Maaneet SS:Inseparable hearts:Last Part Pg 139 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
1st part was nice . maan's wife is no more ..but whts her name ? I m sure she is not geet *fingr crssd* :p pari is maan's child . a cute n understnding baby ...pari is sad coz her fav teacher mrs . smith not going to attend her classes anymore ...i think new teachr will be geet *hope so * lol
U know one thing we Bengali's call "dida" instead of "dadi" ..so pari calling her grandmother dida it was a sweet shock for me :D
Thnx for d pm dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Congrats on becoming IF Rokerz 👏 ...sry i am late 😒

part 1 was lovely
1 ques...is Maan's wife Geet? 😆 i know this mystry will be unfold only when the story progress 😉 Maan 16 times replaced iphone 😆 😲 pari baby is cute 😃 awww...baby missing her fav teacher 😛 the way she talked to the wind chime as if she is taking to her mom was emotional 😭 Loved the way she is calling her dadi as dida 😳
😲 😲 Maan seeing a similar lady as Geet oops his wife 😆
Thank you for lovely update 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Lovely part... I hv fall in love with cutie Pari... Full of live.. Wondering what hv happen to maan wife... Pari missing her favourite teacher n pray to her mom to send her good teacher.. While at Pari school maan saw a person similar to his soul mate... Can't wait for the story to progress.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
nice start ,... continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
interesting concept...
Liked it ...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Fabulous Update

Maan always manages to break his iphone screen ...uff poor guy
Maan has been married and now has a little girl that looks just like her mum .
Maan's soul mate has died leaving him and his daughter but now his life is his daughter and it also seems that they always conversing with her mum
Maan cannot see his daughter sad and he encourages her that she will also get a good teacher this term as he stands at the school he sees his soul mate again but again he knows that she is died so it must be his illusion

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: doll.12

Got it...at start it was happy happy but then geet was now dead.. Maan have their daughter with him.. Pari.. She talks to her mom .. She believes that her mother is seeing them.. Ooh poor soul.. Maan really miss her but she is no more.. Pari Is missing her teacher which treated her like her own daughter.. Maan boosted up.. WooaahhH. He saw a female which was exactly like his soul mate.. Oohh wait.. Did u mention that the mother was geet ??.. So.. I think they are not confirm of her death or their is some mystery??.. Or she is her replica??..waiting for another one

Your doubts will be cleared as the story proceeds 😉😆 Thanks a lot for commenting 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

lovely start maan is a professor n he has a daughter but his wife is no more he loved his wife very much liked pari so sweetly she talk to wind as her mother her faviourite teacher gone so she was sad last part was interesting maan saw someone just like his soulmate nice start thnx 4 pm

Correction : Maan is an Architect 😉 I think you misread the lines 'Professional Architect' as professor 😆 Thank you for commenting 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: samidsamid

awsm updt...so her nw teacher will be hr mooms alike...its jus a thought...maan is really caring...and love his soulmate...updt soon...thanx fr pm dear

Thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: krati5

lovely update!!! totally good... well described and in first part only it captures my interest..

Glad you loved it. Thanks 😳

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