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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

maanya ready to get inside ot

maan came to her n said her all those words to keep her strong

his genes in her

how cant she f8 back

his fatherly love overtaking him

he placed the sindoor n let her taken to ot

adi w8ing outside to give first aid to him

but maan denied other than asking for slippers..

all were pacing n he was w8ing for the ot to finish

he thought 2 comfort geet

but her words told her how strong she is..

n her effect on him is only growing

ot was successful n maanya calling for maan..

the small heart was saying how she felt lying on dirty road n none helped her

other than maan n adi..

maan saying all soothing n comforting words..

she was injected n kept to sleep

maan collapsed..

vicky thinks it as a new drama..

geet slaps him for it..

n supports maan

vicky is scared what if maan snatches the childrens..

n its making him insane..

but geet is r8..maan was never a drame baaz..

he knew to hide but not act..

awesome part..

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: jj23
sry i didnt like this update...maan won evry1 with one act...n vicky's efforts for years jst got wasted

its ur point of view...how u can say Maan won ?...what Geet said...he was just a saviour for her...and why Maanya angry with Vicky...she is just a child...she always did that before too if u have read the story...Here only I tried to bring the hidden side of Maan in front ...I am not making him the superhero at once but what was hidden that want to bring in front ...his real side...and what he hadn't realized still...and this is the truth some time some day every person realize something or other important.

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rice

@rice

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

i REQUESTED for the password many times. seems like you missed sending it. Now without password I can't read and can't comment. so you won't send password again because no comment from me. So I gave up in the end. how can I comment if i don't know the story. I feel bad that I cannot follow your story but unless you decide to send me the password i can't do anything.

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rice

@rice

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

thanks for the password. now I will read the missing parts in piece and will let you know my opinion soon.

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

thanks for pw
its amazing update.
i really loved maan and maanya scene,its amazing writien.maanya call maan first she get conscious.maanya tell all incident to her mommy.maan is unconscious bcoz of pain and hunger.vicky says its drama geet slap him.waiting for next part

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shalu1786

@shalu1786

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

nice update.

maanya is fine.

maan is unconscious.

vicky is insecure..

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zida

@zida

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

wating 4 PW .I am ur raguler reader dear .pls pm me.

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srikrithi

@srikrithi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Nice update.
So maan is a savi our in eyes of geet.
Vicky is jealous & insecure.
Maanya is getting closer to man with this incident.
Hope maan 's nature comes in front of everyone.
Continue soon.

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srikrithi

@srikrithi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Nice update.
So maan is a saviour in eyes of geet.
Vicky is jealous & insecure.
Maanya is getting closer to man with this incident.
Hope maan 's nature comes in front of everyone.
Continue soon.

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Powerful update. Maan has connected emotionally with maanya and even Geet witnessed that. Vicky is perhaps feeling insecure so he is behaving like this.

Thanks for pwd.

Edited by fict - 9 years ago

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