Richa yaar rula diya tu ne mujhe
I know I am supposed to talk about each and every part of the story from the begining to the end but reading the last part I just couldn't control my tears
dil hi baith gaya yaar mera
first of all I am sorry that I couldn't read this ss as soon a you posted it due to my exams and hectic office schedule as well
thanx for the pm though
happy to know that all my guesses regarding Keya being Maan's sister , Maan being a doctor, Geet trying to harm herself thinking Maan wants to get rid of her and Maaneet taking their relation ahead due to circumstances were right
loved the way Keya made Maan realise the truth that he has madly fallen in love with her that he didn't even realise that he is a doctor himself and can cure her the way he treats other patients.
Maan,s kashmakash when Daadi tld him about the plan to send Geet away in 45 days time and Geet's selfless love towards her master was simply awesome dear
The scene where Maan sets her free after revealing that Keya is his sister and she returns back to him was just too good
The news of their baby coming and Geet's worry and Maan diverting her by talking about how their baby will be was so lovely
Vicky did over hear it all but the realisation that his brother loves Geet and their baby a lot stopped him from interfereing in their matter and let them handle it in their way was actually very wise of him
Yash is truely a pain in their lives since he couldn't get Geet he poisoned Samarth's mind against Geet after his failed attempt to get her and the truth of Geet being pregnant with Maan's child coming out and Daadima being ashamed of failing in her upbringing of Maan.
Thankfully Vicky overheard and convinced Daadima that both really love each other and the baby is their symbol of love and convinced her to stop his father from killling Geet and baby
Their life in Germany away from all this hatred was so blissfull until Yash came and destroyed everything
The end shattered me totally
Maan and Geet literally yearned for their baby but couldn't be with her after her birth for more than few minutes
The scene where Maan puts the responsibility of his little doll on his father's shoulder's literally brought tears in my eyes
Yash was ultimately punished by Maan's father but how I wish he would have done that before he destroyed everything
Their leaving this world together shattered all the souls there including me as a reader
I do not know how long it will take for me to come out of this though I know its just a story but your writing style connects me to all your stories on a different level
Hoping to read more such stories from you
But please with a Happy ending as it leaves a very big impact on us reader as we get so emotionally connected with the stry and the characters
All in all it is a Masterpiece of a well woven story beautifully told by you Richa
and sorry for disobeying your request for a separate comment for each part as I just wrote whatever came to my mind in a flow of emotions