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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 4 - oh...sam told geet about the bet between maan & dev. she was again hurt that maan played with her. dev was too smart, already started trying his charm on her and malign her mind against maan. but geet knew him very well. geet was still avoiding him. finally maan got chance to be with her. he asked her for dance and they used this time to clear their minds. he kissed her taking advantage of the dark light. wow...both maan & geet were announced king & queen. so sweetly he asked her to be his girlfriend. she too accepted.

meera vowed not ever mix her hobby and her work. but no one could resist maaneet. she again fall for another story opposite love.
nice story sophie
p.s. is Ex'love ended with part 2c...?



Thank yoiu Madhuri, sent an PM regarding Ex-love


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1

Having said my katti to you is not enough.

I enjoyed the style with which you presented the story.

Meera and her deadlines and her craze for stories made it exciting and made me wonder if she would actually get them done.

Super geek Geet was cool in her disdain of Maan

I liked that he had to sweat it out😆

The closeness was genuine and him going back to Sameera made me want to throw my shoe at him but I looked down and they were my fav boots so I didn't😃 that gosh you didn't your fav boots would have shattered my fav phone's screen😆😆😆

Dev was slimy so i will imagine Sameer to be this Dev cause we know Abhinav is hot n of course he would never pull such crap off😆 ofc not Abhinav is a saint in all aspects 😆 cant even imagine the horror, but mind you in the movie'She's all that' Paul Walker played this character 😉 Important fact

The prom and the dance was cute but I am glad that they played the piano together.

Piano Maan reminded me of Locket Maan so I loved that Locket there should be a part two of that

Now I can say I read one of your stories fully.

It was not the one I was planning on but since it was done I could not resist. which one were you planning to read, all are bogus if you ask me n thats a true opinion 😆

Don't stop writing because that would just not make sense. it makes sense to my non-sensical mind 😉

Post as and when you can. yes boss

Sorry I am inadequate with words and my comments are not as colorful and fun as yours, ofc not i loved your comment and it gave me a good laugh, my commens tend to be ? when i know the answer i'll let you know 😆

I must have been an teacher in my prev life😆 dont know about prev life but this life for sure, my very own GF teacher, without you i cant even imagine commenting (my bad n sorry) forget writing 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nish285

Ohhh sophieee... 😃 ...
I can totally relate to meera here...IF is addictive...specially wen u find some awesome writers with thier wonderful stories...and of course the evergreen characters of maan and geet...
I am sure many ppl will relate to meera s character here...
And of course the story was also very sweet simple and niceee...
So yesss dat is about it...it was so nice to kow you...:-D...hope to keep in touch...:-D...



Thank you NISH 🤗

touch base 😉 defo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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one and all for your lovely comments and likes
Edited by sophiexx - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3 & 4

chemistry and music sath sath..anyway these two should go together, right..:)
Dev used the trump card of Sameera to ghusofy her in Maaneet love story..
loved that not only Maan, but Geet too was falling for him..hence his ignorance hurt her..and in turn he felt guilty with it..
wonderful confession and dance in the end
loved the story in the background of Meera's addiction to Maaneet

hope Meera makes the mistake of writing stories once in a while as and when she gets the time..:))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful story. I feel we all are also sailing in the same boat as Meera. Instead of doing our many important works, we are reading MG stories and never afford to miss updates. So perfect ending.
Why are you saying you are not writing any more stories. Are you angry with us or fed up of GF.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well... I need to make a confession and i know it won't be new/surprising for GF friends... I was in college when i started reading maaneet ffs and i was/am no better than Meera !!! 🤣🤪 Frankly speaking.. i don't feel guilty !! 😆 Loved this story with the high-school essence in it !!! Maan was meant to fall for Geet😆.. but poor fellow didn't know that when setting up the bet !! Geet was perfect in her own ways but we know that world assumes stuffs by looks !! 🤢 And finally Maaneet together was a treat !! 😛 Lovely OS !!

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