Maaneet SS : Chup Chup Ke, Part 8- page 57, 29th feb

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PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

IMPORTANT NOTE

PART 7

PART 8
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Part 1

KM(INDIA)

Everyone is present in dinning table as they are eating their breakfast. Suddenly, Yash singh khurana said something that left everyone in shock.

Yash: Maa, it's high time. We should get Maan married. Kab tak aisa chalega. Yash asked his mother Savitri devi khurana.

Sd just nodded her head.

Pammi: Par aapko toh pata hain na shaadi ka naam sunke hi woh bhaag jata hain. Replied Yash's wife Pammi singh khurana.

Yash singh khurana and Pammi singh khurana proud parents of Dev singh khurana, Maan singh khurana and Vicky singh khurana.

Naina: yes, dad. Remember, last time when we told him to get married he didn't even call home for two months. Pata nehi iss baar kya karega. Told Dev's wife Naina singh khurana.

Dev: Bt naina. Iss bar aisa kuch hone ki naubat hi nehi ayega.

Naina: kyun?

Dev: Bcz, dad ne already ladki pasand kar li hain. Aur tum sab usse jante bhi ho.

Everyone: WHAT!!! WHO IS SHE???

Everyone looked at Yash.

Yash: Mohinder ki beti hain. GEET.

Everyone sat numb in their seats as it's a sweet shock for them. Vicky is the first one to break the silence.

Vicky: omggg, dad. U must be joking right?? He asked with a big grin.

Yash: No vicky. I'm very much serious.

Naina: Bt dad, u very well know that they didn't get along. Sath milna toh dur ki baat hain. Whenever they meet eachother, they starts fights like cat and dog. Logo ko 1 mile ki duri se pata chal jata hain ki abhi Maan aur Geet sath hain.

Pammi, vicky and Dev nodded their head.

Yash: i knw beta. Bt Geet se achcha life partner Maan ko nehi milega. Aur woh hum sabko bhi bohot achchi tarha se janti hain, samajti hain. Toh hume bhi koi problem nehi hogi.

Naina: dad, i'm not saying ki hume problem hogi. Balki hum toh bohot khush honge, she is like. my little sis. Aur dil ki bhi bohot achchi hain.

Vicky: Haan, dad. Mujhe bhi thoda change mil jayega. U know, naina bhabhi ko dekh dekh ke pakk chuka hu main. Aab life main thoda twist ayega.

Vicky said with a naughty grin. Naina just wacked vicky's arm and pouted.

Vicky: Ouchhh... Dekha dekha aap logo ne. Kaise maarti rehti hain mujhe. Jaise ki main koi machchar hu. Isiliye mujhe Geet chahiye as a bhabhi. Woh humesha mera side leta hain. Aapki tarha nehi jo humesh Maan bhai ka side le. Aab toh main aur geet dono milke Bhai ka band bajayenge.
Listening this Naina just twisted vicky's ear.

Naina: khabardar jo tune mere Maan ko tang karne ka socha bhi. Dekhna kya karti hu main tera.

[B]Vicky: aaa bhabhi. Dukh raha hain. Plz chodo na. Main toh bas mazak kar raha tha. Aap toh mere sweet si bhabhi ho.

Naina left vicky's ear. Everyone chuckled seeing their nautanki. Just then Daadima said.

[B]Daadima: haan. Hum bhi Yash se sehmat hain. Tum ek kaam karo, aaj shamko Mohinder ko ghar pe bulao. Phir hum baat chedte hain. Agar woh mann gaye toh phir Maan aur Geet ko kaise manana hain woh bhi sochna hain.


Pammi: ji, maa. Main Rano se baat karti hu. Suniye ji, aap bhi mohinder bhaishab se baat karle toh achcha hoga.

Yash just nodded his head.

Daadima: waise Maan ka koi phone aya kya? Kab aa raha hain london se wapas?

Yash: haan maa. Humara woh london deal bas khatam hone hi wala hain. Next week Maan wapas aa jayega. Par pata nehi yeh ladka karta kya hain. Client k sath meeting hain next week. Bt woh janab 2 weeks pehle hi london chala gaya.

Pammi: toh aur kya karta. Mera bachcha din raat itna kaam karta hain. Par kisiko uske kadar ho tab na.

Pammi glared at Yash. Yash just gulped hard. Dev and vicky giggled seeing their dad's plight.

Daadima: theek hain. Aab sab breakfast karo.

After finishing breakfast Yash and Dev left for office and vicky for college.

Daadima and pammi and Naina are sitting in hall.

[COLOR=LIME GREEN]Daadima: Pammi, tumne Rano se baat ki?

Pammi: nehi maaji. Main abhi call karti hu.

Daadima nodded her head. Pammi called Rano. After some rings rano received the call.
Rano: hello, pammi. Kaisi ho tum? Aaj kal toh hume bhul hi gayi ho.

Pammi: hello, rano. Main theek hu. Tum kaisi ho? Aisa nehi hain Rano. Hum toh tumhe roj hi yaad karte hain.

Rano: arey main toh bas mazak kar rahi thi. Mujhe pata hain bachcho k piche life kitni busy ho jate hain.

Pammi: Rano, woh hume tumse aur bhaishab se kuch baat karni hain.

Rano: Haan haan bolo.

Pammi: aise phone pe nehi. Hum sab chahte hain ki aaj shamko tum aur bhaisab humare ghar pe aao. Yash bhi bhaishab se baat karenge.

Rano: theek hain. Bt achchank yun, akhir baat kya hain?

Pammi: Nothing to worry Rano. Shamko aa jao, sab pata chal jayega.

Rano: Theek hain.

Pammi: Aur haan, geet ko iss bare mein kuch maat batana.

Rano: theek hain.

Pammi: achcha, shamko milte hain phir. Bye.

Rano: Bye.
A confused rano cut the call. Otherside pammi, daadima and naina is very happy. Mohinder and Yash are childhood friend. So, they know Geet from her birth. They all love Geet very much. Specially Pammi. Bcz, she so much wanted a daughter. Bt instead of daughter she got 3 sons. So, she showered her love on Geet.
Pammi: i'm soo happy maa. I always wanted Geet for my Maan. Bt i lost my hope seeing them always fighting like cat and dog.

[COLOR=LIME GREEN]Daadima: pammi, jo bhi hota hain bhale k liye hi hota hain. Tum chinta maat karo. Babaji k ashirwad se sab kuch theek hi hoga.

Naina: yes, mom. Aap tension na lo. Aab chaliye. Hume bohot sari taiyariya bhi karni hain. Main toh khushi se pagal ho rahi hu. Meri devrani ane wali hain. Woh bhi Geet. I'm so excited for their wedding.

Daadima: itni jyada kush maat ho naina. Agar Rano aur Mohinder mann bhi gaye. Phir bhi ek bohot big problem hain.

Pammi: problem? Kaisi problem maa?

Daadima: Maan aur Geet. Unn dono ko kaise manayenge?

Naina and Pammi's face just fell listening daadim's talks.

Naina: oh teri... Maine toh yeh sab socha hi nehi. Aab kya hoga daadima?

Daadima: kuch nehi. Shamko Mohinder aur Rano ko aney do. Agar woh mann gaye toh milke kuch sochte hain.

Pammi: theek hain maa.

They starts their preparations for evening.

In KC

Yash sat in his cabin in deep thought. Someone knocked his cabin door. Yash come out from his thought.
Yash: come in.

Dev stepped inside his dad's cabin.

Dev: dad, apne mohinder uncle se baat ki?

Yash: i was just thinking about that, dev. Bt i'm also thinking about Maan.

Dev: why? What happened to him?

Yash: nothing happend to him. Bt i'm scared about his reaction. Agar mohinder aur Bhabhiji k manne k baad agar Maan ne kuch ulta sidha kar dia toh humare bachpan ki dosti mein darar aa jayega. Jo ki main hargiz nehi chahta.

Dev: Dad, aap aise hi tension le rahe ho. Aisa kuch nehi hoga. Aap sab kuch bhulke abhi uncle ko call kijiye aur baat kijiye.

Yash nodded his head. Dev left the cabin giving his dad privacy.

Yash called Mohinder.

Mohinder: hello, yash. Kaisa hain tu? Sab theek toh hain na.

Yash: main theek hu. Aur sab kuch theek hain. Par tujhse aur bhabhiji se kuch important baat karni hain. Toh aaj shamko tu humare ghar aaja.

Mohinder: par aise kaunsi baat karni hain tujhe?

Yash: pehle tum log aa jao. Phir batata hu. Ok. Bye.

Mohinder: theek hain. Bye...

LONDON

Somewhere in london A man is walking in a mall. Suddenly someone call him from behind "MAAN". He turned around and smiled at the person. Bt suddenly he remembered some thing and got angry. He just pulled the person and smacked his lips in HERS. The girl was 1st shocked and her eyes turned wide. Bt Maan kept pressing his lips on hers. Passion took over them. The girl closed her eyes and start kissing him back with same flavour. After some breath-taking moments he left her lips and kept his forhead on hers.
Edited by janna341 - 9 years ago
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Hye ..
I am First to press like and comment on this story ..
That was Geet na..
the one called Maan ...
please say yes =-O
...
Maaneet family planning Maaneet wedding ..
unknown to Maaneet love story ..
But Why Maaneet fight infront of them ...
update next part soon ...
Edited by nitika20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice.
I think girl is Geet only.
Let's see.
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice start to the story nice family there talking about Mann how stubs hr Is getting married I wonder what will happen Whrn fix he marriage and family talk and Mann in London who the girls the spence id killing me please do part 2
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That was Geet and Maan na... please say yes...
This is gonna be interesting!!
Waiting for next.
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Nice os. Is it maan dreaming about geet ?
Continue soon😉
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Nice update, start was good nice family and maaneet marriage topic but in end it was sad if that girl was not geet as can't see maan with any one else so update soon as can't wait to know the girl
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Amazing update waiting for next update. I hope that girl is geet. Plzz update soon 😛😛
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It sounds awesome...hope that girl is Geet.. Oh can't wait for the next part deat..update soon...

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