The Vengeance Lover thread 3 complete....link to thread 4 @ pg 1 n 147 - Page 51

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: geetmerly

Excellent update dear.

Maan know the company which was involved in drugs before . This was enough to collect all the proof against them . The way maan was admiring geet & wants to say his love for her was well written

Waiting for the moment who will confess they love but what will sameera have in her mind coz she will surly do something to destroy their world. Wish maaneet be save from her evil ways .

Thanx dear
lets c what will sam do...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shri12

Awesome Story Read all the parts in a go Maan wanted revenge from sameera who betrayed him annie got a great support from Arjun even maan also ad a great support of him he is now into businees and geet is a simple girl who wants love from her loved ones which she is being deprived and outer world know her as a hardcore person and Sameera is such a idiot being married to Mohinder handa wanted everything for herself and also cheating on him she is scared of maan return maan and geet had a great start slowly they started to understand each other first it was tu tu mein but they were understanding each other and was soothing presence when one needed and they started to like each other now waiting for more

Thanx alot dear...hope u enjyed reading all in one go...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser...

waiting for the update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser but who jumped geet or sameera???
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part
maan helping geet n he found the bg of company
they collected enuf prrofs
loved the way maan gave geet confidence
sameera is surprised to c them both close

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Posted: 9 years ago
howz u di??
after long seen u online...u were inactive kya???
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Posted: 9 years ago
Today is monday, waiting for update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
just 10-15 min more...formatting n two three pic searching is left😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 26

Teaser




Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


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I cant thank u guys enough for such overwhelming response to last part even on teaser...i m just too happy still in shock though😆😆...this really motivates the LAZY writer in me......😆


Maan left from there as he wanted Geet to face it alone. He wanted him to b her strength... not her weakness. He also wanted sometime alone before he confesses his feeling and revel his past.

(Not going in details of the meeting)

Meeting was superb for geet. She was able to cancel the deal. Sameera tried hard to sign the deal by using name of board members n her father but nothing worked for her. She (geet) already had talk with all board members before this meeting. She didn't talked to her father though but surprising was his agreement with her when sameera called him. She was overwhelmed by his support in open n giving rights of this project to her in future and asked sameera to come back n be ready to face board members with her explanation... how she missed such a important background check about company.

It was around 4 when meeting was over, geet has 3 hour in hand to get ready n reach at Eiffel tower. She wanted to look best today so she thought to shop for new dress first. She headed for her shopping.

Sameera was pissed off by the end result of the meeting. She lost all the money she was getting from this deal n ownership of the company in future. She was just too angry at maan because she know somewhere maan is responsible for this. She always knew geet was emotional about this place n when emotional she is just geet which is too easy to defeat. Geet Handa is a strong n intelligent businesswoman whom it's difficult to deal n defeat but other hand geet is too emotional and too easy to defeat. She knew as deal was concerned with her mother's paradise she won't b able to handle it n in the end loosing the place. But she underestimated maan which is sole reason of her defeat. This is high time to confront maan...what he want... Y not leave her in peace n go away from her life.

She called her secretary to know about maan whereabouts...when she saw maan leaving from hotel, she asked her secretary to follow him. She wanted to know what they were planning and y was maan here.

Her secretary informed her that maan was on seine river cruise near Eiffel tower...

She left the hotel to meet him n reached at her destination. She saw maan standing in one of the cruise n she also gets in.

Maan was standing when someone taped his shoulder. He turned to look behind and was shocked to see sameera.

u...what u doing here sameera....he asked her curtly n trying very hard to hold back his anger. This was first time they came face to face after his punishment without anyone presence around them.

I need to talk to u maan....sameera said and tried her best to ignore his anger which was clearly visible in his eyes ...they are blood shot red after seeing her here.

U did when I wanted too...no nah...there is nothing left between us to talk about sameera...n he turned his back to her giving a very clear indication to leave from here.

There is...i know u still love me...u using geet to make me feel jealous...sameera tried to use his emotions for her but what she didnt realize was she herself killed those emotions and now those special feeling of him belong to someone else.

U r absolutely wrong sameera...i don't love u instead I hate u...n what relation I share with geet has nothing to do with u...but I can guarantee u it is just real not fake like urs...

Sameera move forward n hugged him tightly from his back n said

I know u r lying maan...u r still my Mr.Lost ( past part 2 n 3...sameera used to call maan mr. lost n maan used to call her miss dreamy) who loves me like crazy...

Maan loosen her hold around him n he turned to looked at her. His eyes were splitting venoms. He hissed n struggled to hold his temper and said.

I was lost earlier Mrs Sameera Handa but not anymore...now I m aware of ur reality...ur true face...ur fake love...so don't try to act innocent infront of me...

That's not true maan...i still have feeling for u...I still love u...I have enough money for both of us...v will go away from all this...n v will live happily like v dreamed of...mr. lost n miss dreamy together n forever

U were the one who broke those dreams sameera...u n ur ambition of being rich...now I don't believe u...i don't trust u

Please believe me maan...I love u.....but her hope was going down seeing him not reacting on her words. She felt helpless and said....how can I make u believe maan...she looked here n there...n said...u think I don't love u nah...I will prove it to u that I do...I can give up my life for u maan...I love u so much...

N she jumped in the river...maan was shocked seeing all this...he was not able to understand what happen in such a fraction of time...he was numb...but he got back to his senses when he heard screams around him to save her...people were shouting for help...n than he jumped in to save her...

She was unconscious when they came out n by than life saver n ambulance also reached. They took her to nearby hospital n doctors treated her. She inhaled too much of water so she was kept under observation till get her conscious back...

Maan was in dilemma...what to do...one mind asked him to leave her here and go to meet geet as she will b waiting for him but second mind ask him to stay here till she get her conscious back just for humanity sake...

Before he can decide what to do, police reached there as hospital staff informed them. They asked several question from him n order him to wait till they statement from sameera...than only they will allow him to leave. Maan was left with no option...he was cursing his fate as he was stuck here whereas geet might reached at Eiffel tower.

Geet bought a white dress for her n she got ready in it. She kept the makeup minimum and let her natural curly hair open for today ...

she reached at Eiffel before time...15 min earlier...she can't deny the fact she was too excited n happy today after long time. She was able to save her mom's paradise and even her company from those frauds. N she was getting these vibes that may b maan gonna confess his feeling today as he said today will b the new beginning of their relation...

it was beautiful view of Eiffel tower as sun is going down...sky is organish pink in color today...she get settle on a bench n waited for maan...she chided herself in her mind to b so early here...

she was seeing people around here specially couples...roaming around holding hands...hugging eachother...they looks happy n enjoying their life with their partner...but today she was not jealous of them ...she was happy too...she was waiting for him...he will come soon...

time passes it was 7.30 pm now...still there is no sign of maan...now she was getting worried ... she opened her bag to take phone out to call him n ask about his whereabouts...but there was no phone...shit...she forget her phone in home only...

she was getting worried by every passing minute ...maan didn't reached yet...n she forget cell at home n not able to call him...now its 8.30 pm...

Suddenly she felt some hand on his shoulder from behind...she turned...n her happiness has no bound...he came...he is safe...nothing happen to him...she get up n hugged him tightly...to never leave him again...not to let him go...

Suddenly some droplets fall on her face...she looked toward the sky n noticed heavy rain gonna start ...she turned towards maan so that they can leave from here...but there is no maan...


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Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago

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