Kahe Toh Se Sajna / revised version ch 9 n 10 updated pg23// 2nd Jan - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet had lost her ability to talk n Maan is not in his senses...
but ignoring everyone's suggestions n plea she just him with herself... without even knowing whom he is n wat type of person he is... he may even be a terrorist or something like tat...


but no one easily have tat courage to bring an unknown to their home n luk after thm...especially wen they r not in their conscious state...


n here she had even married him to put a full stop to the society's non-sense talks...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet took a bold decision to bring Maan home, but the society forced her to marry him!! curious to know what's next in store for Maaneet...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy belated Birthday Suhaana Dear...this is for you


Chapter 9



Tera Mera Pyaar Amar, Phir Kyon Mujhako Lagata Hai Dar

Tera Mera Pyaar Amar, Phir Kyon Mujhako Lagata Hai Dar

Mere Jivan Saathi Bata, Kyon Dil Dhadake Rah-Rah Kar


After One Month

Geet ,Maan n Rano a family of three now... They were suffering but still happy Quite possible Maan had no feeling for Geet..a person who had lost ability to feel a mild touch..how could he understand her feelings ? But if he had felt all sufferings this weak girl faced for him to keep him alive Standing alone in front of this society. then he defiantly had respect for her atleast...

After finishing her every day work...Mailing all required documents to a firm in Shimla..She shut down her computer n looked at Maan who was sleeping under effect of medicine..Given to him as a daily routine to keep him unconscious most of times as his mind needed rest...so he couldn't think much if he could...mental stress could just increase swelling of nervous nothing else...

Few days back Leela shifted a bed to Geet's house.Which her (Leela) father had given during her marriage years ago...But Leela n Sham preferred to sleep on cots. Geet was in more need .She had to take care of Maan n sharing same bed could ease her daily works..In this way she wouldn't need to get up from her cot to look after Maan in these chilling nites.

She brushed his hair.Touched his cheek with her hand..A lil smile came to her lips This was her habit now...To gaze him continuously without blink.She was not aware if she was falling for him..But today something unusual happened as she touched Maan's cheek he responded...He came out of sleep not completely but still he was awake. Even after some time blinked his eyes

Geet observed it..stunned..shocked...tears rolled down from her eyes n she ran out of room...Dragged Rano forcibly who was in deep sleep...

Rano : Geet kya hai itni Raat ko mujhe is tarah kyo kheench( pull) ranhi ho. Maan theek hai na ( much disturbed she asked )

Geet nodded in yes...Lil happiness on her face calmed Rano that everything was fine

Rano :But tell me what has happened that u r dragging me..?

Geet looked around..But her slate was in her room.She dragged Rano there n wrote on slate

Geet: Maa Maan reacted to me first time.( what this little improvement mattered to Geet joy in her eyes narrated all to her mother...reading words on slate...)


Rano : Kya ? ( it surprised her )

Geet: Ha...he reacted first time in two months...He ll b fine soon now I am sure ...definitely Maa...( cherished she hugged her mother)

When she said this Rano's happiness suddenly disappeared..thinking about Her daughter's future .


What she would do if Maan denied to accept her...But Geet was happy to be with him...Her whole world had been limited to this house.


She was a machine now.Her hands was such like some wounded her intentionally with lots of scars on it.


Coz she was working more than her mother...Kitting at nite after finishing her work Looking after Maan.She also took charge of sewing Blouses..Petticoats.And needle work always gave pain to her.Maan's daily needs were enough that her hands were such..But she never regretted...This was her own decision...


Rano left after short while.But Geet was in other world...Her selfless hard work had started to response.


She closed door n set next to Maan


He was expressing his restlessness moving his head lil while..Geet estimated it was cold n Maan's quilt had been slipped..He was shivering.She covered him completely n slipped to same quilt. Hugged him tightly...Brushing his hair.After some time he again slept in her arms.But same fear to loose him now started to disturb her like her mother...


She didn't want to loose him.She held him more tightly


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Tera Mera Pyaar Amar, Phir Kyon Mujhako Lagata Hai Dar
Tera Mera Pyaar Amar, Phir Kyon Mujhako Lagata Hai Dar
Mere Jiwan Sathi Bata,kyonn dil dadhke reh reh kar

Kya Kaha Hai Chaand Ne, Jisako Sunke Chaandani
Har Lahar Pe Jhum Ke, Kyon Ye Naachane Lagi
Chaahat Ka Hai Harasu Asar, Phir Kyon Mujh Ko Lagata Hai Dar
Tera Mera Pyaar Amar, Phir Kyon Mujhako Lagata Hai Dar

Kah Raha Hai Mera Dil, Ab Ye Raat Na Dhale
Khushiyon Ka Ye Silasila, Aise Hi Chala Chale
Tujhako Dekhun, Dekhun Jidhar, Phir Kyon Mujh Ko Lagata Hai Dar
Tera Mera Pyaar Amar, Phir Kyon Mujhako Lagata Hai Dar

Hai Shabaab Par Umang, Har Khushi Javaan Hai
Meri Donon Baahon Men, Jaise Aasmaan Hai
Chalati Hun Main Taaron Par,
Phir Kyon Mujh Ko Lagata Hai Dar
Tera Mera Pyaar Amar, Phir Kyon Mujhako Lagata Hai Dar


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Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
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Chapter 10


When Geet got up it was quite late around eight.She was in same position in which she was at nite. Holding Maan in her arms. He was sleeping peacefully like child. Hiding his face in Geet's bosoms..
It was bit surprising for Geet coz til now She always found Maan awake at this time But in same posture looking at roof.Today he was sleeping.When she tried to get up...it disturbed him n he rubbed his light stubble beside Geet's chest She slowly shifted him to pillowfrom her bosom.

Geet had a lil smile look at his face.How beautiful he might be,when he was totally alright.Perfect features Beautiful big broad eyes from those emotions had been vanished.His perfect M shaped lips not able to smile or tell what he wanted .? .. What kind of pain he was going through..Geet touched her face n rolled hand over his hair..

Ya she was not wrong..He could feel n respond to it ..It worked...He felt her.He opened his eyes slowly .Besides looking at roof he was glaring Geet..Who was smiling...She kissed him on cheek . A teardrop from her eyes fell on Maan's cheek But she wiped that away.

She got up from bed.As usual Rano judged from little noise in room that Geet was awake now...Rano called her

Rano: Geet aaj bahut soyi na ..maine jagaya nahi...tumko bhi aaram chahea... nahi to kaam kaam bas yahi ( she said without looking backward)

Geet came to her n hugged her tightly.

Rano: Geet maine Pani garam karne k liye rakh diya hai..tu pehle chaaye pe lay.( She gav her cup )

Geet looked at Rano n pointed her finger toward her room

Rano : Accha Maan bhi uth gaya hai .Pani Garam hoga tabhi to Maan k liye logi paani..tab tak chaaye pe lo...(She gave Geet cup of tea)

But Geet nodded her head in denial...Rano took a deep breath looking at her .After giving Maan sponge bath changing his clothes.N feeding him with semi solid material soaked in warm milk as doctor prescribed ..Spending two hours on Maan Geet had her breakfast. He was sleeping now peacefully.

Around 2 O Clock Rahul came...He was free for two days so he asked to be with Geet for Maan's routine check up and Geet also had to tell doctor about the incident happened last nite.Actually Rahul was aware of check up date coz last time he was also with them so he took leave for two days without letting anybody know.He was still standing beside Geet..

Next day at hospital

Doctor was happy to find improvement in him.He was much confident now about Maan...

Doctor: Here so many patients come.n after treatment we discharge them.But only handful of people became familiar to us...Moreover when they come in front of us only then we can recognise them...But in this case I need just ur name Geet.What u r doing for Maan n Rahul for u that makes u exception.? ( he praised both with high spirits)

Rahul: Thax Doctor, but It was u due to whom Maan is recovering..What we alone could do...Per ha yeh to hai...jo Geet ne kiya koi nahi kar pata .She stood alone against society n If I did some thing that was my respect for her..its Honor for me if I contributed lil bit in her noble cause...( he looked at her with full pride)

Geet looked at Rahul..She pointed her finger toward herself then nodded her head.to say that she did nothing great. She again pointed her finger toward Rahul n held his hand in her hands that he gave support to her.Doctor smiled looking at them what kinda relations they share .

Doctor: Chalo ek dusre ko praise karte rahe to bas aagay ka kaam reh jayega. Maine kush reports dekh le hai..Result showed little improvment...But I have to check some reports in detail..So u will get those reports tomorrow.

Rahul: Theek hai main kal le jayuga.Maan ka check kar liya aapne..aur agar reports dekh kar koi nahi medicine etc deni hui ..I ll handle. (he suggested)

Doctor: No no u need not to come.Actually There is person Bharat Singh is ur village na...(doctor had something in his mind to tell )


Rahul : Bharat Singh? ( whose that ?thought )

Doctor: Ya Jo Mandir k pass rehte hai ..unko major attack hua tha..but he is fine now.They insisted me to join them his grandson's Naamkaran..I hav no time.Per unho ne bahut jorr diya k I saved Mr Singh's lif so they wanted to share their happiness. I m coming there tomorrow n ll hand over reports to Geet Aur reports bhi wahi discuss kerlygay. ( so its fine he was coming ..Rahul need not to visit)

Rahul: Oh ya Bharat Tau Ji...ya there is function.We r also invited.Actually unko sabhi Tau Ji kehte hai so Bharat kon hai pehli baar patta nahi chalta.So that's fine doctor (so confusion was clear after details who was he )

It was not less than a miracle for Doctor also 😃Swelling inside his brain system had been reduced lil bit.Nobody knew reason of this improvement... whether The reason was physical improvement which was due to Geet's hard work as she followed what doctor asked strictly...or Maan's peace of mind which was also due to her...That love n assurance to have a safe life given by this girl .Which reduced burden on Maan's mind .

Next Day after function Rano who was in there to attend...Took Doctor to her home. Rahul had left for his work informing Rano.As His boss called to complete a big order on emergency basis n He should b there.


Rano: Geet doctor Saab aa gaye.


She called Geet .Who was applying fall to Saree.She placed Sarree near by table to bed n moved out n wished Doctor.


Rano asked for tea.But he refused as He had enough in ceremony lunch.So Rano n Geet set beside him .

Rano: Doctor saab everything okey ? ( she was asking on behalf of Geet )

Doc: Ya reports I hav checked there is nothing to worry about..But I hav to discuss a serious topic with u . ( he was feeling hesitant to say )

Rano: What ? ( confused)

Doc: Its good that Rahul is not here..other wise it was bit difficult to discuss.

Both mother daughter looked toward doctor in amazement...What was such that doctor couldn't speak up..



Sonia



Its reposting of story ...so up to u wanna read or not...

Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update maan was sleeping peacefully in geets arms geet was wondering how peacefully he slept but the moment she put him down he was glaring as if saying he wants to sleep more in her arms she was taking care of him he was getting better thanks to geets care and love rahul was proud of geet of what she is doing for a complete stranger doc came to see maan he wanted to discuss abt maan something very serious
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Posted: 9 years ago
Every time read this story makes me cry
She is fallen angel to maan & her selfless heart will cure him soon
Both beautiful intriguing update
Thanks you so much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates
maan was sleeping in geet's arms
she is taking care of him
doctor came to see maan
he wants to discuss something serious
continue soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update geet maan ka khayal rakha raha hai aur maan geet ka touch ko response vi kar raha hai aur geet khush hai maan ka improve hota dekha kar aur ya doctor kis barema baat karna chahta hai.. Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update di
nw maan is respondng 2 geet's touch nd it was geet's habbit 2 be wit maan most of d time she startd 2 wrk so much
maan slept peacfuly in geet's arm
doc tld dat der is lil improvement in maan's condition nw doc want e discuss abt maan's report when rahul was nt present
waitng 4 d nxt part di update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Happy New Year! Thanks 4 da pm n double awesome updates! well written! Maan is lucky 2 have Geet! she is an Angel! Geet works hard! Rano wonders if Maan will accept Geet! Maan responding 2 Geet! Maan sleeps in her arms! Doc wants 2 discuss abt Maan! update soon

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