MG-FF~The Myth~Thread-6~UPDATED~ Pt 64 ** Pg 137 ** 18th Oct. ***** **

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The Myth




The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



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Index

Thread - 1

Thread - 2

Thread - 3


Thread - 4



Thread - 5
Thread - 6


Part - 54

Part - 55

Part - 56

Part - 57

Part - 58

Part - 59

Part - 60

Part - 61

Part - 62

Part - 63

Part - 64

Part - 65



Thread - 7






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Character Sketch


Maan Singh Khurana

Geet Handa
Mahinder Handa

Rano Handa

Darji

Pummi (geet's bua)

Mr YashRaj Khurana
Mrs Reema Khurana
Mrs Savitri Devi Khurana (Dadima)

Fareeda , DaiJaan (geet's Daimaa)

Dev & Meera (Maan's younger bro nd bhabhi)

Tejinder & Lakhvinder Handa (geet's bros)


Sameera Reddy

Kabir Siddu
some more according d flow of story...












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The Myth

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The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 53


Part - 54



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It was totally a give nd take compromise formally ,,Geet counted Maan's timely help nd some favour for her ,, as he threatened her before , he remained around her ,helped her nd take care of her , even think much more for her nd brought a buggi too ,, she was not ready to bent as a used girl nd wife whom he rejected her , but she cdn't deny this truth too , that her baby's exist bcoz of him ,, for his family she had to bear him infront of her , even in coming days she wd be back in college nd had to bear him nd his GF too ,, it didn't matter her that he was with Sam or not ,, what went between him nd his family she didn't know ,, here for all he was in relationship with Sam nd his status was unmarried ,, he cdn't change d lie , nd she wdn't give him any chance ,, lets see what he wd do ?

They had their lunch together ,, Maan enjoyed every bit ,, DJ called him when he was out nd he assured her that he was around her nd she was fine ,, DJ called Geet too nd reminded her to take proper meals nd meds ,, Geet assured her nd said that d food cooked by her was near to finish , that relaxed DJ ,, Maan asked when she wanted to go back ,, d thought of separation was started hurting him ,, he wanted to stay with her .

Maan: when r u going back ,, some more wrkrs r coming by eve ?

Geet: OK , they'll also live here ?

Maan: yes ,, some we hire from here .

Geet: OK ,, do they have families too?

Maan: don't know , let them come then we'll know.

Geet: it seems safe ,so I think to stay here ,, there r many ppl around us even kids too , then what's wrong in living here ? i'll stay here ,, tumhe to koi prob nahi ?.

Maan: no not at all ,, OK , fine as u wish, then let them come ,, d buggi is here nd we cn move any time .

Geet: humm,, d man who is ploughing d land wanted to meet , so be here when he comes to meet , may be wants to discuss about d contact .

Maan: hum , Ok , don't worry ,, nd take some rest after lunch .

Geet: yeah ,, when d FH construction work is starting.

Maan: I sent Rzr with blue print ,, Richard will see that nd then Rzr make d layout plan ,, TM we'll start to make a small room for windmill system , nd a solid platform to set d heavy base of wing machine.

Geet: OK ,, good .

Maan: Geet do u like this place this much that wanted to stay here in fields ?

Geet: yeah , it's very excited ,, simple , peaceful , pure ,, I think u don't like this , bcoz u spend a luxurious life surrounded with colours nd lights ,, missing big cities rich life nd someone's ... .

Maan : it's not like that ,, work is imp.

Geet : to whom u r making fool ?

Maan kept quiet getting her taunt ,, better stop here to prevent beautiful moments nd change d topic .

Maan: Did Dj called u ?

Geet: hum ,, they'll again nd again ,, be ready , nd don't say much about me .

Maan: Ok,, by d way want to outside for small walk ?

Geet: will see , let d work finish .( she secured d dishes nd Maan helped her,, she picked d clothes from stand nd told Maan to kept d stand back )

Maan: now u take rest, no work if u want my mouth shut in front of DJ ,, remember my one reply about missing d days nd ..

Geet: I know , don't boss over me .

Maan sighed nd went out ,, in afternoon a group of labors reached there with few machinery , equipments nd tents ,, they reported Maan nd he showed them places to settle their tents nd othere things ,, they wr two mexican couple ,, seeing them Maan was happy bcoz now Geet wd live there .

The man who was ploughing d land came to meet Geet nd Maan before going to home ,, his work was for few days nd he wanted to settle d amount ,, he wanted to take d contract for whole yr for growing crops , so that he cd earn more ,, Geet nd Maan heard his view ,, agrri was not in Co. contract nd this decision was on Geet what wd they do with agrri land ,, Geet need farmer's labors who cd do aggri work ,, she talked about few terms of cost nd profits ,, supplies nd what type of crops cd be grown ,, then tell him to decide next day ,, she need some time to think .

D day went progressive , , there wr 2-3 hrs in which she cd go out ,, d buggy was there nd she decided to visit hot air balloon place ,, in mrng nd eve many ppl came there for enjoying hot air balloon ride over vast field area nd small hills ,, she cdn't ride but cd watch nd enjoy .

Geet: So mr MK r u free to go out ,, u come here 1st time , want to see some nearby places ?

Maan: r u interested in going out , I think u know many things about this area .

Geet : yeah I came here with DJ nd uncle nd stayed here for 3-4 days ,, that time we stayed in a yacht , but roam all around .

Maan : that's good , if it's not exerting for u then we'll go .

Geet : a beautiful place is not so far , lets go .

Geet took her hand bag nd a water bottle for her in that , came out nd lock d van ,, Maan instructed wrkrs for few works nd called coachman ,, he cleaned nd set d buggi for ride ,, Maan nd Geet sat in ,, it was a beautiful ride between d vast green fields ,, weather turned lil cool,, it was good that Geet was wearing a jacket .

Outing nd surrounding was not imp for Maan , it was Geet's closeness nd togetherness he wished ,, she was with him nd enjoying that was a bliss for him,, they enjoyed sight scenes ,, geet asked many Qs to coachman related to those places nd then reached at d place ,, many tourists wr there for ride ,, few balloons wr in d air nd some wr ready to take off ,, Maan liked that .

Geet: if u want to go for a ride, then go .

Maan: nd u ?

Geet: no cn't ,, I scare nd it's not good for me , u cn go.

Maan : no , it's OK , i'll enjoy from here , I cn't leave u alone , thanks, for showing a nice place , I never visited this type place before.

Geet: this is a small place with simple enjoyments ,, u have high taste , visited famous Ontario , Niagara ,Toronto ,, how cd u visit these small places?

Maan looked at her ,, he remembered that he visited these places after reaching Canada before opening d college nd he nd Sam spoke about that with Pinky , nd her grp ,, it hurt him deep , felt ashamed he was helpless nd cdn't hide those days anywhere .

They stayed there for an hr , then started to come back ,, in their way they stayed at craft store nd Geet purchased few hand made things ,, she purchased an amish hat for Maan nd gave him ,, then she got d call from DJ nd Kabir uncle ,, they asked about her stay nd she replied smartly that she was in village near d Inn ,,it was true that there wr few Inns where tourists stayed ,, to avoid more talk Geet cut d call that she is in a shop ,, then Maan got DJ's call ,, he showed her ID nd geet rolled her eyes ,, Maan replied with care nd assured DJ nd he will stay around geet to keep an eye on her,, Geet thanked Maan .

Geet: u r taking pain , giving ur time nd support , so a small gift of thanks ,, Maan saw that every amish boy nd man wore hat there ,, Maan took that with a smile , wore nd thanked her ,, this small gift was very precious for him , bcoz it was from Geet .

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They came back in farm , Geet gave some money to coachman nd said that he cd visit his home for 2-3 hr nd then if that was nearby, d CM agreed happily nd left ,, Maan said that he'll pay but Geet didn't listen him,, this indifference hurt him , but he cdn't force her ,, he lost that right .

They entered in Van nd Geet reminded him to start gen ,, Maan changed in his casual nd came on mission Geet care ,, wdn't allow her to work ,,made her sit ,, prepared soup for both nd had with lil talks ,, he was doing everything like a doting hubby, nd enjoying d time.

Precap ---- separation ... Maan is sad ..


Part - 55


sorry for mistakes ...






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