TS: It's in those eyes (Readers Vs Writers Challenge)

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Nice OS...

Geet escaped from her chacha and stuck in a lone home with a dead body...

I never expect that the dead body is Maan..

Wish to read more parts from this OS... Waiting to know how maan was dead and came in her friends place...

Continue soon...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

A Brilliant And Adventurous Start

Geet had to escape as her Chacha wanted her to marry a rich but illiterate boy

she came into the jungle at one of her friends place only to meet up with a dead body

in the house with no other source around there is absolutely nothing Geet can do but keep

the dead body in the house

please do continue

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

It was a little bit scary .overall it was great concept. geet run away from her home as her uncle fixed her aliance with an illiterate man .after having no other option she left her home and reached at some spooky place. Geet was relived but OMG there was a dead body. Geet was so much scared. Collecting whole her strength , she hided in some room and anyhow spent whole night. In the morning she saw that body with concentration . waiting for next dear

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Interesting start. Geet is running from his uncle and went to her friend's farmhouse to hide for few days. There she found a dead body. She is scared but have no other choice than to stay there.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

maan maad gaya?...

interesting starting...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

interest concept loved it

waiting for updates

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Superb Start.. I loved it 😃 👏
Har chacha is such a manhoos insan lol destroyed her certificates.. I'm glad geet's friend helped her in escaping.. 😊
Geet took rest in friend's farmhouse but whose that dead guy 😲 😲
Haaye Allah don't tell me Maan Mara hua hai 😆 😲
Would like u to continue it 😳