TS: It's in those eyes (Readers Vs Writers Challenge)

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

interesting start..a suspense thriller...
that was scary for her to be there whole night..all alone in the mansion with a dead body..
and now her own curiosity or may be something about the dead man, overpowered her fear, intrigued her to know more about him, search his pockets and other things without waiting for the arrival of the police or the watchman..she has probably stuck into a worse situation now..

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Is it it suspense thriller with romance...

Like the story 1st part..

Will b waiting for next...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

There can't be any story from you that we don't love & this one is also fantastic!

Please update the next part soon

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

WOW!! interesting storyline dear...loved it

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Waiting for the next update

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wow... It's soo different dear. And I am already feeling it's gonna be fabulous. Is the dead man maan? And how will geet survive with a dead body in the house and y has she not contacted anyone? Lot of questions only u can answer. Waiting for it dear...

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

lovely update great start to os so geet had come runing to her friends house she went to drink water when she came back only to get stumped into a dead body getting highly scared she was shocked and didnt know what to do she belonged to a small village where girls werent alloweed to study but she got the oppturnity thanks to her father she studies in city her uncle was against her and in order to punish her he fixed her marriage with an illeterate goon she ran to save herself and decided to hide in her firends home where she stumped on a body she checked whether he was alive or not she found a gun even scared more when she found a hanky dont tell me its maan

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

awesome ts...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Geet ran away from her home to come to her best friend's farm house...😎...but what wasn't expected was that she had to spend her time with a dead body...😲...After her father's death her chacha has fixed her marriage with an illiterate boy and that's why Geet had to run away......Geet was too scared to spend the night with that dead body but finally she took up the courage to do that...👍🏼...she searched the pockets of that man and found his name to be MVSK...🤔...is it Maan...😕...that means in this story we won't see Maaneet uniting...😭...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...