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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow lovely omg thrilling thud update..te way dev trapping my maan and his words fuming my maan and wne he said tat how he try to touch my maan ki geet his anger was lovely..dev u digging ur own grave..te way other side geet ki agner seeing nt and she want to kill her but waiting to meet my maan was lovely..my maaneet on te watch and using it, nice..thank god adi saw geet with nt and now saw nattu adi got alert..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan couldnt do anything
he just follows dev so he doesnt harm geet
n maan using his watch to rec the cheap act of his
n geet too gained conscious
n nt taking her to maan
adi saw geet
he is searching maan
n asked help from sam
now all searching maneet
hope they will find maneet soon
i have a feel
maan is going 2 stand on his own legs in shock
n to save geet
awesome part

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! Hate NT n Dev! Geet forced to go with NT! Dev has Maan! Sam n Adi worried! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohh...good both have ...started der ...camera ..recorder i gues...
thank god ..adi saw geet moving wit nt..nd he aleerted sam...and dey got into action..
creap chepos...
hope ... sam nattu n adi will b able to trace ..dem before its ...too late or dey harm maneet..

me wiaitn for next part..
cont soon ...
waitin
wiaitn
wiaitn
di,...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Aise cliff hanging position pe chor k chale gaye kiun!!!! :'(
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
Maaneet fallen in devs trap ... Sam and adi r searching Maan ... .
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
where r u????
kal update nehi ki
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hello friends
Updating





Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

The Bliss




The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


.

Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 58



Part - 59

All wr in dark nd roaming here nd there asking about Maan ,, it was easy to ask Maan bcoz now most of d students knew him bcoz of his wheel chair ,, it was eve nd staff nd students started going out managing in rain ,, some wr drenching nd some wr using raincoats ,, Adi nd Sam wr asking about Maan to staff nd students in main lobby which was d common exit point for max ppl ,, but all wr inside d room nd didn't see him ,, d college was almost empty nd only cleaning staff nd peons wr there who wr cleaning d rooms nd closing them ,, when they started started going out Sam nd Adi started asking then nd to their luck one gave a shocking info that he saw Dr D with a wheelchair man nd Dr D was moving that towards back side in corridor .

Sam: Dr Dev with Maan nd that to at back side

She ran toward that side with Adi ,, search all around but got nothing there ,, Sam got Dr J call nd called her to go home but Sam's worried nd breaking words alerted him .

Sam: j o hn ,, whe re r u ? s tay the re ,, I m com ing .

Dr J : what happen , why r u huffing ,, r u all right sam ?

Sam: j ohn ,, MK is missing ,, we search him every where but don't know where is he ?

Dr J: what missing ,, Sam ,, MK was with me u know nd after that he went to his lab ,, check there , or call him .

Sam nd adi wr coming towards Dr J office nd she was talking to him ,, she found him out of his office nd rushed to him panicked .

Sam: John ,, see adi is here nd don't know where is MK ,, he never go anywhere without him ,, his phone was coming switched off nd a peon said that he saw Maan with Dr Dev Mahajan ,, DR D was moving his chair towards back side ,, I m fearing , plzz do something .

Dr J: what ? did u check all d possible places ,, where is Dr Geet , she cn be with him .

Adi: no she went out with Mrs Mahajan .

Sam: these things r suspicious John ,, Geet never go out with NT nd MK with Dr Dev that was more fearing ,, even Geet's phone was coming switch off .

Dr J: both's , strenge , nd they didn't contect nd informed Adi ?

Sam: John, Geet had some fear about MK nd she hinted me nd Natrajan to be careful about MK .

When they wr talking Natrajan called Sam nd said that he got nothing ,, there Adi got call from DM who asked when they wr coming nd why Maan's phone was switch off ,, worried nd tensed Adi told DM everything which shook DM nd said that she was coming in insti ,, Dr J was d HOD nd Maan's mentor too , so he cdn't move ,, Dr J was starting fearing .

There in same place but away from there d two ppl wr playing their ugly game ,, d weather was bad nd none cn reached here easily ,, Geet was scaning d area but it was new for her, but she understood that this place was at a lonely area of insti ,, she was following NT nd then they reached at a enternce of a deserted small building ,, d gate was broken nd dim light was coming from inside ,, NT entered nd pushed Geet to move ahead ,, Geet galred at her but she cdn't say her anything at this crucial time ,, she had to meet Maan 1st .

Geet: where is Maan?

NT: go in , nd see .

Geet moved in that side from where d light was coming ,, there was heaps of debris nd burnt material ,, smelly ,, she feared looking all around ,, d weather nd thundering was making d place more scary ,, she reached in a hall , burnt hall nd there she saw Maan in d mid nd Dev gave a winning smile .

Dev: welcome in hell Dr Geet singh ,, ur hell partner was eagerly waiting for u .

Geet rushed towards Maan scared : M a a n ,, tum theek ho na ?

Maan cupped her face : G e e t ,, haan , mei theek hu , aur tum?

Dev: but for few min ,, then ur game'll be finish ,, thanks tara ,, everyhting is fine ?

NT : yes , now what Dev ?

In between Geet saw that Dev had broken Maan's lappy nd his folders wr lying there on floor along with his bag ,, means he wanted to destroy Maan's work again ,, she slowly pressed d key of her watch , this was d best time to get their convo,, she kept her bag behind Maan'd back nd saw that NT handed her phone to Dev .

Dev: see this place tara ,, this is d best place to buried them here for ever,, none cn find their bones.

NT scared: r u sure we'll be safe after this ? if we ..

Dev: did any one knew what we did before ,, even not he d genius MK ? last time my luck didn't work nd he escaped from that accident , but not this time .

Geet nd Maan groaned in anger : so that was u behind that acci u B******,, I had doubt .

Dev: shut up , girl , u knew too much so u'll also go with him this time .

Dev came near Geet raising his finger at her but Geet snapped his hand nd gave a punch on his face ,, Dev was not ready for that nd trembled ,, his nd geet's phone fell down from his hand , but he composed himself nd slapped Geet hard ,, Geet trembled nd fell on ground ,, dev marched to her , held her hand nd twisted back , groaning in anger .

Dev: how dare u ,, u hit me ,, i'll kill u B****.

Maan roared : Dev ,, leave her ,, u enmity is with me ,, spare her ,nd talk to me .

Dev smirked: she is also become a big threat to me , so have to settle score with her too ,, she showed me attitude .

He dragged Geet near Maan nd geet grabbed her phone from d floor while dev was dragging her ,, In between Dev's phone buzzed which was on floor , but he didn't pic ,, he tried to snatch Geet dupatta to tie her with one hand nd with other hand he was holding Geet's wrist ,, that was a chance for Geet ,, Dev was bent a lit for her dupatta nd Geet hit his eye with d free hand which has her phone too ,, d hit was hard nd then one more ,, NT's phone buzzed nd that was from Dr J ,, she was scared seeing Dev nd Geet's fight nd seeing d call she frightened more .

NT : dev Dr John's phone .

Dev: What ,, don't pic ,, nd go out ,, if they call again then say that we r at home nd make any reason .,, go out , i'll see them.

Geet got d opportunity ,, she got up nd pushed him back switched on her phone nd threw in Maan's lap ,, Dev groaned nd absued her nd rushed to hit her , but this time Geet came in her form ,, she was a taekwondo expert ,, she held Dev's hand in mid nd gave a kick on his private part ,, NT phoned buzzed again nd scared she rushed out ,, fear started engulfing her ,, d game was turning ,, geet was becoming hard to handle nd that cd be dangerous for them .

Geet pushed dev back nd shout : Maan pressed S key in my phone ,, fast ,, I m holding him nd then 100 ,, jaldi ,, Maan did that nd that was Sam no .

Dev got that d game was slipping from his hands ,, he never thought that geet cd fight back ,, he thought that Maan is on wheel chair nd geet is a fragil girl nd he cd handle them easily .

He was also a man of good physic so gathered his energy nd started facing geet gave her punch in her tummy nd holding her hand nd then pushed her back hard ,, run towards Maan to stop him calling , but this time Maan came in action when Dev came near him to snatch d phone Maan hit him from his leg ,, in between sam pick d call seeing Geet's name ,, Dev attacked on Maan hitting his chair back with his leg ,, but Geet stopped that from back ,, there Sam was speaking on phone .

Sam: geet ,,,, geet ,, where r u ? geet .

Geet: Maan baat karo ,, baat karo jaldi .

NT was shivering near d door seeing all this ,, Dev absued nd run to attack on Maan , but Geet held him in mid nd started pushing back ,, Maan was fearing for geet too but he replied Sam .

Maan: hello Sam ,, Sam we r trapped by Dev,, come fast .

Sam gasped : what ,, r u ok ,, where is geet ?

Dev roared : Tara stop him,, snatch d phone ,, go.

Feard NT run towards Maan but Maan's burning glares was enough for her to stop at her place .

Maan: Sam we r in old deserted Mortu of Hspltl ,, come fast with police , plzz fast .

Dev groaned : no , not at all ,, I wont live u,,Tara u bloody B**** , took that can of petrol nd threw at him ,, go ,, MK , if I'll lost then i'll make u lose too ,, agar hum nahi to tum bhi nahi ,, i'll turn everything in to ash .


Precap --- termination ...

Part - 60


sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

where r u????

kal update nehi ki


aai hi nahi.. sorry
giving both d update ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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