kow you...:-D...hope to keep in touch...:-D...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1

so Rapunzel
pulling your hair back up?

not done 👎🏼

katti



Katti 😲

There's a saying wonderwomen that goes something like this 'once a freind always a freind' 😆😆
so no katti datti Ok

and ofc pulling my hair back up, its too short already so i cant cut it or else it'll be a bob, and Soph does not do a BOB 😆😆😆😆

🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing story! 😊Thanks 4 some fab stories! 👏⭐️with the end of this there will no more stories frm u 😔 u r a terrific writer! hope u come back one day n post dadi's bride😉 I have hope! Thanks 4 da pm n double marvelous updates! superbly written. Maaneet become closer n r friends! he helps Geet with her music! he suggests s makeover! Geet looks beautiful! she was always beautiful bt hid it! Meera battles with her thesis! her ff is her addiction! love her commentary in between! Geet sees Maan n Sam! she is shattered! they were close! Geet;s feelings well portrayed! she decides 2 avoid Maan! he confronts her! he tells her he n Sam r over!she tells him there was never them! he is the college sweetheart n she the college geek! She leaves in tears! Dev asks her 2 the prom n she says yes! Maan asks n she says she is gng wid Dev! so Geet came to knw abt the bet! Sam told her! Geet livid! Dev blames Maan! Maan says sorry! Geet looks gorgeous! dev is so annoying! Maan came with his sister Annie! Maaneet dance! Maan asks y she came! she says 2 his see his face! They kiss! Maan is the prom king n she the queen! she gets her fairytale ending! lovely end! pls post epilogue! thanks



Your too kind with your words Kwaish, hope is a good thing 😉
Sorry this wont have an epi since i feel it has its ending
but thank you for your lovely words and your constant support

Thank you sweets

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