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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

part 5- those servants r so creep but maan came he gave her money to geet to buy new cloths she was so happy first time she got money n going to buy her own dress nice part thnx 4 update

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leena63

@leena63

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

amazing update
after getting 1000rs.geet's reaction was very natural,she always wear secondhand cloths,how sad
those servants how creep,i like maan's care

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sriif

@sriif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Parts from 1 to 5:

Awesome concept and commented to all the parts in blog dear under the name srideviss...😊

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

lovely update geet is lonely trapped in an orphanage where she isnty allowed to see the world she is trapped in a cage that is her hom she is even deprived of education as she is an orphan she is very intelligent maan is rich has everything but still is incomplete something is missing from his life maan is deprieved from any emotions of love happiness in his life he is living like a robot who is just moving in his life the orphange geet was living was not a safe place for women as they were sold to highest bidder like a cattle they were chosen and sold to men who would taer away their innocense nad kill their souls for their needs and desires and geet had become his prey

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Awesome part

Maan was a saviour

He let her work in his house

Geet is so excited for her shopping

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

I've only commented on blog to I also have to comment on thread

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

part 2 lovely update so warden sold off geet to the olddie geet has no idea what is abt to happen to her she is scared and crying maan came to the orphanage called the man who was busy in his prey the man was maans dad friend and partner whom maan didnt liked but he bear him coz of his dad geet was unable to believe she was saved but noot for long her friends came and rescued her she had very less time to esacpe the demon she somehow undersytood their words and escaped the prison that was known to her as her home

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

part 3 lovely update geet escaped narender was hell angry warden was scared she didnt know where to look for her maan reached km he was abt to leave when he went back for his hone he saw some sack like thing looked clearly it was a girl geet had hid herself in maans car she was hell sacred maan was trying to calm her down he knew something bad happened to her

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Part5
nice one
thank god maan came at right time...
glad to see a happy geet in d end..lovd it

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

part 4 lovely update geet was fast asleep the servants were oogling at her she was sacred nakul didnty liked how men were staring at her when mr arrogant came and shouted at th commotion in his home he wanted geet to leave his home geet didnt know where to go then seeing a maid she came with an idea she asked nakul whether se can work as a maid nakul liked the idea since he didt wanted geet to leave he asked maan whether geet can work as a maid he agreed nakul explained her everything she listened and was happy to stay in mansion