OS MIL KE BHI NA MIL PAYE updated epilogue in page 4

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hiii friends i am back with new story. hope you guys like it.😊😊

MIL KE BHI NA MIL PAYE

CHARECTER SKETCH

Maan Singh Khurana : Only son of khurana's lost his parents when he was 5 and was brought up by his dadi who is his only family. He is handling their business KC along with his dadi as part time since he is pursuing his masters . Very rude arrogant that is what he projects for the outer world but very kind hearted person and never say no to his dadi. Lives in Delhi.

Geet Handa: She is the daughter of Handa's they are into the interiors business (HI) HANDA INTERIORS very renowned business in India . she is their pampered child as she was the only girl child from generations. So Handa's treat her like princess. Pursuing he course in fashion designing. Lives in Mumbai.

the story is how these two individuals meet and fall in love. (though the story is routine will try to write it in a new way). So do you guys want me to continue.

will try to update tonight or tomorrow morning. so guys let me know are u interested or not.

thank you.😛😛

part 1

It's a bright and lovely morning in mumbai and a girl is still sleeping thinking about her prince charming.In her dream she is dancing with her prince and when she is about to see the face of her prince there was a noise

geet's mom(GM): geet utto ajj tumara clz start hone wala hai jaldi utto beta.

geet: ahh mom can't you wake me a bit later u didn't let me see the face of my prince pouted geet. her mom smiled at her daughter and told she will definitely get her prince as she is their princess. geet smiled and kissed her mom cheeks and went to fresh up.

Delhi

A young man was working out in his gym (do you want me to say who it is) he came out went to his and freshened up and went down stairs and greeted his dadi.

maan: good morning dadi.

DM: good morning bete. come lets have bf.

after bf he bid bye to his dadi and went to his clz he is a student of final year architecture.

Mumbai

Geet ate her bf and joind her friends to go to clz after bidding bye to her parents.

1 week later

both khurana's and handa's got a deal for construction as well as interiors from same company which will make their companies top and also can get very good fame throughout the world so dadi and mohinder ( geet's dad) talked to each other and wanted to meet after the finalization of the deal.

at the same time mohinder handa got the news of his niece (meera) wedding got fixed who lives in Delhi. so the whole Handa family thought to go to Delhi before the marriage as they wanted to attend all the functions of meera who is also Geet's best buddy.

The groom yash was the best friend of maan and also his cousin as yash dont have family dadi and maan are his family and the marriage preparations are started in KM.

Geet and her family went to delhi and on the first day all the members of geet family and meera's family went to temple to seek the blessings of god as the marriage rituals are going to start from that day. Even yash made maan to come with him to see his lady love and wanted to meet her. When maan and yash reached temple they heard a sweet voice singing the arthi song. Maan who loves music at once got mesmerized and went in that direction to see her but couldn't see her becoz of the crowd. she is geet. when Yash asked why he left without saying maan without thinking replied that he is searching for a girl and yash was at once surprised listening to maan and started teasing him to which maan replied he want to see her becoz she has a sweet voice and he is a music lover and nothing more than that.

same day evening

xyz shopping mall geet with her cousins came to shopping for the wedding. Even maan also came to the same mall as he wanted to buy something for his babhi meera. While crossing a watch shop he saw a watch which was unique and he loved it.when he was about to go he got a phone from office regarding some project info., and he moved a little distance as there were no proper signals. At the same time geet entered that shop and saw the same watch and very much liked it and thought to gift the same to her prince charming once she got him and bought it. when maan returned from his call and went to shop he was disappointed to hear the watch was taken and it was the last piece. And it being the unique one, only one piece was made.

next day morning

In meera's house geet was searching her room as she couldnt find the gift she bought for her prince and when she asked one of her cousins she was shocked to hear that all the gifts were sent to KM and when geet placed the gift near those gifts which were in her room the workers thought it was also the one to send to KM. geet was so depressed and cribbed to her babaji and also scolded herself for being careless.

KM

maan was shocked , surprised, exited to see the same watch as his gift sent from meera's house and thought it was definitely a miracle.

next part:

combined bachelor party of meera and yash with theme masquerade.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely. Will wait for update.
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guys next update will be after minimum 5 comments. so plzzz do comment and hit a like.
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congo on the new story lovely cs geet is sleeping dreaming abt her prince charming she is going fashion designing whereas maan is doing architecture both family r doing buisness together but hasnt met yet but geet will be going to delhi to attend her cousin meeras wedding with her whole family whose groom yash is maans bestie geet went to temple where maan was also there to meet meera he heard geets sweet voice and was attracted to her voice though didnt see her was looking for her he choose a watch for yash which was unique but before he could buy geet bought it for her prince which got mixed with grooms present and she was disappointed maan was surprised to see the same watch as yashs gift for wedding lets see hpow rocking their first meet is
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a small clarification dear maan went to buy giift to meera but when he saw the watch he wanted to get it for himself.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on the new SS! Y dnt u make it an SS! superb CS! Fab prologue! lovely update! wonderfully written! Geet dreaming abt her prince charming! He mom awakens her! Maan n dadi have breakfast! Maan studies! Handas n Khuranas get the contract! Yash n Meera getting married! Handas in Delhi! Maan is Yash's friend! Meera is Geet's cousin! Maan mesmerized by Geet's voice! Yash teases him! Geet n Maan like the same watch! she bought it. Maan upset! bt the same watch is sent 2 KM 4 Maan! Geet looks 4 it! she is nw upset! update soon n do pm, thanks

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wow nice cs
part one is amazing
waiting 4 more
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Awesome part...nice part..hope they meet soon update soon dear
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thank for your replies friends will complete the story by tomorrow night 2 more parts to go will update one by morning and other by tomorrow night.

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