Maaneet SS : Chup Chup Ke, Part 8- page 57, 29th feb - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Start

Maan's family wants him to marry but they want him to marry Geet
and now according to everyone both Maan and Geet always fight
Maan is at the moment in London and there he is seen with a girl
kissing her too
now I'm curious to know who is the girl

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update. Maan's family want Maaneet to get married but problem is that they use to fight all the time. Khuranas invite Handas for dinner. Maan kissing someone. Something is fishy. Is this geet whom Maan met in a mall.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story...sweet maan here looks like, having dev and naina as bro and bhabhi. But looks like our hero and herione are already in love and together meeting each other chup chupke...haha...wonder who will get the shock them or their families...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plzzz continue soon waiting 😊😊
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THANK U SOOO MUCH GUYS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES. NOW UPDATING
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Part 2

After cutting Yash's call, Mohinder immediately left for home.

When he reached home, he saw a confused rano sitting in hall.

Mohinder: what happened rano? Why r u looking so tensed?

Rano: ji woh pammi ne call kia tha.

Mohinder: haan. Yash ne bhi mujhe call kia tha aur aaj shamko hume unke ghar bulaya hain. Par ispe tension ki kya baat hain?

Rano: tension ki hi toh baat hain ji. Pammi ne kaha hain ki main Geet ko iss barein mein kuch na batau.

Mohinder: Geet ko batane se mana kia hain? Par kyun? Jab ki woh toh abhi India mein bhi nehi hain.

Rano: pata nehi. Shayad unhe pata nehi hoga ki abhi Geet london mein hain.

Mohinder: Theek hain. Tum jao. Aur KM jane ki taiyari karo.

Rano: ji, theek hain.

Mohinder nodded his head and went to their room.

In London

After kissing her breathless he left her lips and kept his forhead on hers.

Maan: This is ur punishment.

The girl pouted her lips.

Girl: punishment? Bt why?

Maan: bcz, u r 5 min late.

Girl: Hawww.

She wacked his arm lightly. Then hugged him.

Maan: I Love u Geet.

Geet: I Love u too. Abhi chalo mujhe bhukh lagi hain.

Maan: chalo food court pe chalte hain.

Geet: ok.

She pecked his lips. Maan just chukled seeing her cute gesture.

They went to food court. They sat on a table and gave their orders for food.

Geet: Maan, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain.

Maan: yup, tell.

Geet: Maan kitne din hogaye hain. Mujhse yeh natak aur nehi hoga. Aur nahi gharwalo ko aur jhoot bol sakti hu. U knw na, how much they love us. Agar unhe kahi aur se pata chala toh kitni hurt honge sab.

Maan: I know, jaan. Bt hum bhi kya karte. Humari studies thi, phir career. Bt pakka iss project k khatam hote hi main ghar pe baat karunga humare bare mein.

Geet: pakka na.

Maan: haan baba pakka. Waise tum natak kaha karti ho? Tum toh humesha hi mujhse ladne k liye ready ho, chahe woh gharwalo ko dikhane k liye ho ya akele mein.

Maan start to tease her. He just love to irritate her, then her red cheeks and pouting lips. He wants to eat her alive bt alas shaadi tak wait karna hoga.
Geet: main tumse fight karti hu? Main? Ji nehi. Tum humesha mujhse fight karte ho aur jab dekho tab kiss karte rehte ho. Tumse achcha toh woh karan tha. Kitna sweet tha.

Replied a irritate Geet. Suddenly Maan got angry.

Maan: haq hain woh mera. Samjhi tum. Kyun ki tum sirf aur sirf mere ho. Maan ki Geet. Dare u say that loosers name from ur mouth.

Geet: Toh kya kar loge? Huh? Uss karan k wajah se hi aaj hum sath hain. Otherwise u was hopeless.

Maan: what? What did u say? Say it again.

Geet: maine yeh kaha ki, only because of jealousy u accepted ur love for me. Otherwise woh tumhare bas ki baat nehi thi.

Maan didn't say anything as this is true. The waiter serve their food.

Maan: jaldi khana finish karo. Mujhe meeting k liye jana hain.

Geet: hmm. Maan main kal India wapas ja rahi hu. Meri seminar finish ho gayi.

Maan: par kyun? Tum next week mere sath hi chalna.

Geet: aisa nehi ho sakta Maan.

Maan: kyun nehi ho sakta? Main bhi toh 2 weeks pehle tumhare sath aya tha. Toh tum kyun nehi rukh sakti?

Maan whined like a child.

Geet: Maan plz try to underderstand. Meri seminar khatam ho gayi hain. Toh kis excuse se main yaha ruku? And u knw i'm gonna miss u.

Maan smiled sadly.

Maan: me too.

They finished their lunch and moved from there. Not before Maan pused Geet in a corner and kissed her lips passionately. Geet moaned in kiss and parted her lips for breath, Maan took the opportunity and pushed his tongue in her mouth. He sucked her tongue and chewed her lips. Geet also reprociate him. After some time they broke due to lack of oxygen. Geet blused a scarlet red and Maan smirked.

Maan: Remembered something?

Geet: I can never forgot that.

They left from there.

Past

Mohinder Handa and Yash Singh Khurana are chuddy buddy friend. They both were from rich family. Even Savitri devi khurana never difference between them. She loves mohinder as much she loves yash. In college they both fall in love. Yash with Pammi and Mohinder with Rano. After finishing their studies they both got married with their respective partners. With in a year Pammi gave birth to Dev. Everyone was so happy. After 4 years Maan born. Bt pammi was little bit sad. She wanted a girl. After Maan's birth rano gave the good news that she is pregnent. After 9 months Rano gave birth to Geet. Pammi was sooo happy seeing a baby girl in Rano's arm. She immediate left Maan is Daadi's arm and took Geet from Rano. Everyone was smiling seeing her child like excitement. Pammi cares little Geet's pink cheeks and Geet giggled.

Pammi: Rano dekho, yeh kitni beautiful hain. Bilkul pari jaisi.

Rano: haan. Meri itni barso ki tapassya jo hain.

Pammi: phir mujhe kyun nehi mili? Mujhe bhi chahiye thi?

Everyone was shocked and said, WHAT!!! Pammi pouted her lips.

Pammi: Haan mujhe bhi ek beti chahiye thi.

Yash: Hum next time try karenge na.

Pammi glared at him, yash chuckled. Bt sd just twisted yash's ear.

Sd: badmaash.

Rano: haan pammi. Yeh bhi toh tumhari beti jaisi hi hain.

Pammi: bilkul. Akhir isse mere ghar hi ana hain.

Unknowingly pammi told her heart to everyone.

After 2 years vicky born. Pammi was so heart broken. Bt then she started to love Geet more. As the childrens started grow up everyone get busy. Dev was a calm and understanding boy, Maan was totally mom's boy and stuborn as he can't share his mom other than his brothers, vicky is the naughty one. And Our Geet madam... She was bubbly, talkative and the most naughtiest one as everyone pampers her the most. Specially pammi. That's the reason Maan started to get jealous. Whenever Geet used to do any mischeif, everyone use to pamper her. Bt when he did something, everyone started to scold her. By time passes this jealousy turned into hatred. Maan just hate the shadow of Geet. Whenever they meet, they started to fight with eachother. Everyone was worried about their fights. When the kids started to went to school. Elders were bit relaxed. Bt Maan and Geet used to fight even in school. Everyday Geet used to find a new trick to irritae Maan. Maan just cribbed about all this to pammi. Bt pammi scold Maan only. By this Maan just hated her more. They finished their school and start their college. In college Dev found his lady love Naina. Bt Maan and Geet still are same. There was a boy in Maan's class named Karan. Karan used to drool over Geet and that started irritate Maan so much. Maan dn't knw what is this. Bt he can't bear it when someone looked at Geet. It's only HIS right na. Bt he dn't knw from where this feelings came. Even Geet started to fell for Maan. Geet just wanted to rip that Shasha's head as shasha used to drool over HER maan. How dare she... College years went away like that only. It was the farewell party of Maan's batch. Maan was in a black tuxedo and Geet was in Red knee lenth dress. Both was looking ravilishing. And karan wanted to propose Geet. As the party started, everyone started to enjoy. Karan went to dj and told him to play some soft romantic music. The music stopped and everyone stopped dancing. Suddenly the spot light was on Geet as karan approched her. There was pin dropped silence in the hall. Geet was confused and Maan's blood was boiling in anger. Karan sat in one knee infront of Geet and forwared a red rose.

Karan: I love u Geet.

Geet was shocked and thought, "How dare he propose me? Abhi batati hu."

Before she could say something, someone pulled her and smacked his lips in hers. Geet was so shocked with the sudden kiss. She didn't see the person's face as her eyes was closed. Bt she was feeling like crying and started screaming in her head, "FOR GOD SAKE THIS IS MY FIRST KISS". She started to wriggle hard to free herself but that person just pressed her to himself hard and start kissing her more passionately. Finally Geet opened her eyes and got the biggest sweet shock of her life. The person who is kissing her is non other than her Maan. She felt so happy. She stopped her fighting. She sneaked her fingers in Maan's hair and starts kissing him back. Everyone was just shocked and standing there as statue seeing the turns of events. Karan was still in his knee and Maan-Geet was kissing. Karan was feeling like a fool. He immediately got up and coughed ahem ahem. This broke their rivery and they broke out from the kiss. Geet was blushing so hard and Maan was in kind of dizziness. When karan proposed her, maan couldn't take it anymore. So, he just kissed her infront of everyone. Bt when Geet started to respond to him, he felt he is in heaven. As everyone clapped Maan come out from his thought. Maan thanked his stars that Dev is already out from their college and no family members is present here. He just grabbed a blushing Geet's hands and left from there.
Maan take Geet near a lake, where they can talk with eachother. They sat near the lake.

Maan: woh..

Geet: woh..

They both said it together. Then smiled.

Maan: Ladies first.

Geet: From when??

Maan: matlab?

Though Maan understand her question still he want to play a little with her.

Geet frowned at his answer. She asked him irritately.

Geet: Tum mujhe yaha kyun leke aye ho? Party pe kitna maza aa raha tha.

Maan: main kaha tumhe leke aya hu.

Geet: Hawww. Theek hain. Main party pe wapas ja rahi hu. Waha karan meri intezar kar raha hoga.

Maan got angry listening karan's name.

Maan: nehi tum kahi nehi jaogi.

Geet: main jaungi. Tum hote kaun ho mujhe rokne wale.

Saying this Geet tried to get up. Bt Maan was fast. He pulled her back and Geet fell on Maan. Maan gripped her waist tightly.

Maan: i said na tum kahi nehi jaoge. Bcz U R MINE. Samjhi tum. U r mine. And I LOVE U.

Geet felt she is hallucationing. She pinched Maan.

Maan: Ouchh.. What is for that? Jaha tak mujhe pata hain, I love u ka jawab I love u too aur Me too se hota hain. Pinch karke jawab dena pehli baar dekh raha hu.

Geet chuckled at him.

Geet: nehi. I was just checking ki kahi yeh sapna toh nehi.

Maan: Dreams do come true, Geet. I LOVE U SOO MUCH.

Geet: I LOVE U TOO MAAN. I LOVE U.

Maan looked at Geet's lips and looked at her eyes permission. Geet shyly closed her eye-lashes giving him permission to kiss her. Maan slowly pressed his lips with hers. They started kissing eachother slowly and passionately. From then started their secret Love Story.

PAST END

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update waiting for next part 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwweeesomeee

cute from enemy to love birds...

both family are also superb...

precap is funny though... let see how vicky plan work
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mind blowing updates...
love the concept...
story is very sweet and spicy...
waiting for next update...

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