Willing Slave complete MG SS updated on 28-8-2015 / PG 1 - Page 27

gimme some time I will read n comment soon kk...
love you for PM baby muahhh ...

Interesting story name
Plz send me the pass ward
Story padneke baad lambi lambi comment
Plz jaldi do na I m eagerly waiting

Congratulation for the new story Sweety and muahhh for the PMS n PW ...

Marvelous and phenomenally written story ... heart wrenching scenes from start to till last freezing moments of this story...
Well done Richu you have maintained the actual essence of this story very well A Journey Revenge to Willing Slave ...

First I have to say you made me cry wid some really heart wrenching moments... most painful moments when maan beat up geet like hell literally I was shiver with this cruelty ...
Touchy moments maan's remorse full and his helplessness tear for the innocent soul who was endorse all torture foe their elder's sins without her fault and he couldn't save her for his own helpless situation WO chhah k bhi kuch nai kar paaya awww ...
Then the pool scene where that kamena yash tortured poor baby ayush n geet comes to save him aww that's the really close catch but again maan come as her saviour and recourse them ...
Best part indeed the last scene when she could easily got her freedom she refuse it !!! thaddaaa come back to her saviour to be his "Willing Slave " and their silent heart to heart moments that's indeed a incredible moments which left me in dazz I was like what was that but jo bhi tha I get it that actual meaning of this story...
clap clap just amazing interpretations the girl whom that kamena khurana'as wanted to punished ' torture and disrespected her carrying their elder son's baby now let's see what that horrendous creatures do you nailed it Richu ...
But now so many questions start to bugging me how and when this happend between Maaneet ? As you maintain that girl kiya tiya
Whatever's maan like or love her don't know what but as geet thoughts he love her that's why he felt suffocated and all mujhye bhi yahe laaga n mera toh pura mood gaya lo ho gaya shyaapa pehle h itne complicated h maaneet k milna ab ye k aur add hogaya grrr if it's true then how the hell maaneet happend ? .. is maan to having bad intension coz he was khurana ?? Or he make some deal with her for some reasons ?? Hope my all doubt regarding maan are baseless coz I know you didn't believe in sad story n I have full faith on you ...Grrr I know ab mere sarri curiosity Willing Slave part-2 main he end hoge lol ...

Coming to the updats
Start was very thrilling and scary , Handas and Khurana's enemy ...Khurana's turn out a true devil bcoz of handas cruelty they killed and destroy their daughter and made khurana's them cruel ruthless monster...seriously samarth is worsted father i know he has seen such a horrible incident in a tender age n having a bad impact still he was wrong and I feel he doesn't deserve to be a father just for his sick revenge he destroyed his own son's he will surly root in hell ...

poor geet and aayush they are facing their worth without any fault bcoz of her elders bad doing or I say sins they are paying...
That kamina yash lusting over her n even worst samarth supported him disgusting his revenge make him blind if he really respect his bua then he will never ever did like this ...but dadimaa stop them n said she will gift her to maan and all agree wid her decision !!! She knew that only he could save geet from the situation ...here comes our hero he sees her for the first time as he is told she is his birthday gift n he used her n tortured her then he put his condition loud and clear no one interfair in his matter wow cha a gaya aate h ... first he when maan comes to know she was handa gets angry but didn't said anything ...
he takes her to his bedroom and keep her but he did nothing even though he was drunk he never misbehave or touched her
and geet tried to take revenge but he was to alert and reacted to her very quickly they fought
at times she accused him still kuch nai kiya ... grrr that kamena say to his dad maan not torture her and
say he wants see maan torture geet maan beat geet in front of all geet faint maan take his room and
applied medicine on her wound n take care of her but geet don't understand his strange behavior ...
LOL she thinks he was not effected by her beauty and thought maybe she does not even deserve to be his slave ... here
maan spoke to his dadimaa and wanted to leave but when he heard that his dadimaa brought him back only to save geet and aayush he too agreed to stay until they are safe and geet heard their convo...
Then she comes to knew about maan's girlfriend and realize that is the reason he never paid attention to her
and he also felt suffocated been there ...with all the roller coaster ride comes to end when the moments comes to her freedom she refused n choose to be His Saviour Maan's willing Slave hmmm wanted to bang my head somewhere ab aays kyu kya geet ne ???
But the magical huge did wonder I think n magic happens between maaneet in this moments and he takes her back to KM knowing its dangerous while dadimaa is ferious with both but still they are together reason Richu jaane kiya tha ...
Then that moron yash again started his dirty game n try to shoot her but vicky tells everybody that she is pregnant with
Maan's baby everyone is shocked but dadimaa is more (ROFL ROFL even we poor readers are shell shocked) and ask geet is it true and maanet's silence proved indeed it's true ...now whattt
Richuu tu sach mein devil kiya cliff hanger deyaa h ab phoodte rahoo aapna sar kise wall pe jaake ye tha kya : P :P ...

phewww finally I did it yupiii ... two parts me comments marra h mein yaar ek barr mein comments jaa hi nahi
raha tha enna badda jo tha...hope I didn't disappeared you with my comment n I do justice to your efforts...
plsss next part bhi jaldi de...

eagerly waiting for willing slave part-2 n try to update sooonnn Sweety ...