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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 22- geet is very much affecting by maans closeness same with maan but they cant voice it maan saw geets dress it really hurt him because she didnt accept his gift he was thinking geet thought low of him here geet couldnt understand maans talk maan didnt like that woman called geet as a maid nice part

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 23-amazing update maan didnt like that ladys talk n took geet in his but couldnt face her here she thought he didnt want her working in km but maan stopped her glad that he asked her about that gift hope now he will undestand why she didnt take his gift thnx 4 update

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Awesome dear 👏 Thankgod maaneet cleared mu...Maan share his past ...Feeling bad for maan...aww geet is shy.waiting for next 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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thanks for the double updates
loved both parts
maan dragged her to his room and shut the door he didn't know why he dragger her with him other side geet was cluless about his behaviour maan suddenly left the rooma and went to OH to release his anger doing his favourite excirese geet was worred for maan she prepared coffee for him and went to OH maan saw her didn't speak anything
finally geet started saying that she will go away from there cause he wants
maan stopped geet and asked her not to go he asked her why she didnt accept his gift and why she went with out informing geet told him she thought that gift was not for her as sender name was there and asked why he wants to gift her maan started telling his lone life and how he suffered in his childhood all alone ...geet was not able to hear bad words about him she stopped him saying geet told him she will bring fresh tea for him started to leave maan stopped her saying dont she wants to know why he wanted to give the gift geet ran from there shying leaving a happy and new maan behind her

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Beautiful updates

Maan is clueless after taking Geet to his room

But he escaped without facing her

the misunderstanding between them r cleared

Maan also had a painful past

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 24 -amazing update atlast misunderstanding is over between them maan understood why she didnt take his gift but geet is still confused maan shared his past with her thats is really a big thing he consider her own thats why he shared i think maans uncle may be that man who wanted geet in orpange lovely update

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

hi thanks 4 updating! Chap 23 - lovely update, well written. Geet scared! Maan wld never hurt her! he goes 2 the outhouse! Maan wrking out! Geet goes there! they talk! she says she will leave as he wants her 2 go! he says no! he asks ys he went without telling him! she explains! his inner turmoil well portrayed! Maan says nothing is small regd her! both r battling with their feelings 4 each other! he asks abt the gift! she says she didn't knw it was 4 her! no name etc! y wld he give expensive gift 2 a maid?

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hi js read Part 24. awesome update! superbly written! Maan tells her y! he understands it was a mu! Maan reveals his past! Feeling 4 Maan! Geet comfirts him n then realises wt she is dng! Maan questions her bt she avoids n goes 2 get coffee 4 him! Maan at peace! She will tell him later! update soon