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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update di
that maid...grrr 😡
she tio a women na..chi
Geet is soo innocent 😃
Maan had none to think abt 😭
wow..geet yad aa gayi 😉
he went to see geet 😃
loved it soo much di 😃

sry for commenting here di 😭
Most of the time when i open blog.."web page not available" 😡
if by chance it opened just after tying my comment and I click post then error 😡
can i post the comment here di 😒 plzz 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Superbly awesome updates I wish I can read them in one go
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hai mona sorry for late comment. i asked for access n upto now i didnt comment. now only i read all 6 parts. geet is orpan n geet escaped from narender n hide in maan car. maan allowed geet in his manson n ask nakul to look after her. next morning manson sarvents saw geet n maan came at time n every one escape. geet is working as maid in manson. maan gave money to geet to but dress. but that maid without knowing anything think badly about geet n jelousy of her n used geet innosence n buy dress. maan n geet encounter. maan living alone n burden life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Even the maid is jealous
She is making and watching
Fun of Geet
Maan is so lovely
He had a soft heart

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm updt...maan is so caring evn if he shows as rude person bt he is really good at heart...Geet is so happy...evn small things bring smile and happiness on her face...that maid is jealous on Geet seriously...today ppl nt able to see anyone happy...Geet with happy heart gvs her mny to buy fr hr daughter...selfless person always gt evrything evn without deman fr it...aww maan thinks abt Geet and cover her with blanket...lovely moment...updt soon...THE THING IS WOULD LIKE TO COMMENT ON BLOG BT THE THING IS M NT ABLE TO COMMENT...CZ COMMENT BOX NT THERE...MAY BE ITS MY PHN...BT M ABLE TO COMMENT ON OTHERS BLOG WRK...ANYWAYS IF THR NT POSSIBLE WILL SURELY COMMENT OVER HERE...AND THANX FR WONDERFULL UPDT...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-7...it was very heart breaking but at the end it become heart whelming... That maid..urrgghh.. She is such a cheAp ... Maan has no one but thinking about geet and worrying about her ... And changing scene.. Maan wasn't that bad or does he hide his feeling??... Post next part soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update ⭐️ Geet is so sweet n innocent. Waiting for next dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samidsamid

awsm updt...maan is so caring evn if he shows as rude person bt he is really good at heart...Geet is so happy...evn small things bring smile and happiness on her face...that maid is jealous on Geet seriously...today ppl nt able to see anyone happy...Geet with happy heart gvs her mny to buy fr hr daughter...selfless person always gt evrything evn without deman fr it...aww maan thinks abt Geet and cover her with blanket...lovely moment...updt soon...THE THING IS WOULD LIKE TO COMMENT ON BLOG BT THE THING IS M NT ABLE TO COMMENT...CZ COMMENT BOX NT THERE...MAY BE ITS MY PHN...BT M ABLE TO COMMENT ON OTHERS BLOG WRK...ANYWAYS IF THR NT POSSIBLE WILL SURELY COMMENT OVER HERE...AND THANX FR WONDERFULL UPDT...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: susm

hai mona sorry for late comment. i asked for access n upto now i didnt comment. now only i read all 6 parts. geet is orpan n geet escaped from narender n hide in maan car. maan allowed geet in his manson n ask nakul to look after her. next morning manson sarvents saw geet n maan came at time n every one escape. geet is working as maid in manson. maan gave money to geet to but dress. but that maid without knowing anything think badly about geet n jelousy of her n used geet innosence n buy dress. maan n geet encounter. maan living alone n burden life.


Dont be sorry dear.. Its okay 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --mittu--

Lovely update di
that maid...grrr 😡
she tio a women na..chi
Geet is soo innocent 😃
Maan had none to think abt 😭
wow..geet yad aa gayi 😉
he went to see geet 😃
loved it soo much di 😃

sry for commenting here di 😭
Most of the time when i open blog.."web page not available" 😡
if by chance it opened just after tying my comment and I click post then error 😡
can i post the comment here di 😒 plzz 😛


Hey Mittu dont be sorry dear .. Yes sometimes it happens. Server gets down.

But if possible please press LIKE button there so I will be pleased 😊

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