Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

Awesme update
lovd maaneet moments alot ...
Cant wait 4 more

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Monikaarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

wowww... what an update !! ..took my breath away ! ... loved it sooo much !!! ..the way maaneet become one ..,their words ,promises to eachother ...everything superbly written ! 👏 ...

... a lots of hugs for u Avi darling! 😃 ...now greedy for next part .. 😉 ..update soon ..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

u were just amazing... it was one of the most beautiful and mesmerizing update i have ever read... awesome piece of work... i was just into it while reading it and enjoyed it thoroughly... at last maan and geet are united... maan will never leave geet and will always protect her from every evil... and keep her safe... thnx for the pm.. plz update the next one... waiting eagerly for it..😊

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Preeti Menon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

Chapter 22 was sensuous. As expected they shared.a deserted shelter. Bothe are equally drawn towards each other. You have write it a beautiful way avi di. Finally they belong together Mann ki Geet and Geet ki Mann. Geet ki challenge ko goli maar diya😉.

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singh24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

Avi dear..

how r u..?

free ho gai ya nahi..?

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DimaagKaKeeda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

Ah, finally Geet stopped the torture and gave into her own desires.

Maan has always been passionate and possessive so I really loved it when he gave a damn about her so called challenge and did what he wanted to do. I guess I like him more when he is his possessive self.

Your version of roop tera in this story was just passionate and hot as the show. And what a beautiful union of a beautiful couple.

I thought you will end up torturing Maan as you seem to enjoy that most however was really surprised when Geet didn't stop him.

It was a sizzling update.

-Sanjana!

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zida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

omg lovelu pt .I just want to read it again and again.

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Binish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#868

Haye dreamy.. Mein tah gayi.. Marr gayi mein rabba.. Suoerb yaar.. Super romantic.. Maan geet banney maaneet.. Beautifully written.. Cont soon hun

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love2_soma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#869

chalo dono ek doosre k hogaye...age dekhte hai kya hota hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u ery much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Susmitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#870

Lovely n hot update. Both Maan ki Geet n Geet ka Maan bangaya . Their confessions of being not control with them when they r together. Promising to be with each other. Beautiful.

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