WILLING SLAVE 2 COMPLETE SS UPADTED on 26-9-2015 / PG 1

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

part6

listening to geet past.

maan hatred for handa increased.

knowning how badly they behaved with geet.

and he tried his best to lessen her pain with his love.

and thank god atleast this time didn't think of ending her life.

but devote her to maan..

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Thanks for pw
Part 1
I think Maan and Geet is injured in accident
Maan apne past ko yaad kar raha hai jab wo soya hua hota hai tou Geet ko lagta hai ki uske karan Maan bhi apni freedom kho chuka hai aur wo sab ki life ke liye burden hai isliye usse Jeane ka koi haq nahi hai wo khudh ko pool mai dobo kar khatam kar lena chahti hai but Maan ki sab consiues usse alert kar deti hai aur wo sahi samaye par aaker usse bacha leta hai
He is getting angry on Geet
Geet usse kehti wo usse love kare aur finally they become one

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

part 7

maan taking geet to aayush

to keep her save.

and thinking about his feeling.

why he didn't tell geet about it.

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Part 2
Next morning Maan is niharofyig Geet's beauty jab wo soyi hoti hai tabhi Samarth usse bulata hai aur Yash ke saath jaane ke liye kehta hai Maan Geet ko akele nahi chodhna chahta but apne dad ki wajah se usse jaana padta hai
Geet is getting angry on herself ki uss ne kaise ek enemy ke aage khudh ko surrender kar diya
Maan ke jaate hi Samarth ke aadmi usse phir ek andheri khothri mai bandh kar band kar dete hai

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Part 3
Maan is worried for Geet
But usse ye relief hai ki Yash uske saath hai jo usse sabse jyada nuksaan pahucha sakta hai Yash is very ruthless wo Khanna ko buri tarah se treat karke deal par sign Karwa leta hai aur last mai shoot bhi karne wala hota hai but Maan usse aisa karne se rok leta hai
Maan is feeling restless isliye wo jaldi se ghar pahuchna chahta hai but Yash usse kehta hai ki abb raat ho chuki hai isliye wo yahi ruk kar celebrate karenge Maan is feeling helpless kyuki usse raasto ki jaankari nahi but phir bhi wo jeep drive karke jald se jald ghar pahuch kar seedha apne room mai jaata hai aur waha wo Geet ko nahi paa kar usse jald se dusre kamre mai dundhta hai jaha usse wo ek room mai tied milti hai aur usse fever bhi bahut hota hai

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

dear sad ending dena zaroori tha kya...

awesome story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Part 4

Maan Geet ke fever ke karan bahut tensed hai aur raat bhi kaffi hai uske paas koi medicine bhi nahi hai wo kyea ko phone karta hai kyea usse kehti hai ki wo thande pani se pattiya kare aur usse sone na de kyuki abhi wo fever ke karan aankhe nahi khol rahi hai aur saath mai usse

khuch feed bhi Kara de

Loved the way jis tarah kyea Maan ko ye realize karwana chahti hai ki he is in love with Geet kyuki hum jab kisi se pyar karte hai tabhi usse khone ke dar se apni identity ko bhi bhul jaate hai wo usse kehti hai ki wo khudh ek Dr hai wo Geet ki care acchi tarah se kar sakta hai