Untouched Desires link UPDATED (17 Dec)

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LM1991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Chapter 20: lovely update. Geet & Maan both realising the importance of each other in their lives.

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Avenging_Angel

@Avenging_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

So geet is back in km good
now waiting for maans reaction abt it
Nice update

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Part 21

Was Simply Fantastic

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

feeling sad for maan he stopping himself from getting addicted to her thinking one day she will leaves him alone
eagerly waiting for the next part

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

hi thanks 4 updating! js read Part 21 nw! superb emotional update! well written! Maan sees the lunch tiffin! he calls KM! She answers bt he doesn't say a word! Pinky gives him books 2 give 2 Geet! Maan angry n rude! Pinky says Geet is his servant! Maan upset! his inner turmoil well portrayed! Maan at home! Geet decides 2 keep a distance! she doesn't want 2 get hurt. Maan imagines her in the outfit! She asks y he didn't eat! Maan ignores! Geet sad! update soon

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Part 14-very nice part liked pinky she is very nice she helped her to make coffee geet didnt finish her studies n wants to read again pinky is really nice she is ready to help her hmm geet wants give card but couldnt buy

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Part 15- geet made a card for maan she was so scared to give him she thought maan wouldnt like it but he loved it very much geet even made launch for him lovely part

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Part 16-maaneet moments r so lovely maan was so eager for his launch geet made r fav pasta he liked it very much maan helped both r enjoying each other company first time geet called him by his he loved it he had made a wall around himself but slowly slowly geet is breaking it

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Part 17-lovely update first time maan gifting something to anyone great MSK was really nervous wow her friends came to meet her new warden seems nice maan helped her in studies

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Part 18-nice part maan going restless because geet didnt say anything about his gift here geet didnt understand who gave her the gift she gone to her orpange for some days but when girl started talk about maan she didnt like it looks like she was missing maan he also came from office n saw her missing what will be his reaction now