OS MIL KE BHI NA MIL PAYE updated epilogue in page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da note! will b waiting!!
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part 2

next day both meera and yash planned a party combined only for their cousins and friends and the theme is masquerade. On the day of party geet wore a floor length red dress and she was dressed just to kill and maan wore a black suit with his first two buttons opened. when they entered they both were given the masks and the couple dance was arranged in a way that the partners were changed for every song. when after two songs both maan and geet came to each others arms they both were drowned in each others eyes and they just forgot the surroundings for geet she felt him as her price when they heard a huge round of applause they averted their gaze and it is then geet saw the watch in his hand and was shocked and when she saw him he was disappeared she felt like it was her dream and here maan thought he was losing himself drowning in her eyes and when he heard the applause he moved from there. They wanted to know each other at least the others names but couldn't ask any one as they danced with more than one person.

Next day mohinder handa went to office to meet dadi officially as they met personally for the marriage functions. he wanted to meet her to discuss the project they are doing combined. there he met both dadi and maan when he was going to discuss the project he realized he forgot the important file. He called home and asked anyone to bring the file and geet was the only one free so she took the file and went towards KC.

At the same time maan got call from yash's wedding planner regarding some discussion and asked maan to come to his office so maan went to meet the wedding planner. And geet came there maan left and met dadi who liked geet instantly and the meeting goes on and geet went home.

After one week the wedding was completed and all the Handa's are ready to leave the next day but geet felt suffocated remembering the eyes of the man with whom her watch was with as the day passed geet went to Mumbai and maan started his clz but whenever he is free his thoughts goes around the girl whose eyes hypnotized him.

As days passed on both tried to concentrate on their life's but couldn't.

next part 3

last part both meeting again in a international fest in goa (my fav place to visit) and finds each others love.

hope you liked it friends do like and comment 😛😛

And friends sorry for the short update will give the last part tonight.

Edited by poojitha96 - 9 years ago
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common guys plz do comment or i will feel like u are not interested in my stories next update will be after at least 5 comments
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nice update ..
maneet lost in each other ..
thanks for update
waiting for next
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both missing each other ..
waiting for them to meet again
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part 3

After few months

There was a international youth fest being conducted in goa where geet along with her friends is going as she is participating in singing competition.

its the same competition even maan is also going to participate in singing competition. unknown to them babaji has planned to make them one. it is a weeklong tour and geet's competition was the first one to be held.

First day in Goa

Both geet and maan are ready to give their best performances. Geet was the first one to be called among them and when geet started singing and maan at once turned to the stage as he can very well recognize her voice his breath at once got struck as he was awed to see the flawless beauty and at once he thought her to be his eyes beauty but he was somewhere hesitant as he felt she might not be the same girl but wanted to try to talk to her at least once after the performance after geet its maan's performance and he went to the stage taking his guitar sat on the stool in the middle of the stage and started singing when he folded his shirt geet saw the same watch as she was near the stage and once again thought that her babaji was showing her the signal. And as always maan rocked with his performance. When he was moving down the stage he saw geet staring at him. He went near her and thought to start the conversation and asked her did she by chance attended marriage of yash and meera. Geet was completely taken aback and just nodded her head automatically and that brought a smile on maan's face and he asked her can she come with him to have coffee in the nearby ccd as her performance is also completed. Both got to know each other and became friends and both in the corner of their hearts know that they are meant to be one. but thought to give some time. as days passed on they became more closer and known each other so well.

They were even awarded best male singer as maan and female singer as geet .

Last day in Goa

both felt uncomfortable as they felt a great heaviness in their heart when they are parting away. They both decided to meet each other before the go to their respected cities. They met each other for lunch as they are starting to their destinations in the eve. During their lunch a girl in her short dress came towards their table and at once hugged maan and seeing that geet felt a wave a jealous and passiveness and just frowned at the girl. Seeing her expressions maan know that she liked him or rather loved him just like the way he do. He thought to tease her and hugged the girl back and acted as if he ignored geet. Geet felt hurt and seeing them close she felt suffocated as she cant see her love in others arms, maan saw the hurt in her eyes when he introduced the girl keeping hands on the girls waist. He saw seeing them that close she was hurt, angry, helpless and on the verge of having tears then maan added geet that the girl was also his sister apart from being a friend and geet at once was relieved listening to him. Maan know that he has to make it fast and propose her as she dont take initiative in telling her feelings. After the lunch maan took geet to a near by beach where there are less members and got on his knees an d proposed her and geet too went on her knees to match his level and hugged him tight and told yes and also said that she know that they are destined to meet each other being asked how she held his hands and showed his watch and told him how she bought that watch to gift her prince and how it reached him. Both were so happy finding their love and returned back to their homes promising each other that their distance will never make distance in their relation.

the end

next epilogue

will update tomorrow

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da double lovely updates! superbly written! they meet at the masquerade ball n dance! they r drawn 2 each other! bt they dnt get to meet after that! she returns 2 Mumbai! bt he heart is left with him! she saw him wearing the watch! he is her prince! Maan unabke 2 4get her! they meet after some time in Goa! they talk! Maan takes her 4 coffee! they r nw friends! Geet js seeing Maan hug the girl wen they go out 4 lunch! she is in tears! Maan says the girl is his sister n friend! Geet relieved! Maan knows Gete wil nt reveal her feelings! Maan takes her 2 the beach 2 some quiet spot n proposes! she accepts! intense hug! she tells him they were destined 2 b together! she shows the watch n explains! they promise each other tht distance wil nt separate them! fab end! waiting 4 epilogue! thanks 4 a nice SS! 😊
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lovely update so both met in meera yash bachelorette pety though didnt see eachother but were lost in eachother get saw watch she had bought for her prince in maans wrist but before she could see him properly he was gone mohindar went to office forgot a file send geet when maan had to go help yash dadi met geet and liked her alot marriage done they both moved on in their life but couldnt forget eachother
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lovely update both went for fest where both were singing maan was mesmerised with her voice as he wasnt sure if she was the same girl whom he heard in temple whereas geet was also staring at him when she saw watch in his wrist both got acquainted with eachother and became friends a girl hugged maan geet didnt like it man decided to push her more he saw hurt in her eyes and decided to propose to her he took her to beach and proposed to her geet was so happy and accepted geet told him they were destned to meet she showed the watch he was wearing is same one she bought for her love both were happy they found eachother
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Beautiful update...finally they met but did they know their parents were fixing their marriage...can't wait for the epilogue... Update soon dear

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