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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Part 14: CLICK HERE

Do like and comment!

Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.

Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.

Enjoy!

-Mariam

Please ignore the mistakes and I know mostly all the dialogue is in Hindi. But I didn't get the time to translate it into English. So I just post it without editing or making any changes this part. Trust me guys, I am not going thru a very good time phase...and I didn't want to make you guys wait either as I didn't want to lose the few readers I have so I did what I could...

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#432

Maan has a traumatic past.

Seems he has heard dadima. I think now he would be more rude to Geet.

eager to know the truth of that incident.

Take care and update when you can.

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#433

awesome update ..
maan geet ko pareshn karne ka koi mouka nehi choddta ...
loved maaneet's nokjhok . ..geet came to know about maan's past ..
first tym she feel pain to see maan's painful eyes ...
what exactly happened in the past ?m curious to know that ..
can't wait for more ...
tc dear ...

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#434

Ye.. Kya ..
at least poora Past to pata chalta ...
Maan kaha Gaya ...
Daadi ma.. bhi.. pareshan hui hai...
Mujhe to Samajh hi nahi..
aata ki.. Maan ab kya karega ..
as Geet ko Uska Past pata hai..
ab woh kya reaction dega...
Uff..
Dev kaha hai...
Party ka kya hoga...
Daadi Ko itni umr me bhi tension sahi nahi ..
Precap..
Ohh ..
I am waiting for.. next part ...
Update soon...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#435

maan doesnt leave a vhance to make geet work n make her irritated

she is frustrated on maan n always gives names

she was worried for party n she found maans past

dadi told how maan was changed

oh no maan heard dadi narrating his past to geet

he is angry n went from there

nice part

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#436

Shocking Update

I'm eagerly waiting for Maan's past to be revealed

Geet is stands up to Maan and she makes it known to him that she does not need his help she is fine by herself to accomplish her tasks
but now Chandu also bought red ribbons instead of white

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Very painful childhood of maan

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

lovely update geet was cursing and cribbing how maan dragged her to meeting when he knows she has to prepare for the party maan enjoying her plight annoying to the core she couldnt say anything as she couldnt take the cahnce of awaking the sher again nahi to pichli baar to kiss kiya tha agar phir se kuch kahan to kahin kiss se badhkar na karde but maan enjoys her cribbing her cursing and he nonstop talks to her babaji but sherni taunt mare bagair kaise mannne wali hai geet taking cahndus class he is running away very well knowing geet will kill him for sure geet paniking as khadoos will chop her to pieces if party dosent go well dadi calming geet she send geet to store room to get decor where geet found a file that says maan had murdered someone dadi told it was self defense dadi told how she had to take dev to us for treatment leaving maan with his mama and mami she had gotten call from cops that maan was arrested she came to know he killed his mama mami and sona whiom he made friends with but he was changed he never told her though nakuls statement cleared him but no one knows why maan did it as he never talked abt it dadi would tell more but maan came she saw pain in his eyes dadi collapsed geet consoled her

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! well written! Geet refuses help! Chandu brings the red ribbons! Geet angry n stressed! dadi assures Geet! Geet see the file! Dadi tells Geet abt Maan's past! Maan killed Brij, Sona etc! Maan was in DJJ! Nakul's stetemegt saved Maan! Maan changed! Maan heard dadi tell Geet! he leaves! Dadi shattered! Geet takes care of dadi! update soon