Maaneet SS:Inseparable hearts:Last Part Pg 139

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Roch so awesome yr...
I love love love the interaction between pari and geet very much...I m now desperately waiting to know about maaneet past... I think some big misunderstanding spoil a beautiful relationship... waiting to know more update soon

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

That was a wonderful update! I'm really looking forward to knowing the past behind Maan and Geet. I actually already have a few scenarios in my head 😆
I'm not sure if this counts as constructive criticism especially because you apologized for it already but I would just say if anything needs to fixed it's just fixing the wrong names. I was confused at first as to why Pari kept referring to Geet as Madhu but when I read your note I understood.
I was an avid GF user but I've went MIA for a while now. So I'm back for now and I just wanted to say I totally enjoyed reading your update 😊
I'm extremely sorry if I sounded rude or mean about the constructive criticism. I know writing takes a lot of time and I may have sounded unappreciative but honestly there's no constructive criticism to say especially when you write flawlessly! Again I apologize please do not take it negatively

Edited by lil.mizz.smexii - 10 years ago

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Amazing update ...loved the pari antics the way she close eyes n hope for best

pari-geet moments wow

ooops is their MU b/w maaneet ...waiting for next update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Geet feels some connection 2 Pari! Geet is Pari's teacher! Pari is happy! Geet made things easier! Geet thinks her duagher is dead and that maan moved on! Poor Geet! update soon, well written

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Hey i read all thr parts at a go

Really liked it

Will wait for the next part

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

is dere some misunderstanding b/w maan n geet...

awesome n cute update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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taanee

@taanee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

OREOs...loved it..

maan na geet ko choora ya geet na maan ko ????

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Oh what a start! Maan and his IPhone😆 The poor phone has kissed the floor too many times it has surely lost count😉

What a lovely bond Maan has with Pari. Loved how Pari talked to her mum in the morning. Children that age do sometimes get very attached to teachers and Pari seemed to be very fond of Mrs Smith. Hopefully her new teacher will be just as nice and help settle her down.

Maan thinks he has seen his other half but is he really seeing things?

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Pari is scared to meet her new teacher and doesn't open her eyes until the last moment. She is then happy to find a pretty young teacher who has the same name as her mums. Loved how she thanked her mum for sending her a nice teacher.

I got confused why Pari called her Madhu - is this an error or did I miss something?

Geet is feeling nostalgic when she talks to Pari as it reminds her of her past, her love and her baby who they were going to name Pari.

Both Maan and Geet are missing each other but one seems to think the other has died whereas the other seems to think their soulmate has moved on with someone else. I wonder how the misunderstanding arose.

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#160

hmmm...iam a little confused about geet and maan's past but hopefully next updates will clear them...
pari got a teacher that she likes and which reminds her of her mom...
geet was maan's wife and is pari's mom...what happened ????
maan is happy with his little girl happiness...
waiting !!!!!