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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
loved it
so they r married
its like beauty n d beast
will he be good to her n understand her naive n innocent heart
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
daadi is daadi she turn yhe table which gud 4 maan
only daadi knows ayesha's main motive
maan thoughts his di get attack by happiness
maan want to see gert bcuz hrr one jhalak making
him betaab
loved daadi giving ayesha tit fr tat
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Such red all 3 parts amazing start man. Getting married because he want bussiness be in the top 10 dadi worried about Mann marriage and the evil sister plans how horrible can you be then rano selling her daughter for deal because she got cancer try to save naive geet from cruel world Mann saw geet face little and want to see more please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
toh maan is changing...kash usse ayesha ki asliyat pata chal jaye...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
story is very intreseting...

read all part .. continue soon...

all the best ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Nice update
Dadi and ayesha both are dangerous in their own way
Awesom
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
nice updates 😃
ayesha is really a snake😡
maan respect and love her soo much still she wants to ruin his happiness😡
loved dadimaa😃
loved the way she made maan to give a chance to his marriage👏
finally maaneet married😃👏
maan was mesmerised with geet's beauty😉
can't wait for maaneet convo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Thanks to all who commented and liked my previous parts😊

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Part 4

After marriage Rano hugged geet. I dreamt a lot about your marriage. Some came true some not.Apna khyal rakna.Mother and daughter cried a lot. Ayesha murmured "what a drama? Koi filmy scene chal raha hey yahan.Aisa lag raha hai aaj ke baad dono kabhi nahi milnewale" At last Ayesha said"Maan in logon ki nautanki aur saha nahi jaata tell your wife we have to leave fast."
Maan too was fed up by family drama."lets go" he said to geet in lower voice...but geet didnt notice and was busy with her mom. "Mrs Handa we have to leave" he said once again. Geet heard. Rano too in action told her to go. Ayesha was going to sit in their car when dadi told her to come with her.Now maaneet were alone in the car.
Both were confused what to say so kept quite. After sometime a call came for maan from office.Someone has done a sily mistake which made him hyper and he shouted "What the hell. I hate carelessness. Make sure he is thrown out and doesnt get any job now onwards ". geet got terrified and just sat like a statue. Maan then only realized his newly wedded wife was sitting besides him.
" Its just i cant handle imperfection...i mean i get angry very fast.." he said but didn't find any reply. After sometime which seemed ages when Maan found her whimper. "See..i..you...i mean..." Maan didnt know what to say then only he realised he doesnt know her name too. "Ms Han.." he closed his eyes"My name is geet" she said in low voice"Geet he said to himself "nice name and such a sweet voice"
I am "Maan" a smile appeared on her lips. Maan too found his name very sweet for first time from her voice.
They entered Khurana Mansion. dadi did grahapravesh
"Maan lift preet and take her to your room" "Preet nahi dadi geet" said Maan only to watch two pairs of eyes watching him with suprise.
"Are wah Maan aap to" Ayesha interrupted"Kya aap yeh rasam jaldi karengi mujhe mere ghar jana hai"
ha to meine kaha roka hai tumhe jaane se waise bhi yahan tumahare sage thodi rehte hain jo tumhara rukna zaroori ho"
"yahan sage aur sauteli li baath kahanse aagayi..."
both started their routine drama. Maan wanted to say something but he didnt get even a space to say letter forget a word.
Maan found geet twisting her dupatta. It was clear that she was already nervous and now tensed with all this drama. Maan didnt know what to do. he knew he cant stop this.
''One is my dadi sans and other my sister in law with whom i havent even spoken a word. First Maan shouted in car. For some mistake he was ready to spoil someones life.Now these two are fighting. one thing is clear Khuranas ke naak mein ghussa bhara hai. geet dhyan rakna ki inhe khabhi gussa na dilayein aur apne pati ko toh perfection chahiye toh no gadbad. OK. dadi and di dont share a good relation. But why maan is not stoping them? he should have done something.Dadi told step sister it means...!

She was lifted by Maan briging her out of her self talking process.Maan lifted geet and left to his room. Both ladies stop their drama and stared maaneet.
"Dont think much. it happens here everyday. This is my family. and you have to adjust. Never think they will compromise for you. Aur yeh daily routine hai. Kabhi unke arguments mein interfere karne ki sochna bhi mat. Tum hi fas jaogi"
Maan said in one stretch. They reached the room. Tum change karlo and take rest i will come after sometime. Maan left the room.

Meanwhile Downstairs.

Savitri screamed"Nakul...come fast" Nakul their loyal servant ran and came to dadi Nakul Ayesha madam ko ghar jana hai. Jaakar taxi bula laao. Humari gaadi toh inhe choti padegi.'
Dadi plz aaj toh aap chup reh sakti thi na. Kal aapne mujhe rishton ko apnane ke baare mein itni badi lecture di aur aap ka kya jo itne saalon se di ko apna na saki uska kya.Plz dadi meine bhi to aapki baat maankar is relation ko chance dina. Next is yours plz di ko chance do.
Maan turned to Ayesha Di raat bohot ho chuki hai. Aap yahi rukjaaiye. Kal subah jaayiye. Its not safe to drive at night.'' Ayesha didnt say anything just went to her room in KM to sleep.

Daadi saare rasam ho gaye haina.Maan asked in the sweetest way ever possible by him. Aaj keliye sare rasam pure ho gaye.Matalab kal aur bhi rasam honge? Maan was actually amused how many more are left.
Are ab rasoyi pujan kal subah hoga aur muhdikhayi ki rasam meine ek hafte baad rakhi hai. Sabko bulana bhi to hai.
Ek hafta!!... tabtak geet ghunghat mein chalegi? Maan said to himself''Agar itne geet ghunghat mein rahegi to mein duniya ka pehla pati banjaunga jise apni hi biwi ki shakal nahi pata, She looked beautiful in that bride dress but ladkiyon ka koi bharosa nahi ladkiyon ke make up mein itni takat hai ki dyne ko bhi top model jaise present kare
Dadi Maan bete aap kya soch rahe hain? waise geet apka wait kar rahi hogi. Aap ko ab jana chayiye.
chehra dekhe bina suhaag raat? Maan didnt realised that he was so loud that dadi heard it. Dadi with open mouth stared him. Maan too got embarrassed. Maan was going to leave when dadi understood what he asked.
''Maan bete, muhdikhayi ki rasam ghar ke baaki logon keliye hai aapkeliye nahi. Aap jab chahe apni biwi ka chehra dekh sakte hain.
Maan was now totally embarrassed. He literally ran from there. dadi felt actually very happy. Maan is giving 100% for this relation. She was sure geet was naive and Maaneet will compliment eachother in everyway. They just needed a push but she has to be with geet in every step to keep her away from Ayesha.

In Maaneet's Room

Maan was totally embarrassed by dadi. he mentally scolded for acting like fool. But he was sure he want to give a chance to this relation. first step would be by talking to geet. he planned what he will ask her to know about her more.
All his plans went in vain when he saw geet sleeping on the bed in sitting position. he understood get would be very tired like him with all these rituals. Maan touched geet's shoulder when geet just woke up and stood suddenly only to be bump into maan. Geet lost her balance and was going to fall. She clutched on maan's collar to avoid falling but she landed on bed with maan on her top.
Geet's veil was nowhere to be seen. Maan could see her face clearly but he only concentrated on her dove shaped eyes which were so deep that expressed all her emotions. Maaneet didnt realize for how much time they were in that position. Both felt an unknown attraction for each other. Geet was first one to come out of trance. A fear came inside her whether they are going to compromise today itself. She wanted to take it slow as she was not ready to take this relation so fast. She wanted time and somewhere she was sure Maan too want the same. She tried to move only to brush her lips slightly on Maan's cheek.It was then he realized their position and got up. Geet ran to washroom as soon as Maan got up. Maan scolded himself for staring geet in such way but felt for the first time that his heart was at peace without any tension. On the other side geet's heartbeat was so fast that she could hear them. She came out after sometime.
As Maan heard the washroom door opening,Tum change karlo Maan was going to leave Suniye...Maan stopped only to turn back. Woh mere kapde...mera bag yaha nahi hain geet was very nervous and embarrassed by what happen few minutes before.''Mein Nakul se kehkar tumhare bags laata hoon. he left the room.

Ayesha didnt get sleep as today it was clear Maan will definitely give chance to this marriage. She had to plan something but with dadi near she couldnt do anything. Ayesha felt thirsty only to find an empty jug. She went kitchen. Coming back to her room she saw Maan carrying two bags in his hand. Maan why are you carrying this? where are the servants? tum kahin jaa rahe ho?Ayesha thought Maan was actually acting about al this marriage because of dadi. Before she could dream more. Di ..yeh geet ke hain. I didnt find any servant so thought to carry it myself. Itna toh mein apneaap kar hi sakta hoon.
Ayesha gave a fade smile and left not able to bare more pain. She asked thousand time to her heart where she went wrong in calculations.

Geet was waiting in her room when Maan entered in the room with the bag.''tum change karlo. Aur so jaana mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Ayesha was restless she started walking to and fro when maan entered her room. Di.. Ayesha saw worried Maan Di is their any problem? Are you OK? You look very worried. ''I am Ok Maan. I just.' Ayesha paused in the middle when her eyes went on the lipstick mark on Maan's neck. Ayesha turned back and said I had a fight with Arun so only. Maan I want to be alone''
Maan thought it would be something between them. he must not interfere. he went back to the room.
Maan found geet sleeping on a side of bed . Maan changed into his night suit and took ther side of bed and went to sleep.

Edited by masti_maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Nice update
Maan n his thinking... Mudhikayi bina SR😆
Ye ayesha😡 iska KM mein entry bandh kardho😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haye... Keep the maan the way he is... There should be no influence by Ayesha on him... Or else she will not let them be happy .. Hope dadima will always be there for geet and maan too beside her... Hehhehe... That was hilarious when maan said a little too loud for himself too that dadima over heard it... Hehe.. He was hell embarrassed... Maan is giving this relation a chance.. Hope Ayesha remain out of the km for long.. So that their relation should start in the mean while.. Update soon

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