MG-FF~The Myth~Thread-6~UPDATED~ Pt 64 ** Pg 137 ** 18th Oct. ***** ** - Page 80

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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly waiting for update. Have been reading all ur updates and loving them. sorry for not commenting so far. MY mobile and internet spped is a big problem.
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Hope Geet's MU gets cleared soon. Can't wait for them to get closer.
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My dear friends 🤗
Updating

Thank you my dear friends





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The Myth

( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 62


Part - 63



😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..
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How do I fix this?
The shattered remains of an imperfect relationship?
Tell me what tools to use,
I will work for hours,
Rebuild those walls that enclosed us,
My hands will bleed,
My body will sweat,
But it will be worth it in the end,
Because I will have you again.


Maan felt relieved after talking to his family ,, he cn sense d happiness in his DM nd Mom's voices ,, how a lil +ive response was making them happy ,, he thanked God that at least he did something good for all ,, he destroyed everything within hrs in d gush of his selfishness , but now taking days nd nights to built a small place to stand near Geet ,, every step was filled of rejection nd hurting stones ,, wounded him deep , but he had to bear all to fix d scattered pieces of his relation with all .

He finished some of his works nd study nd then slept remembering Geet ,, he was excited that now Geet wd go with him in d mrng ,, hope he cd stay more close to her , like she lived here in opposite lane ,nd something hit him .. If she cd live , then why cdn't he ? A plan struck to him nd he slept with a smile on his lips.

Next day start well like before ,, while taking his BF Maan called his property broker to find a nice place in XYZ area nd lane ,, d broker told him to meet at eve,, Maan agreed nd then left with a smile to pick Geet ,, he called DJ nd said that he was reaching there to pick Geet,, Geet was ready nd standing at d gate with Kabir nd DJ with pouted face ,, it pained him that she was not happy going with him , but he cdn't lose this chance to remain close to her for her care .. after all they(geet nd baby) wr his family ,, he wished GM to DJ nd Kabir ,, Kabir patted geet back nd gestured him to sit ,, she sat leaving a deep sigh nd fastened her seat belt,, they bade bye to DJ nd Kabir nd moved, Maan looked at her with smile .

Maan : Hi , GM Geet ,, plzz start ur day with smile .

Geet gave him a glare nd taunt : I m not ur GF who start ur day with love filled smile nd kisses ( it pinched Maan )

Maan hurt: why u brought her in every talk ,, I know it hurts u ,, plzz keep this thought away from u .

Geet took a long breath nd looked out : this wound is my wedding gift , how cn I forget that ,, any way, this car pool is going to raise many Qs , so be ready mr MK .

Maan 's heart bleed at her taunt , they reached at college nd Maan stopped d car in parking,, come out nd opened Geet's side door.

Maan: be careful Geet ,, nd i'll wait for u in break time .

Geet : why u r bunking ur classes after break ? i'll go by cab ,, u carry on with ur study .

Maan locked d car nd both started to walk , he asked to pick her lappy bag , but she refused .

Maan : i'll manage for a day , don't worry ,, they entered in d corridor , Adi nd few more friends saw them together ,, they wr shocked seeing them talking normally .

Adi : WOW!! Surprise of d day ,, MK nd Geet wr talking ,, what happened buddies ?

Geet gave a nervous smile ,, she knew it wd come so decided to reply 1st , which was really a hit for Maan .

Geet: yes Adi , it's DJ nd uncle who put me in this pit , now I have to bear him daily ,, I m car pooling with him .

Adi: what , car pooling , how ?

Maan smartly : simple Adi , I bought a car nd offer her to pick nd drop ,, our route nd college r same ,, nd u know my DM knew DJ .

Adi remembered that Maan said that before too : Oh yeah , u said that ,, but it good Geet , it's better than cab .

Geet made a face , nd glared at Maan ,, who gave her a winning smile raising his eyebrow .

Other friend: Geet , stop giving him attitude dear ,, why r u angry with him nd Sam ? (ouch).

Geet : it's matter of personal likings buddy ,, do u like nd talk to each nd every person in d college ? I think No .

3rd frnd: u r right here Geet , but try to ignore , everyone have some flaws , neither u , nor other cn change themselves for others , but cn ignore easily to make a normal rapport .

Adi : yes Geet ,, try to ignore nd open up .

Pinky joined them : GM all , hey GM my sweet babies , what happened , why so grumpy ? mood swing in d mrng ?

Adi: no sweetheart , we r making Geet to be friendly with MK ,, see his DM nd Geet's DJ knew each other , but u know Geet ,, now her DJ nd uncle made her for car pooling with MK , nd she is still angry .

Pinky: Ooww ,, car pooling with MK , really odd combination for Geet ( she smiled ) MK , Geet u never said before that u knew each other .

Geet : it's my DJ sweety .

Maan: yeah pinky , My parents nd DM visited here in holidays ,, I told them about Geet nd DJ , then she told that she knew her .

Geet smirked looking at Maan : Yes , otherwise we never knew each other ,, didn't even meet in India or in my pind (ouch),, it was our classical ladies that he's standing beside me .

Maan : Geet not only elders , u know me well bcoz of FH work too ,, guys my Co is developing Kabir uncle's farm nd I design d FH .

Geet : u design ? hhaa.. that was my plan , nd u only correct that tech. ,, Mr MK u cn't speak d truth ,, any way friends I m going for d class , want to sit .

Pinky: yeah go baby , see u later , bye.

Geet moved from there , relieved that one hurdle was clear ,, frnds got why she came with MK , but for Maan it was not easy,, he was looking at Geet's retreating figure ,, Geet's words ..Mr MK u cn't speak d truth wr pricking him ,, she was right ,, he was not in that position to say What Geet was for him ? nd it was an insult for him ,, students openly using Sam name with him in front of Geet which was hurting for her nd humiliating for him .

It was extremely painful to pretend that they wr strangers ,, here he was able to say that his DM nd DJ knew each other , but months before how much it was insulting nd painful for Geet ,, she was preg ,, said almost whole truth about her that she was married nd her husband left her , but hide his name , though he was in front of her nd living with Sam ...God!!! How brutally he wounded her .

Maan felt suffocated nd chocked ,, excused himself nd went to his class quietly ,, now he cdn't redo anything to make them perfect, but he cd go to any extant to keep Geet happy .

Geet took half day leave on med grant nd Maan too submit his request for half day leave nd came out ,, when Geet came out from her class found Maan waited for her .

Maan: hi ,, free,, chalen ?

Geet: yeah , but Mr MK , better u don't affect ur study bcoz of me ,, i'll manage , like I was doing before,, there is no need of u .

Maan: I know u never need me , but it's my need , our families need ,, plzz let me do , come .

Geet sighed deeply caressed her baby bump slowly , where she felt movements nd start walking towards parking ,, he kept their bags at back seats nd help Geet in settling properly ,, took driving seat nd drove out ,, conti 3 hrs sitting made her lil tired nd yawned ,, she wanted to eat something , but kept quiet ,, she called DJ nd informed that she was on d way to hsptl ,, rest of d day was packed for her ,, 1st in court nd then her med check-up .( she yawned again ) nd maan noticed that .

Maan: Geet , feeling tired ?

Geet: hummm ,, sitting from 3 hrs .

Maan: wants to eat something , we cn stop at any place .

Geet: no, it's OK , will be late , have to reach on time in d court , DJ nd uncle r waiting .

Maan: OK, but there is an ice-cream parlor on d way ,, nd u cn eat in d car ,, shell we ?

D name of ice-cream made her mouth watery nd she gulped ,, Maan sensed her hesitation , she wanted , but stopping herself ,, after covering some distance he stopped d car in front of a building , it was B&R ice-cream parlor.

Maan: Geet which flavor ?

Geet: wo , i'll go .

Maan , no u stay here , I m going to take , which one?

Geet : strawberry crush .

Maan beamed nd went ,, he came out within 5 mn with a mid tub of ice-cream ns handed Geet.

Maan: have it baby , hope u feel fresh nd full.

Geet gave a faint smile nd thanked him ,, she opened d tub gulping her saliva .

Geet: it's too much ,, why u buy big tub ? I won't be able to finish it .

Maan smiled : have as much as u cn , nd leave rest .

Geet: wd u like to share ?

Maan: 1st u take nd then leave when u feel full .

Geet: hum ,, OK.

Geet started enjoying her IC ,, Maan was taking glances now nd then with a smile ,, his heart felt a hope when he saw her licking her lips with her pink tongue ,, Geet finished more than half tub ,, she was full nd satisfied with this ice-cream treat .

Geet: bas , I m full .

Maan: sure , u like it ?

Geet: yeah ,, thanks .

Maan smiled : thanks to u , nd here we r .

They entered d hsptl gate ,, Maan parked d car nd opened his seatbelt .

Maan: OK , give me d rest IC.

Geet sadly : sorry , but ye to jhooti ho gai .

Maan took d tub from her hand nd started eating with a smile.

Maan: I don't have any prob ,, tumhara hi jhoota hei na .. chalega .

Geet awed : but ...

Maan: sshh,, chup , no issue , let me enjoy my IC now.

Maan finished d IC with a smile nd Geet was staring at him ,, his free behaviour made her confused .

They came out from d car nd Maan locked d car ,, they reached at recp nd Geet gave her intro , nd then they went to Dr Kabir's chamber .


Precap ---- starting of new relations ...


Part - 64


sorry for mistakes...




Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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😆😆 etni khush ho gai ...
Hi Tama dear ..🤗
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😆😆 Its so sweet...
love ur dance tama..
how r u ..?
kahan ho Delhi ya ghar per ..?
holidays start ya nahi..?


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m good.. what's about U...
Yay yay.. M at home...

time for holidays...
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haan itni khushi..
itne din baad tu ayi aur main abal ayi...
yayeee

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