Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#411

so sweet update

very much lovely

meera n dev's marriage fixed

maan ask geet marriage

both decide to punish who are geet's culprits

daadi very happy

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#412

when you are free, pls give us a teaser...

i know you updated yday only.. but the jewelry scene is making me so eager for the next update

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

haiye! very beautiful update Avi dear ...geet was lost in maan ...dewani ho gyi h maan ki ...felt like a princess ...so lovely dialogues ! ...am glad finally dev meera are together ...and dev mother acceted her heartly...now the time has come for daman's punishment. ..par usse phele ye jewellary wala romantic scene ...eagerly waiting for next part dear ...

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RedCoats

@RedCoats

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

chapter 18

wow part

tara helped dev and meera and his mom's eyes opened.

geet too shared her past to maan and he has vowed to take revenge from daman and brij

grr this brij disgusting geet's mom died because he didn't go for dr 😡

going to read next part

Edited by RedCoats - 9 years ago

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

I read part 18 many days before but forgot to comment...

Superb tara n her plan...beautiful date...dreamy confession...painful past...but end is well

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: Shruthe
when you are free, pls give us a teaser...
i know you updated yday only.. but the jewelry scene is making me so eager for the next update

let me try 😃
not by tonight IST
par subah uth ke padh lena 😃

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#417

Wat to say u always make me speechless with my maaneet ki love in ur writings..wow lovely cute superb update yar..omg maan I know abt ur pillows ki cribbing so tat u took ur geet's sleep too he he he..te way geet ki restless and thinking how my maan changed her life within one night and made her his diwani was lovely..my maaneet ki date was very lovely beautiful with full of love and teasings..omg geet ki silent and my maan teasing her who said he changed , my maan is still dd wen it cums to tease his geet and romance her he he he..te way dev and meera ki wedding fixed and dadi was happy for my maaneet too who was enjoying they love phase..te way my maan was lost in his geet ki beauty making her nervous with his closeness was lovely..i love te update so much yar

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#418

Sorry like button not working...Coming to the update loved how Maan transformed into a loving person from an arrogant one...want more of their moments...

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#419

TEASER

(requested by Shruthe)

"Ruko toh .. ", he said grasping on to the ends of her dupatta as she evaded his grasp.

Before she could stop it, the traitor dupatta had slid off her neck and had trailed into his hand.

There was only one place to run to and it was the long passage.

She came to the ends of the passage turning to see that he had followed her, watching her without blinking.

Hiding herself with her hands, she stood slightly out of breath, her eyes closed.

She could hear him stop behind her, the warmth from his taut body permeating through her in waves.

A soft kiss on her earring had her opening her eyes even as her toes curled inwards.

He stood behind her as their reflection in the mirror at the end of the passage seared itself in her brain.

He took the dupatta that he had pulled away and placed it on her forehead, covering her hair and her forehead so that just her eyes were showing.

He kept on gazing at her with his eyes glittering, his breathing harsh to her ears.

Her body shuddered from the closeness and the intense magnetism of his eyes.

With trembling lips, she asked, "Aap kya dekh rahe hai?"

A/N: Soch rahi hu you must be missing Brij, hai na?😆

Inn lamhon ke damaan mein

pakeeza se rishtey hai

Kya chahiye: faceoff with the family ya Maaneet?

Do let me know..

Non voters will be considered as voting for Brij😆

Majority wins!

Edited by dqno1 - 9 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

Wat to say u always make me speechless with my maaneet ki love in ur writings..wow lovely cute superb update yar..omg maan I know abt ur pillows ki cribbing so tat u took ur geet's sleep too he he he..te way geet ki restless and thinking how my maan changed her life within one night and made her his diwani was lovely..my maaneet ki date was very lovely beautiful with full of love and teasings..omg geet ki silent and my maan teasing her who said he changed , my maan is still dd wen it cums to tease his geet and romance her he he he..te way dev and meera ki wedding fixed and dadi was happy for my maaneet too who was enjoying they love phase..te way my maan was lost in his geet ki beauty making her nervous with his closeness was lovely..i love te update so much yar

🤗 Thank u