WILLING SLAVE 2 COMPLETE SS UPADTED on 26-9-2015 / PG 1 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 9, Maaneet know about Geet's pregnancy. Dadi is angry on Geet for not leaving and declare not to help them in future. Both are talking about baby when Vicky comes and over heard their talks and know about baby. He kept quite, but when Yash attacked Geet and Maan and Yash fought for Geet, he had to tell his father about Geet pregnancy.
Dadima is angry with Maan for breaking her trust.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10, Awesome update. Yash manipulated the situation and managed Samarh to order killing Geet . But Maan saved her and tried to run away. When Samarth came in way Dadi saved both and gave Samarth a piece of her mind. Finally Samarth also allowed both to go away.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Last part, Amazing update. In Germany it is like a dream for Geet. Both got married. But Destiny is more cruel. Samarth Dadi and Vicky came to Germany to see Maaneet. But yash reached before them and tried to kill maan. Geet is with him and in accident she could not survive after giving birth to her baby. Man gave baby to Samarth and ask him to take care of her. Maan and Geet left the world together. Yash paid for his sins as his father ordered his men to kill him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1

So geet has tried to kill herself by drowning in water but maan saved her, she shared her fears and maaneet became one...

part 2
maan had to leave for business with yash and he didn't tell anything to geet, he should have ...geet repenting to give herself away to khurrana's man...sad that geet was brought back to store room...

part 3
yash really is a monster. geet's conditions was falling with time, and maan was struck in there...at last , he got a chance to escape and reached to geet, she was unconscious ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 4
keya helped maan not only in treating geet but also in making him realize his feelings for geet...geet misunderstood maan keya convo...

part 5
geet trying to end her life again, but maan came at right time...dadi has arranged everything for geet and ayush, maan wanted to send her away for her own safety...

part 6
geet sharing her family secrets that no one loved her...and maan feels bad,she decided that she will not leave him, till he wants her... she loves him...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 7
good that maan thought abt their close moments...dadi told abt her plan, maaneet left but maan lost in his thoughts...

part 8
maaneet lost in their thoughts, but then she wished him his life, free from any burdens...confusions cleared and geet confessed, maan rejects but she is adamant, to be back to maan...

part 9
Maaneet promise to take care of their baby, sad that dadi took her hands off from their safety..Maan shared abt him and his sister...Truth was out and everyone was shocked, dadima angry, maan discloses their love for each other...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10
Grr this yash... planting seeds against maaneet in samrath's mind..Vicky over hears the convo and seeking dadima's help to save geet...Maan tried to save her from samrath's men..maaneet gone to Germany away from everyone, glad samrath bent with his mother's words...

Last part
okhh, so yash got a chance to kill them both... maaneet died... maan left the responsibility of his daughter to his father, who accepted her with pure heart ...Painful end...

Thanks for pm and pwd ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
hi Richa I am back
it was a very very long wait for me to read this SS
so now starting to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
Richa yaar rula diya tu ne mujhe
I know I am supposed to talk about each and every part of the story from the begining to the end but reading the last part I just couldn't control my tears
dil hi baith gaya yaar mera
first of all I am sorry that I couldn't read this ss as soon a you posted it due to my exams and hectic office schedule as well
thanx for the pm though
happy to know that all my guesses regarding Keya being Maan's sister , Maan being a doctor, Geet trying to harm herself thinking Maan wants to get rid of her and Maaneet taking their relation ahead due to circumstances were right
loved the way Keya made Maan realise the truth that he has madly fallen in love with her that he didn't even realise that he is a doctor himself and can cure her the way he treats other patients.
Maan,s kashmakash when Daadi tld him about the plan to send Geet away in 45 days time and Geet's selfless love towards her master was simply awesome dear
The scene where Maan sets her free after revealing that Keya is his sister and she returns back to him was just too good
The news of their baby coming and Geet's worry and Maan diverting her by talking about how their baby will be was so lovely
Vicky did over hear it all but the realisation that his brother loves Geet and their baby a lot stopped him from interfereing in their matter and let them handle it in their way was actually very wise of him
Yash is truely a pain in their lives since he couldn't get Geet he poisoned Samarth's mind against Geet after his failed attempt to get her and the truth of Geet being pregnant with Maan's child coming out and Daadima being ashamed of failing in her upbringing of Maan.
Thankfully Vicky overheard and convinced Daadima that both really love each other and the baby is their symbol of love and convinced her to stop his father from killling Geet and baby
Their life in Germany away from all this hatred was so blissfull until Yash came and destroyed everything
The end shattered me totally
Maan and Geet literally yearned for their baby but couldn't be with her after her birth for more than few minutes
The scene where Maan puts the responsibility of his little doll on his father's shoulder's literally brought tears in my eyes
Yash was ultimately punished by Maan's father but how I wish he would have done that before he destroyed everything
Their leaving this world together shattered all the souls there including me as a reader
I do not know how long it will take for me to come out of this though I know its just a story but your writing style connects me to all your stories on a different level
Hoping to read more such stories from you
But please with a Happy ending as it leaves a very big impact on us reader as we get so emotionally connected with the stry and the characters
All in all it is a Masterpiece of a well woven story beautifully told by you Richa
and sorry for disobeying your request for a separate comment for each part as I just wrote whatever came to my mind in a flow of emotions

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Posted: 9 years ago
part -1

...geet restless ...feeling herself burden on maan.. ..she tried to attempt suicide .. ..luckily maan reached there at time and saved her . ...maan angried on her ...and finally geet found her solace in maan arms ... and they become one .. its awesone part dear ..

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