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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting concept.an orphan makes another orphan her own n loves her to death.continue soon...wish to read this story of love...where the small angel will bring happiness to the lives of maan n geet.luv u
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Silence prevailed all over the place.. There she was looking like a lost personality..Her tears were flowing without any hesitance and her clothes a little dirty with the mud all over her.. a young girl came around and hug her letting her cry .. She looked at the person in front of her and sobbed uncontrollably, the other girl was also crying, she was sitting asking god why they have to write the same fate in the destiny of both of them..She looked at the girl and patted her back letting her cry..

Geet : why I was not with them sawrna.. Why I was here.. I have lost everything.. I have lost everything.. ma papa ..sob.. Why did they leave me here.. She sobbed and sawrna let her cry..She knew that how it felt losing her deho

Swarna held her close and let her cry..she need to let go her only family that she lost and now thinsg needs to be settled but before she needs to make sure that geet was fine..

Swarna : geet , they loved you and what if they are gone ..i am there for you.. zindagi kisi ke jaane se kahatam nahi hoti hai.. you just have to live and why are you feeling alone.. me hun , dada hai.. and don't think that we will leave you.. Now come on get up..She wiped geet's tears..and held her hand to make her up..

Geet again felt heavy and cried hugging sawrna hard..she didn't knew what will be done now..How will she survive alone..What will be done but life has to go and she was feeling weak and withered.. swrana could feel her tears on her shoulder wetting her kurti but she knew that what she and her brother felt years back , geet was feeling same.. it was just the third day that she lost her parents in a car accident and now she was in their native place hoshiarpur where her relatives were there and she was left all alone..swarnali rajput was her childhood friend and went through same situation where she was left alone..

Swarna had flown from Chandigarh when she heard the news.. And seeing geet's situation she knew that it was more difficult for geet since she was alone..The only child of her parents and in the blink of eyes she lost her everything..

Swarna held geet and brought her to the room..She made her sit and brought her plate that she herself fed her and geet just had a few bites while her tears were flowing continuously..

Geet held swarna's hand and nodded in a no..


Swarna ; thoda sa geet.. aise toh tu bimar pad jayegi.. You haven't eaten anything since yesterday.. do you think that uncle aunty will be happy with this..

Geet sobbed and cried..

Geet : swarn...a .. mumma papa ki yaad aati hai.. Why I wasn't with them..Agar unke saath hoti toh ye sab nahi hota na.. I would have been also with them..

Swarna held her tight and give her a piece of mind ... geet was not only her friend but a sister who was close to her.. and she shuddered even by her words and she knew by geet's words that she was disturbed ..

Swrana : what about the people who love you..me , dada and daarji bolo.. You would have lived with uncle aunty and what about me, we will be in remorse that we lost you too geet.. Your parents loved you a lot.. aisi baatein karke unke pyar ki insult mat karo.. You have to look after what they started.. unke sapne unki beti pure karegi geet..Do you know how many families and people are working in the companies ucle hold..unka kya..

Geet too was stilled with her words but she was still in the pain that babaji had given for the lifetime.. She was now a orphan..Instead of having a family she was feeling alone..

Swarna : when ma papa left us..You were the one who told me..dont worry swarna I am there for you.. ma papa nahi hai toh kya hua..geet toh hai na.. What if we are not related by birth, dil ka rishta toh hai na.. wo sab bhul kaise sakti hai geet..

Geet looked at sawrna's anger mixed with tears and she calm her sister and murmured sorry now..She was too selfish..

Geet : I am selfish swarna.. I am sorry..i am sorry.. swarna smiled through her tears and knew that geet will need time but she will be back soon..

Geet : wo sapne unke saath chale gaye swarna.. I don't want to do anything sawrna , I will leave to Varanasi mumma papa ke last rituals ke liye.. yahan taiji , tauji and brij veerji will look after the business.. brij veerji ne mujhe bola hai , he will look after everything I don't have to worry.. I want to give my parents soul rest in peace..

Swarna : we will go..Don't worry and never think you are alone geet..


It was the seventh day that they were in Varanasi, the place where she finally gave her parents peace and geet did the last rituals of her parents which were supposed to do done by her brother but since she was the only child of her parents she didn't let anyone, even her cousin brij ..She was all aloof and depressed and when the elders objected geet had fought with them and did all the remaining rituals in Varanasi alone though she wanted to come alone but swarna knowing her temper and mindset of the moment didn't let her come alone.. She knew that her mother always wanted to come here with her and her father but business and time never let them come as a family..Last time she was here with rano..rano had said that she wanted her last rituals to be done here..

It was in the morning the cold wind was blowing and the sudden chillness in the ghats of the ganges with the loneliness everywhere except some priests who were there for their daily routine worship she was sitting on the steps looking in the direction where the holy river , ganga (ganges) which was flowing calmly..


(EDIT CREDIT GOES TO PRIYA DI )

She was so engrossed that she didn't find the priest in saffron color clothes coming towards her and he was about to ask something..it was all dark and even he was dark seeing a beautiful young girl alone and the tears which were flowing there were the evidence that she was missing something..Her life was not as easy as it appears, he blessed her in his heart and left.. the darkness was slowly fading away and the brightness was setting its foot..it was a bluish blackish hue all over..Instead of the sun , the dark black clouds were there.. geet was all lost in her childhood , the time she had with her parents and finally concluding that she was now only having the loneliness..

Geet : itni shant kaise rehti ho aap.. sabko apne me sama leti ho..Mere ma papa ko bhi rakhna apne paas..She said looking at the calm water of ganges and walked down the steps and touched the water that only made her cry..The same ganga now was having her parents.. she was engrossed when she looked at a white cloth at some distance.. geet first tried to ignore but a small finger emerged and she looked clearly and found something.. She walked down some steps..slowly, it was slippery but the curiosity let her go in..The holy water touched her feet and she saw a white frock with frills and geet walked closer..and went inside the water and saw a hand..She was scared to go further but something forced her to go inside..She went inside letting herself drown in the water..The water was covering her above her waist and a fear crept inside her heart.. She was feeling her heart beats raising but something said to her that she can't go back..what if the person was still alive , geet took a deep breath seeing the small portion of cloth and went in...The hand she saw was at a distance and she immediately paced seeing a small body , she once was about to slip but held herself...geet immediately held the body and brought it out of the water.. she was now having small body and saw a very small baby girl..She was bruised and there were wounds on her forehead and lips were cut..geet felt like she would cry the moment seeing the little one in so much pain..She immediately laid her in her lap after sitting on the steps and checked her pulse.. the pulse was still there..geet tried to pump the water out of her body but she wasn't able too..Tears were gushing out of her eyes and she immediately ran with her towards the nearest hospital..



Sorry for delay..

My college is started so now got busy..

Do comment and like..

NOTE : I will post a PM list and keep checking the thread for updates , if this will get a good response then maybe I won't shift this..


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Posted: 10 years ago
Very emotional update. Geet lost her parents in car accident.
She found baby in Ganga river.. I think she is Maan daughter. Interesting concept. Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update! I could clearly feel Geet's pain. Reading this part I thanked God to have blessed me enough to have the lve aand support of my parents. I love swarna. Only lucky people have friends who can be more than family. I am also happy that you considered our request and started this SS.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting
Continue soon😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional part. Geet lost her parents but Swarna is there to support Geet. She left her father business to her cousin Brij n came to varnasi for her parents last retual. She found small baby girl in water with buries n took her to hospital
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update...
Geet lost her parents...
Geet found small baby in water...
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats for the new story
Poor geet lost her parents
She found a child 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb start yaar.. Sooo emotional.. I have a feeling geetus family is very greedy.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice starting...
poor geet...she lost her family...
liked the cutie pie khushi...
she will be the centre of attraction...i hope so...
eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet lost her parents in an accident.
She is broken but swarna helped her to overcome this time.
She is a great support to Geet.
Geet performed d last rituals of her parents against everyone wish.
Geet found a baby in Ganges.
She took d baby to d hospital.

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