Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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archana roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#841

heyee waiting fast fast update do mere net pack ki last date midnight tak hi usaye pehle kar do...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: ArchanaRoy
heyee waiting fast fast update do mere net pack ki last date midnight tak hi usaye pehle kar do...

check PM

have to add pictures 😕

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pinku04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#843

part 22
awesome one... 👏👏
it was too hot and intense update..
just loved every bit of it...
continue soon...

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#844

Chapter 22

😳 Was blushing red to my eartips while reading the update!!

Do pyaar karne wale baarish mei kho gaye!!

They are searching for a shelter and are finding it difficult to resist. What a beautiful rendition to RTM. The hesitancy, the passion so beautifully captured.

He is such a fine specimen of male beauty. His golden glowing torso tantalises her senses.

And her raw beauty sets fire to his desires.

The deep care he showers on her... how can one not love him!

His declaration melted her like a candle.

He wants to stop his raging desires for her sake but she has already surrendered herself.

Do her inner thoughts signify some sort of premonition about the upcoming storm warned by the pandit!!?? 😲

Geet took initiative and their souls merged sealing their love fir centuries to come.

P.S. Like button not working

Edited by pearl.white - 9 years ago

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vandana73

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Posted: 9 years ago

#845

Chapter 22

That was a beautiful update. Was somehow expecting this but the way u wrote it was so soul touching. They wanted each other so badly but it was a true love 's expression for them. He was so careful about her needs and desires .in fact it was Geet who could not wait as she no longer has faith in her good fortune.

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

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Posted: 9 years ago

#846

It was Great Great Great Update

You know what Avi I really adore you and your writing... As I always thought why story was started from cheap and ended with hero abd heroine whereas In your writing... I always knew it won't cheap in any condition
Whether you makes them separate or close...Our hero or heroine is always for each other...

That what I honestly love in story...i don't know how many other think the same...perhaps no one 😆

Loved the entire update and enjoyed every bit.

Thanks for the PM

Take Care

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sweta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#847

Hi I didn't get pm I Commented on previous chapter

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#848

wow lovely sueprb beautiful tiuching blissed update yar..im numb to see my maaneet ki unconditional divine love for each other..te way my maaneet ki desire burning them and my maan ki seducteress was too burning seing my maan, yes my maan can control as per his geet's words but geet wat u will do seeing my maan her heart running for marathon..te way my maneet in hut was lovely.. te way my maaneet ki desire over took they control, my maan want to claim his geet but with her wish and geet too ready to give as she is my maan ki geet and he is geet ki maan..te way my maaneet became one and complete each other was lovely beautiful yar..i had tears seeing my maaneet ki love..i love te update so so much yar