Maneet FF : Unconditionally In Love (Chapter 1 - Page 6) 21/11

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Hey friends, first time I am going to start Maneet FF, well I already started it on Rishbala, just reposting it here. I hope you will like it.

Please do read and comment.

New readers please buddy me to get pm.

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Unconditionally In Love

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Geet : No, you can't leave me like this. You promised me to be with me always. You can't break your promise.

She cries while hugging him, he is lying on bed and taking his last breath, he says with a difficult : No Geet, be strong. You know I can't see you in pain. Even I don't want to go but I have no option. I haven't enough time left. Please don't cry, bid me with a smile.


Geet : I can't.


She again hugs him tightly, somehow he manages to make her look at him and says : Geet promise me... You will start a new life. You will get married. I can't see you in pain, you have to move on with someone else. Please.


Geet : No... Stop your nonsense. You are nowhere going. Understand?


He says : I have to go!! Please make it easy for me. Promise me Geet!!


She cries : No!!


He says : Okay!! Not for yourself but for our Unborn child. Our baby needs a father. I know a child needs the mother most but they needs a father too. I will not be there anymore to give the love to our child. So please move on, it's my last wish. Please Geet!!


His words makes her think, she simply nods and says : I can't give your place to anyone. I love you and I will love you only. No one can ever replace you. But... But I can't promise you, but I will try to move on, for our child only.


Suddenly his pulse rises, he starts breathing heavily, he says : Thank... Thank you Geet. I love you.


He closes his eyes, Geet hugs him tightly and cries : I love you too Rishabh.


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Geet is sitting on wedding altar, dressed as a bride, she looks at her groom once and a year escape from her eyes.


She thinks : I love you Rishabh. I am moving on as I promised you. But I will never give your place to this stranger. He will never become my husband ever, I will always consider him as my child's father. Why did you left me and our unborn baby? How can you think that anyone else can love me and our baby more than you. Today, my name is changing from Geet Kundra to Geet Khurana but my heart will never change. It will always beat for you only, your love will always remain with me.


Maan thinks : I hate you from bottom of my heart. How can maa get me married to a strange girl. Okay if ma forced but how can she accepted me. I will never love you and never give you the rights of wife. I will make your life hell to the extent then you have no option left, except to leave me!!!


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How's the teaser guys? Something different from other stories. I hope you will like it. Please vote it, if you liked!!
Edited by ..snow_flake.. - 9 years ago
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nice
geet and maan force to marry each other
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Originally posted by: sanum23

nice

geet and maan force to marry each other

Yeah!! somewhere 😉
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congrats on the FF! interesting teaser! Maan n Geet forced 2 marry each other! Geet married Maan bt only as she promised Rishabh! She will never love Maan! Maan vows 2 make her life hell so she will leave him! waiting 4 update
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Interesting teaser. Maan and Geet are married against their wish. Geet had to marry him for her child and Townsville's last wish. Update soon.
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Intriguing teaser ..!! Update soon.

If possible PM me 😳
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#0000cc">congrats on the FF! interesting teaser! Maan n Geet forced 2 marry each other! Geet married Maan bt only as she promised Rishabh! She will never love Maan! Maan vows2 make her life hell so she will leave him! waiting 4 update</font>

Thank you dear
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Originally posted by: -1Taurus1-

Intriguing teaser ..!! Update soon.

If possible PM me 😳

Sure!! please accept my buddy request. And thank you.
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Thank you dear

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