Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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aeries10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Sorry for the delay (out of town)...
nice update... romance is in the air...maneet are attracted towards each other...geet was restless due to the effect of maan...to tame the lion, geet challenged and maan accepted without knowing the consequence...as per the challenge he can't touch , kiss , hug her throughout the day...
geet and maan spending a romantic day toget her watching beautiful sceneris and geet enjoying maan's situation..but trouble is on the way in for of daman.let's hope they cross their hurdle without any damage...
on the way to return they got stuck due to heavy rain and traffic...waiting for the beautiful romantic maneet moments

plz can you provide pwd for part 22

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Bhuvanaguru1986

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

Omg it was a fantastic part very very hot n romantic. Geet is ready to give herself to maan .loved maans concern for geet regarding her past . now waiting for next update.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#853

hi thanks 4 da pm n magnificent update! beautifully written! Maaneet fins shelter! Gete sneezing! Maan worried! Maan self control has broken! she tortured him enough! Maan bowled over by her beauty! Passionate Maan! he wants her bt asks as he knows abt her past! Geet wants him as well! Maaneet become one! update soon

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Wow... That was beautiful.. Itna Maan ko tarsane k baad, baarish hi kar di pyaar ki..

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Jaggy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Amazing update super update

you write it so beautifully ...

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vrinda22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Lovely update

Maaneet looking for a place to stay

N they saw it

Geet twisted her ankles

Her closeness is burning him

N geets kisses awakening his desire

Long lost were there promises

Both couldnt hold back after seeing each other like that

Geet want to live the sec

N she accepted to maans wish

They became one

Nice part

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jasika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Awesome update

Love it

Lovely maaneet moment

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago

#858

Maan-Geet became one now...

Geet is scared that what next day brings she don't know but she wanted to live in the moments with just Maan and his love and she proceeded to show her desire to him and he oblidged...

but I am scared now...what will happen next...why is Geet so scared...is it the indication of coming story...

wonderfully beautiful update...

thanx for pm...

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Beautiful

Hv ready many mg passionate sequences but this was brilliant.

N ofcourse when geet is forcing any restraint on maan or maan gets jealous, its always a pleasure to read.hi hi.

A possessive maan is a treat n a passionate maan is a feast.

U hv done ur job well as a writer displaying the emotions of the characters with so much finery.

Luv u, come with next part soon with the morning after