The Vengeance Lover thread 3 complete....link to thread 4 @ pg 1 n 147 - Page 83

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser.
and congrats for TVL's first birthday 😊
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Awesome teasers and happy anniversary of story in advance.😃
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Now eagerly waiting for next update. Post soon .
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advance congrats lazy writer 😆
lovely teasers
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lo ckalo ek nay prem kahani ab hui sharu.
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congrats vandy
nice teasers ..

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nice teasers...

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beech mn aagye😆😆
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On Completing One Year Of "The Vengeance Lover(TVL)" wanna thank each n every reader from bottom of my heart❤️...i know i m very bad writer but still learning because of ur all support🤗...those lovely comments n big likes always push me to write more😳😳



Thanx alot to Vampy(abba12) n Sweta(crazy_sweta) for motivating me n being my support system...❤️🤗
Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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written by sweta

Her eyes shoot up...to stare at him.. Maan finally reached though he was late but he made it .

Finding geet in front of him was a bit of relief for him but the emptiness in her eyes wasn't appealing. She was staring him without blinking once again as conceiving him .

Though she thought it to be dream a sweet dream...she did want to move. Once again the cold hearted geet was pushed inside by the girl who was slowly falling for the man in front of her.

She closed her eyes and in the next flicker of sec she landed in his arms. Maan was quick enough to grab her waist and pull her to himself..when she was shove by one of over excited tourist..

Her heart started pacing in sync with his... She couldn't believe where she was ...!! His arms snaked around her waist...and her body so close to his sending goosebumbs to her skin...all over.

Maan thanked his stars to have catch her to time. He was glad she was in his arms... rain, geet and this fall somewhere made a perfect scene his mind popped up..

Shaking his head his lips curved into a small smile..as he stared her.. Her cheeks warmed up.. and mind stopped everything that was running.. With closed eyes she could glimpse him openly.. His stare automatically made her feel jittery..

Maan smiled widely watching her blush... yet not moving his hands.. She was still red and now shivering...she clutched his shirt.. tightly waiting for him to step back... She waited and he waited... no one moved...

After a sec or so.. Maan moved in more close... She could now feel his breath ..she clenched her eyes more tightly..

Maan was in awe .. She looked heavenly ..After he left hospital..he wasn't feeling good.. But with geet at this moment..he was on cloud nine.. Having her in his arms was the best thing he thought. His thoughts changed..relatively when his eyes fell on her quivering lips...

Oh... he uttered in admiration ... He was getting naughty..now..

Since those eyes were playing hide n seek with him..he had the full authority to stare those pink rosy lips..

He raised his hand...and caressed his thumb over her cheek.. She shivered under his touch..and cocooned herself ...

His one touch realized her of his true presence... Yes He came! He Came.!! He fulfilled his promise!! Her heart swelled in happiness..which made their way through eyes...

In that rain...those tears...made him shocked... He held her face within his hands...and called her out " geet" His voice was painful...and filled with guilt..

Geet dint respond..to him... And he was losing his patience.. geet..ankhhe kholo...please geet... His voice cracked...listening to which she got alert and snapped her eyes open...

Her doe eyes met his chocolate brown..! She blinked back to forcefully settled back her tears...as eyes read the pain in his..

"mm...mai..." She tried to speak...shaking her head...

He sighed in relief understanding her words... Relishing her unsaid words...his heart felt elated...

She blushed...watching his glee with eyes downcasted..

It was his next step..which dumbfounded her...when his lips captured hers..!!

Her blush added to his pride and at last he couldn't control...

He snaked his hand into her wet curls...while slowly wetting her lips... She tighten her eyes...and held his collar to support heself..

His hands worked on her waist trying to find his comfort zone..and then held her tight...pulling her closer.. His lips were enact on her..sucking them lavinginsly..

She was tasting honey!! His mind stated...!! He was brushing his lips all over hers..making her sexually arouse... She was certainly arouse...and he could feel it ... He knew she shy...so he gave her time to get adjusted...and began stroking her lower lips.. His stroke sent shivers down her spine...and last made her sigh...in pleasure... She parted her lips..feeling bliss...and he took in the charge..endeavoring the heaven ..

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Geet stirred in her sleep when she realized she is sleeping in her bed. She opened her eyes n she herself in her room...in her bed. She had faint memory of maan bringing her back but after that whole thing is blur. She looked at her clothes...n was shocked that she was wearing his shirt...he...he changed her clothes...a warm hue come on her cheek. She knows maan will never cross his limit, people may ask how can she trust him so blindly when she knew him from past 3-4 months...but that whats amazes her...with maan or anything to b related to him...there is no logic from her side...her heart say n her mind believes it...

She looked around for maan...n saw a bowl n piece of cloth dipped in it. He must b treating her...she looked around n found a neatly folded sheet n pillow on couch...a smile spread on her lips...she was not alone n suffering whole night...there was someone taking care of her n who stayed all night to take her care...

She moved towards the bathroom and after getting ready she moved downwards in search of maan...when noises from kitchen attracted her attention she moved towards kitchen. Sight of kitchen was pleasant for her...maan was making breakfast.

Good morning maan....she smiled from her heart...

Maan who was working got starlet by voice n looked towards it...n smile come to his lips too seeing geet totally fine n in such great mood...

Good morning geet...oh great u are awake as i was about to call u from breakfast...but firstly tell me ...how u feeling now...maan asked moving near her

I m totally fine maan...woahh breakfast...what u made maan... geet looked at the covered dish on the counter...

Khichdi...u know i have to drive for 1hr to the nearest Indian store to get the material......maan told him smiling...he was happy he did something for her...just for her

Geet face who was brightly smiling...become dull suddenly...khichdi...she just hate khichdi from childhood...

What happen geet...

Nothing maan...woh...i mean ...y u made this specially...bread where there nah...geet told him trying to control damage done by her as she didn't want to hurt maan...

Oh ho geet...don't go in formalities...u were not well...u know how much high fever u had last night...n u skipped ur dinner too...so u need something solid to gain energy...maan said.

Chaloo come...have ur breakfast... n he moved towards the dinning table holding the plate and geet carried the bowl..

Both pass awkward smile to each other n looked at own plates n took spoon to eat...but both were making faces seeing khichdi...

Geet bhi nah ...keh nahi sakti mein normal khana kha lu ...lagta h iske chakkar mn aaj mujh zindagi mein pheli baar khichdi khani padegi woh bhi mere hath ki hi...bhagwann please bacha loo......maan thought

Baba ji mujh kahan fasa diya...maan ne itne mehnat n pyar se mere liye yeh khichdi banai h...par mein yeh kaise kahun...usse bhi kuch aur nhi mila that bannane ko...baba Ji apni geet ko bacha lo.....geet thought

In end...both finish their super tasty khichdi n promised them self to never eat again...

Mein toh aaj ke baad iske liye toh kabhi khichdi nhi banaunga...apne sath mujh b khila deti h...isse acha toh bread n butter hi tha...maan tu bhi nah...khichdi par atka hua h tujh usse saari sachai batani h ...kal ki n sameera ki.....maan thought

Maan ko bol du kabhi mere liye khichdi nhi banaye...usse bura toh nahi lagega...geet tu b nah...jhali h...log pyar mn kya se kya kar haate h tu ek khichdi nhi kha sakti...abhi b kha li nah...ap chup....geet thought


Maan said....geet mujh tumse kuch baat karni h...


Haan bolo maan...geet replied passing smile to him


Woh geet mujh tumhe apne past......just than geet phone rang n she gave a sorry smile to maan


Ek min maan...Papa ka phone h....n she picked up the phone n moved away

Geet returned after few minutes n looked very disturbed...


Kya hua feet...


Maan humein next flight se hi wapas Jana hoga....


Ek dum achanak...humari kal ki tickets booked h nah...


Haan but ek problem aagayi h n woh project mein hi handle kar rahi hoon...agar kal meeting attend nhi ki toh woh project cancel kar denge...v need to leave right now...


Ohh...chalo tum apni packing kar lo n mein ticket ki arrangement karta hoon...


Hmm...ohk....n geet left from there...


Precap : geet maan n karan


As this ff completed one year i want all reader to tell me one thing they can recollect from one past year...any fav scene...twist...or anything u like about this ff...please do tell...


Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago

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