Maneet FF : Unconditionally In Love (Chapter 1 - Page 6) 21/11 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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all the best dear.awesome continue it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting teaser... this is forced marriage for maaneet
waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

Very interesting tzr..
So different concept from other stories...
So eager to read it.
Update soon ..
nd thanks for pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: metromasti

interesting teaser... this is forced marriage for maaneet
waiting for update
thanks for pm

Thank you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh no!! I did a small blunder here, I should have use Yash name instead of Rishabh!! Anyway here Rishabh and Maan looks alike.

Thank you for your previous comments.

Chapter 1

Amritsar,

Geet comes inside doctor's cabin along with Radha, her mother - in-law, doctor checks her.

Radha worriedly asks : Doctor is everything alright?

Doctor smiles at them and replies : Everything is fine. Infact I have a good news.

Geet shyly looks down when Radha looks at them confuse.

Doctor : She is Pregnant.

Radha's face delights, she caresses Geet's face and kiss of her forehead and says : I am so happy for you.

Geet happily hugs her. Then doctor instructs her, and prescribes her the medicines. They happily leaves.

At resident,

Geet is excitedly waiting for her husband's arrival, she wants to share the news with him.

Geet thinks : Where are you Rishabh!! Please come soon.

She then gets busy in her household works. In the evening, Geet is impatiencely waiting for Rishabh when he walks in tired and lays on the bed.

Geet : You looks so tired.

Rishabh doesn't say anything when she continues : Rishabh I have a good news for you.

But as Rishabh again doesn't say anything, she asks annoy : Rishabh, are you listening?

Rishabh : Yes Geet.

Geet : No!! You aren't. Fine, you sleep. I will come later.

She gets up to leave when he hold her and pulls her back, in which she falls on his chest.

She utters : Rishabh!!

He wraps his arm around her waist and says : Yes Geet.

She pushes him to free herself : Leave me!! Now you haven't time for me.

Rishabh : Okay sorry. Now tell me, what are you saying!!

He says and places a kiss on her cheek, she blushes and says : Actually Rishabh I..

Rishabh : You what?

Geet : I... I am pregnant.

Rishabh : Okay!!

His statement makes her shock for a second, but as he realizes what she said, he jumps : What!! What you said?

Geet shyly looks down and nods, Rishabh lifts her in his arm happily.

Rishabh : I love you Geet.

She hugs him.

****

Next morning,

Geet walks out from washroom and sees her husband sleeping so peacefully, that bring a smile on her face, she admire him for sometime and suddenly realize the time, so she walks to the bed to wake him.

Geet : Rishabh wake up!!

He lazily moves and says : Two minute more please.

Geet pulls the duvet and says : No!! Wake up my lazy boy.

He open his eyes and lovingly sees her, then says : Good morning.

She smiles, continues : Only good morning?? Don't you have nothing to say?

Rishabh : What?

Geet frees herself from his grip and gets up and says : Nothing.

She leaves. Rishabh smiles and thinks : How can I forget this day. Get ready for the surprise.

***

In evening,

Geet is waiting for Rishabh's arrival when the door bell rings, she opens the door and receive a box and flower bookey.

She opens the gift box and saw a red saree, she smiles happily, then she sees a note. She reads : Get ready!! I am coming.

Geet thinks : That mean he remembered.

She goes to change, she wears the saree with matching bangels and put some light make up, then she takes the vermillion box but suddenly it slips from her hand, she gets worried.

Geet : This is a bad omen!! Bappa, please never let anything bad happen with him.

She prays and then put the vermillion on her hair partition.

Mumbai,

His assistant is presenting a presentation, he is listening while leaning on his leather chair, as he ends, his clients claps.

"Well done!! I am impressed." One of the client says, he simply smiles.

"So, we are ready to work with you Mr. Khurana." They gets up from chair and shakes hand.

***

Maan walks in his cabin and takes a sit, Aditya follows him.

Maan : What happen Adi? Why are you following me?

Adi : Sir, do you think you did right by signing the contract?

Maan glares at back at him and says arrogantly : Who is the boss Adi?

He lowers his eyes and says : Sorry sir.

Maan : Adi I want to own that company anyhow!!

Suddenly he gets a call and says : Yes Annie! I am coming.

He hangs up the call and says : Adi I am going home, you look after all the work.

Adi : Sure sir.

Khurana Mansion,

As Maan walks in Mrs. khurana hugs him and says : Always late!!

Maan smiles : Sorry!! Now lets go and perform the puja.

She perform the puja along with Mr. Khurana, Annie and Dev.

Annie : Maa, why did you always light up four diya, we are three.

Mrs. Khurana smiles and says : When time comes, you will come to know.

Meanwhile Maan stares at them confuse, as she finish the puja, he takes blessings and leaves for office again. Mrs. Khurana prays : God!! Always keep my childs safe.

Suddenly one diya lite off, she gets worried.

***

Geet is waiting for Rishabh, suddenly she gets a call from her office who informs about the contract with Khurana Chain'. She gets so happy and hangs the call.

Geet thinks : Rishabh please come soon.

Suddenly he gets call from Rishabh 's phone, she receive the call and gets shocked.

***

Geet walks in the ICU, there he is lying, taking his last breath.

Doctor : We tried our best but he has many internal injuries!! We are sorry.

Geet walks to him and calls him : Rishabh..

As he opens his eyes, she breaks down into tears and hugs him tightly.

Geet : No, you can't leave me like this. You promised me to be with me always. You can't break your promise.

She cries while hugging him, he is lying on bed and taking his last breath, he says with a difficult : No Geet, be strong. You know I can't see you in pain. Even I don't want to go but I have no option. I haven't enough time left. Please don't cry, bid me with a smile.

Geet : I can't.

She again hugs him tightly, somehow he manages to make her look at him and says : Geet promise me... You will start a new life. You will get married. I can't see you in pain, you have to move on with someone else. Please.

Geet : No... Stop your nonsense. You are nowhere going. Understand?

He says : I have to go!! Please make it easy for me. Promise me Madhu!!

She cries : No!!

He says : Okay!! Not for yourself but for our Unborn child. Our baby needs a father. I know a child needs the mother most but they needs a father too. I will not be there anymore to give the love to our child. So please move on, it's my last wish. Please Geet!!

His words makes her think, she simply nods and says : I can't give your place to anyone. I love you and I will love you only. No one can ever replace you. But... But I can't promise you, but I will try to move on, for our child only.

Suddenly his pulse rises, he starts breathing heavily, he says : Thank... Thank you Geet. I love you.

He closes his eyes, Geet hugs him tightly and cries : I love you too Rishabh.

Radha and Mohan cries for their son and Geet gets senseless right there.

***

Waiting for your comments.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update Thnx for pm as m maaneet fan i liked the maaneet version of the story more geet happily married to rishab and pregnant rishab dead maan own kc waiting to know more update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting start . geet was married to rishabh & expecting but something bad happened in her life , her husband was dead . another side maan is a businessman ... owner of kc .
waiting for next .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
feeling bad for geet
its heart touching
may she also got happiness in future and can move on
and hope maan will help her
thanx for pm
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice update dear geet is happy married and carry her love but her husband met with accident and left the world by thanking pronto move on her life and marry
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
starting mein hi rula diye...age kya bolun...

painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


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