Maaneet SS:Inseparable hearts:Last Part Pg 139 - Page 18

I loved it! A bit confusing, but that is to be expected in the first 2 chapters. I am really excited to read about the past and what connection Geet and Maan have. I can';t wait for the next update!

Loved both part want happen to then that man. Thing geet pass away and geet thing Mann belong to simebidy else want sad thing and there daughter pari

Prologue and Part 1

Part 2

Awesome update its seems a biggest misunderstanding maan thinks his soulmate is dead n geet on the other hand think he is with someone else !!waiting for story to unfold what had actually happened in their past !!

waiting to read what happens next and what happened in past that they have to live separately, update soon

interesting update... Liked it ...

Superb update . this story took a compl u turn yr ..I mean we were thinking about only two thing ..maan's wife was dead or geet is going to be the new teacher of pari . but u took a u turn ..geet is maan' geet n pari's mom ? Ohhooo !! Impressive Roch ..now m egrly ..wating to know the past ...continue soon...

Nice update pari going to school her class teacher is geet pari like geet geet shared her oreo biscuit to pari geet remember her daughter seeing pari

Originally posted by: --mittu--

Finally u updated 😆
such a lovely update 😃
loved the way kids finding it difficult to pronounce Geet's full name 😆
Wow..pari liked her new teacher's voice and then her Name to same as her Mom 😳
Geet feeling a connection with Pari 😃
and hearing the name Pari...she remembered HIM 😊
aww...pari and geet moments were lovely 😃
the cutepie asking not to tell her dad that she ate the Oreos 😆
i thought how can Maaneet meet this much fast 😆 but correctly u stopped their meeting 🤣
Maan happy that his daughter is fully happy 😃
and the cutepie narrated everything that happened in the school 😳
and hearing Geet's name Maan is numb
and here Geet is living with Meera 😃
Geet thinking abt her Pari and Maan 😭

okay time for sm doubts 😆 i know u will reveal everything as the story progress. ..phir bhi 😉
y Pari haven't seen her Mom's pictures 😕
Did Maaneet have a fi8 i the past
Geet thinking Maan moved on with smone
and here Maan thinking about Geet

now eagerly waiting to know what happened in the past that made Get to think thatMaan moved with smone and her baby is no more 😊

and read ur long Note too 😆
U said abt the errors in Names na...i shall say my pov too
i know its difficult to check each and everything be4 posting...but the characters name hold imp value in the story and while reading the changes in name na suddenly will distract me (sry my prob 😆 ) mostly prob won't be there for me with the name Madhu as DD'S face come but that Rishab will entirety change my mood for me reading story keeps my Maaneet alive and i can't tell its just a mere story...each story is precious for the readers too 😃 me sounding crazy na 😆 but can't help 😛
just said my pov...sry if ithurts u 😭

ufff...its 1 of my ever biggest comments 😆

Whoa Disha your feedback looks longer than my update 😲🤣 Just kidding! Thanks a lot for your lovely feedback 🤗 I checked the update & edited the names! I'm really really sorry for the name mistakes I know it affects the reader 🤔 I'll try my best to minimize those mistakes in the further update. 👍🏼 Thanks for being a loyal reader & your comments are motivating me to write more 😳 When I finish writing a story I just command myself not to write another soon but I just can't help it 🤣 Thanks for all the love & support! ❤️It means a lot to me 😳